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| Topic Started: Aug 29 2007, 08:59 PM (253 Views) | |
| favre | Aug 29 2007, 08:59 PM Post #1 |
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Character you wish to be: King Cold Planet you want to start on: Frieza (For Saiyans) Fighting Style you wish to have: (For Aliens) Stat you wish increased by +5: How did you find this site: Google What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: I used to play them years ago and decided i want to get involved in them again. As long as possible. AIM Screen Name (required): Lewisbrown04 Email (required): favreqb04@hotmail.com Name registered on forums (required): Favreqb04 Please include a small example of a roleplay that you might have done in the past. Must be above 300 words. (Required) King Cold stands an empty area with just Goku in front of him. Mountains everywhere the wind is blowing Goku’s hair as they stare at each other. "I think its time for you to die my friend..." says King Cold. "Ha, give me your best shot!" Goku Replies. Goku and King Cold get into their fighting stances. "Oh that’s a big mistake you little PUNK!" King Cold screams. King cold charges at Goku and goes to punch him in his face, Goku dodges the punch and proceeds to kick King Cold in his stomach. King Cold flies against a mountain as rocks fall everywhere and cover him up "How pathetic. He was easier then I thought." says Goku proudly. "IT’S NOT OVER YET!" King Cold shouts in the distance. King Cold screams as he flies out of the pile of rocks, and is floating still in the air. "Please...you thought you could get rid of me that easily?" King Cold asks with a smirk. Goku stands there stunned. "Now prepare yourself!" King Cold screams. King Cold charges up a purple energy blast and shoots it at Goku, Goku Jumps up in the air dodges it and in an instant king cold teleports behind Goku and kicks him in his back. Goku flies into the ground, then king cold begin shooting hundreds of energy blasts at Goku lying in the ground. "HAHAHAHHAHA!!! You fool!" King Cold screams. As the smoke clears Goku is just laying there unconscious. King Cold flies down next to him and gives him a couple kicks. "I guess you’re not as strong as they say huh Goku?" King Cold asks. King Cold points his finger out as a small beam shines on the tip of his finger. He shoots it through Goku's head instantly killing him. "Now that you are gone I can go and take over the universe! hahaha! I will be starting with planet earth. Now...what should I go to destroy next?" King Cold says King Cold flies up in the air and searches for the nearest down and just begins destroying everything in sight. "These humans are just pathetic. They are so weak and futile. They just stand absolutely no chance against me. It’s like taking candy from a baby." King Cold says King Cold flies down to a nearby civilian hugging his daughter in fear. "Look at you...pathetic. You can’t even defend yourself you just curl up in a ball and cry like a baby." King Cold says in an angry way. "Please...don’t hurt me..." A Civilian begs. "Okay I won’t." King Cold says with a smirk. King Cold grabs the man's daughter throws her up in the air and charges up and energy blast that hits her and completely destroys the girl. "Well...I didn’t hurt you as you asked." "Hahahaha!" King Cold says. King Cold flies away and continues his destruction of earth |
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| OldGohan2 | Aug 30 2007, 01:10 PM Post #2 |
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*Slow, Solo Clap* That's.. good.. I mean the whole thought is great but the spelling is totally bad, maybe it's because I just done a big spelling test today and I'm abit sensitive on spelling hehe, but I did see a few spelling mistakes, like quite a few.. Good luck nonetheless. |
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| favre | Aug 31 2007, 10:51 PM Post #3 |
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yeah i was in a hurry sorry |
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| typhoonchaos | Sep 2 2007, 05:47 AM Post #4 |
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Hmm.... You should definetly work on your spelling. That, and you're writing in a script format as opposed to a story book format. A book is written in sentences, using quotations, paragraphs, and the like. It also uses third person past tense. Try using that. |
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| favre | Sep 2 2007, 06:40 PM Post #5 |
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well sample roleplay from before that was a sample from when i was in another league and i had to add alittle bit more...it never said it had to be story format i never knew |
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| favre | Sep 2 2007, 07:04 PM Post #6 |
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i just edited it |
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