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| I Want To Be Cooler; Cooler | |
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| Topic Started: Aug 27 2007, 03:05 AM (352 Views) | |
| Anubis | Aug 27 2007, 03:05 AM Post #1 |
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Character you wish to be: Cooler Planet you want to start on: Earth (For Saiyans) Fighting Style you wish to have: (For Aliens) Stat you wish increased by +5: How did you find this site:Dbzhevan What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: to be the strongest in the universe, for as-long as it takes. AIM Screen Name (required): Cooler Email (required):anubis_8500@yahoo.com Name registered on forums (required): Anubis Please include a small example of a roleplay that you might have done in the past. Must be above 300 words. (Required) as my ship lands on this miserable planet i open the mach to glance at the planet im going to destroy, i walk twords a little shack as i charge my palm for a energy blast, two villagers runs out of the back screaming, I rase my hand and release the energy freely from my grasp, boom the shack explodes and haf the land as-well, hahahahaha, the end is now for this miserable planet. as the villagers were running i sale them, i tern towards the screaming humans and raised one finger and released a death beem, watching it rip rite threw the both of them, destroying them is fun i must do more or my enjoyment hahahaha, i go to the nerest toun dustroing everything and every ong i see, nuthing can stop me not even goku ha this is a new and inprooved Cooler as you see hahaha, im back from the nether weald and i will have revenge once more, i sync some form of strong energy coming towards me hmmm its nothing to concern myself about, o its goku huh you have the slittiest clew on what i learned do you soupier saiyan haha im in my 4th transformation now but there more, im going to show them to you and your going to die aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, Goku: what is that its impassable. Cooler: hahahaha your finished, Dark Energy Blast, evaporating goku and half the planet in one blast, darn that wasn't fun ow-ell good luck in HFIL, hahahahaha i must finish this boring planet off with a bang haha, collecting energy as i fly up towards the sun the energy ball swing faster in this state, by by earth i swing my arms back and release the massive energy ball towards the earth leafing hahahaha boom the earth and the moon evaporates, Game over or earth as i fly towards the mother ship. |
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| typhoonchaos | Aug 27 2007, 04:31 AM Post #2 |
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Saiyajin Space Pirate
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Pinned topics mean that people have been approved, just not added to the roster page yet. That means you'll have to pick a new character. Also, your grammar seems horrible, without any proper capitalization, and you're speaking in first person present tense as apposed to the correct third person past tense. And even then, you're not using any punctuation (which means you've got a 300 word run on sentence), you misspelt 20 words out of the some odd 270 (I didn't count. I'm guessing here) which means you mis spelt almost one in every seventeen words, managing to get a triple word fail with "nerest toun dustroing." For me, this raises a few questions: 1 - Are you fucking serious? 2 - Are you retarded? 3 - Holy shit are you even passing English? 4 - Is English even your first language? 5 - If your typing reflects your grammar, then how do you even understand what the fuck is going on in DragonBall Z? |
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| Oldvegeta2 | Aug 27 2007, 04:39 AM Post #3 |
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I'm pretty sure you write your RP's in the third person. IE, ' Vegeta's ship landed gently on the surface of the planet he had been sent to destroy, he looked out across the open dirt fields, "What a waste land," he muttered to himself......' Not, 'I jump out of my ship....' and you might want to run your RP's through a Spell Check If you do not understand how it should look IM me at JGimbarti and I'll see what I can do to help. |
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