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Joining With Original Character
Topic Started: Sep 22 2007, 08:20 PM (608 Views)
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You said a custom character had to be either a Namekian or a human, is a character who was born a human but obtains Saiya-Jin power through artifical means allowed as well. If not I understand but please read about my character first before disaproving because I put a lot of thought into him. Oh yeah I hope it dosn't confuse people that I'm using the Japanese terms like Saiya-Jin, if it is a problem I'll change it.

Character you wish to be: Masahiko Keisuke(Last name first)

Planet you want to start on: Earth

How did you find this site: I was searching for a good Dragon Ball/Z/GT RPG site on google and I found this

What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: I love RPG's and I plan on staying as long as possible

AIM Screen Name (required): BLaddict

Email (required): chibirabidyaoifangirl@gmail.com

Name registered: BLlover

Okay now that I got that done let me tell you a bit about Keisuke

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Masahiko Keisuki was born the bastard child of his mother, who was already married to another man, Keisuke’s stepfather, when she had him. Keisuki’s stepfather, Mr. Masahiko had a daughter, Miho whom Keisuke loved dearly. Keisuke was born with a strange ailment that didn’t let him use too much energy, and kept him in the hospital bed for most his life. He rarely got visits and when he did it was either from his mom and step-father together, who spent the time fighting about if it was worth the time and money to keep Keisuke there, or sometimes his mom went by to see him alone and went though cycles of rage and love as she blamed him for all the troubles in her life as well as called him a blessing. She had hit him a few times but always apologized afterwards and Keisuke never had the heart to hate her. When ever he was alone with his stepfather Keisuke was always verbally insulted and called trash, and saying he doesn’t deserve the right to live. Despite this Keisuke was determined to live life with a positive attitude, especially after seeing his younger half sister for the first time when he was 10 and she was 4. He knew he had to be strong for his little sister, if he couldn’t smile for her, then he knew she would have a hard time finding light in the dark world their parents made for them. When Keisuke was just turning 11 his step-father stumbled into his hospital room drunk with a dagger and tried to kill Keisuki, but ended up only giving Keisuki a scar on his chest before an alarm went of. Before fleeing, Mr. Masahiko told the terrified 11 year old that if he told the police who put the scar on his chest, he would be putting his little sisters happiness in jeopardy. Still shocked at what happened, and heading what his step-dad told him, Keisuki didn’t tell the authorities about anything that happened that night. Later on Mr. Masahiko was contacted by a man named Dr Shina about sending Keisuke to him as a test subject and that he would not only be paid heavily, but he would be able to get rid of the boy forever. Mr. Masahiko agreed and Keisuke was sent to Dr Shina under the false description of getting medical help. Keisuke was then forced to go under a cybernation process as cybernetic parts replaced half of his body and the DNA of a Super Saiya-Jin was placed inside his body. These changes were very straining on Keisuke’s frail body and it took months of training to get to where even doing such mundane things like walking wouldn’t overcome his body as the stronger DNA of the Saiya-Jin tried to destroy him from the inside. Keisuke loathes Dr. Shina for making him what he is know but can’t do anything about it since Dr. Shina threatens Keisuke to make his sister go through the same treatment if Keisuke doesn’t obey him like an obedient dog. Keisuke has unlimited power stored in his body because of the unique blend of DNA he has but that is also his weakness as accessing that power destroys his body bit by bit form the inside. He has trained 5 years under Dr. Shina’s orders and can oppose most Saiya-Jins for about 10 minutes without collapsing from the side effects of his power. He has now been given the mission to fight the Saiya-Jins to prove he is the best fighter.
Personality:
At first glance Keisuke is a light-hearted and positive person who never had anything go wrong in his life. This is just a front though as anyone who is able to get close to him will realize he is a shattered soul who doesn’t even know what he is fighting for. He hates Dr. Shina, and yet is emotionally dependent on him because he not only took Keisuke out of the prison of the hospital but also gave Keisuke a reason to live just by giving him missions. Although Keisuke wants more than anything to get out of Dr. Shina’s grips he is terrified of leaving Shina at the same time, refusing all help from those trying to help him leave fearing that he lose purpose in life.
Information on Fammily and Dr. Shina:
Masahiko Miho: Keisuke’s younger half-sister, she is very innocent and naïve and believes there is good in every body and every thing. Dr. Shina has her under complete surveillance and threatens to make her go under the same transformation Keisuke went through if he doesn’t follow his orders. Keisuke would do anything for his sister, even trying to kill earth’s saviors.
Masahiko Hino (Mother): She is the mother of both Miho and Keisuke. She loves and hates her son because he reminds her of the man she loved, and the man who deserted her. When she is with Keisuke her emotions are unstable and she may be hitting him one minute and hugging him the next.
Masahiko Juno (Step-Father): He hates Keisuke for being his wife’s bastard child. He views Keisuke as the leftover of the parasite, Keisuke’s real father, left over after he intruded in the Masahiko household. Mr. Masahiko doesn’t hide this fact as he verbally abuses Keisuke and had once tried to kill him. He is the one who agreed to let Dr. Shina experiment on Keisuke.
Father:unknown
Dr. Shina: the Scientist who made Keisuke what he is today. He is a sadist and enjoys watching people in pain. Even though he is not widely known Dr. Shina is the best scientist on earth, his preference to stay in the background however kept him from being discovered. When Dr. Shina heard about Dr. Gero’s trouble with the Saiya-Jins, and how the ones who were half-human seemed to have the potential to have even more power than the originals he got some Saiya-Jin DNA and started a project to make the strongest fighter. He enjoys playing with Keisuke’s emotions and sees him as a ‘play-thing’. He likes making situations where Keisuke can get close to the Z-fighters only to have to fight them, adding more emotional distress to Keisuke.

And for my sample RPG, it's set in the first few years of Keisuke's training with Dr. Shina, I hope you like it.


Keisuki woke up with a jerk, “where am I…one minute I was training and then…” Kousuke mumbled trying to think what had happened to bring him from the training ground to the infirmary.

“You passed out, but thankfully you were able to get enough done today so you don’t have to be punished for you’re weakness,” Dr. Shina said as he walked into the infirmary.


Keisuke growled under his breath as the mad scientist got near him. He was now sitting on the infirmary bed he had been laying on.

“Aww don’t be like that Keisuke-chan, I’m just trying to make my sweet little puppy stronger” Dr. Shina said in an overly sweet voice as he called Keisuke by the nickname he gave the boy.

“I am not you’re sweet little dog and I don’t have to take you pretending to be nice!” Keisuke yelled as he jumped off the bed, cringing slightly as the pain of getting up so fast after his injuries.

“You shouldn’t get up, you know you’re body can’t stand such straining activities” Dr. Shina said pouting a little.

“I said stop trying to act nice! I know you are just using me so talking like that…. it makes me, makes me…I just hate you!!!” Keisuke exclaimed. He ran past Shina, ‘why does every time he talk that way a part of me feels guilty for hating him, he is the one who made me like this, a creature whose body is always aching as it’s being eaten away from the inside’ Keisuke thought as he rushed out of Shina’s base, finally stopping when he reached a river. Exhausted, he laid down and closed his eyes for a minute as he let the sound of the river drown his problems away.

“Are you okay?” said a voice interrupting Keisuke’s sleep.

Keisuki lazily opened one eye to look at who called him; it was a guy with black spiky hair, an orange suit and a happy-go-lucky attitude that seemed to radiate from him. “I’m fine, I’m just resting a bit” Keisuke answered the stranger as he sat up.

“That’s good, I saw you running earlier and you seemed kinda distressed so I wanted to see what was wrong” The man said smiling.

Keisuke could only stare at the man in confusion, not use to people showing genuine concern for him.

“Oh yeah, my names Son Goku by the way” Goku said hopping to make the red-headed teenager more comfortable, he didn’t even know why he was talking to him but he just felt that the boy desperately needed someone to talk to at the moment.

“My names Masahiko Keisuke,” Keisuke said smiling, “it’s a pleasure to meet you.” Keisuke tried to stand up but fell quickly fell down, thankfully though Goku was able to catch him.

“Are you okay?” Goku asked a concerned look on his face.

“Yeah, it’s just my body has always been kinda weak so doing too much activity is hard on it, and apparently I overdid my limit for today.” Keisuke said blushing slightly, he smiled softly to assure Goku he was okay.

“But if you’re body is that weak, should you really be out alone like this?” Goku asked, slightly surprised at the will power of the teen he was holding who could so easily accept such unfair circumstances.

“Don’t worry about me, I’m used to it by now, besides I don’t want to impose on kind strangers” Keisuke said sounding a little cheerful.

“Well if you say so, but I just feel bad leaving you here on your own when you can’t even stand” Goku said looking worried.

“Don’t worry, I will take care of him, he should of known not to wander too far of” Dr. Shina said as he walked towards Goku.

“Who are you?” Goku asked Dr. Shina suspiciously, he felt an evil aura around the white haired doctor who had the appearance of a young teenager.

“My name is Dr. Shina, I take care of Keisuke-chan, and I just want to take him back to the hospital” Shina said, mixing truths with lies.

“Are you okay with that Masahiku?” Goku asked Keisuke, still suspicious of the person in front of him.

‘If I say no maybe Goku-san would help me finally leave Dr. Shina, what am I thinking I can’t do that to Goku, him just being nice to me is more than I could ever ask for. No I have to take this chance, I need to get out and if Goku helped then I’d be, be what, I don’t have anywhere to go, or anyone to turn to. I’m useless by my self, but if I stay with Shina, I at least have a purpose to get stronger, with out that my life becomes useless…’ Keisuke went through an internal strugle as he decided how to answer Goku’s question. “I am” Keisuke finally answered.

“Oh, okay then” Goku said as he set down Keisuke on the grass. “Well I’m of then, I hope to see you again, Keisuke” Goku said as he flew of in the sky.

“Bye, Goku” Keisuke said as he watched Goku fly away.

“Remember that face” Dr. Shina said turning to face Keisuki, “ for he is one of the Saiya-Jin you will have to eventually fight, and kill.”
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An ass load better than the grand majority on here, including myself.

Alex should accept you soon, I know I would.
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Thanks, it took me a long time to come up with all that. I guess spending hours writing fanfiction has finaly paid of by making my writing a lot better than it use to be ^_^
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Now lets just hope we get more members to join who are as good... Maybe things will begin to get interesting...
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*Jaw hits the ground* Rarera ran ru rease ret ry raw rof ra round?
Okay, thats my mindless rabble over. I mean.. wow yea. That's great, better than me anyway, I'm sure Alex will accept you soon. Looking forward to having you with us.
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hehe...thanks, I love writing stories so I appreciate it when people think my writing skills are good
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Give credit where credit is due, but just one thing if you can.. Try and get AIM...
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I just got it, I am now BLAddict on AIM
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Wow you think you could help me with my roleplay example thing!!!!Like give me some tips????
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sure, what do you need tips on?



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nightmare92
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Just the whole thing I mean I can spell good its just the whole dialogue and strory thing im not all that great with????
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well for spelling I would advise you to do it in word so Spellcheck can help with spelling, as for the story and Dialog, well just try to think of somthing you're character would do, or say. Maybe involve them in a fight, or they are running away from something. Writing good stories does take a lot practice, and I might seem good but it took a lot of time for me to become a good writer.
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Ok well ill practice but let me ask u is i even worh it like after u get accepted what do u do or have u goten accepted yet because u seem like a good writer but what do u do after????
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nightmare92
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O yea and how do i find out what everybody look like?????
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I haven't been accepted yet but from what I have seen once you are accepted you can either do stuff like individual quest/stories or join a saga with multiple people, so baisicly you are writing stories by your self or with others :lol:
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O ok well im going to start practicin then????
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yeah, or you could take a class at the RPG school Forum, they can probaly give you better tips than I can.
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AIM me.

who, me or nightmare92
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your great, I mean hell yeah.
I thought that I could write pretty good, but after seeing that: I mean WOW I just have no words for it.
You are amazing plz can you read mine and give me some pointers?
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I thought that I could write pretty good

Let me go find a cliff to throw myself off of.

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