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| I Whould Like To Join As Jeice | |
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| Topic Started: Dec 5 2007, 04:40 PM (281 Views) | |
| JordanD | Dec 5 2007, 04:40 PM Post #1 |
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Character you wish to be:jeice Planet you want to start on:namek (For Saiyans) Fighting Style you wish to have: (For Aliens) Stat you wish increased by +5:speed How did you find this site:my friend told me What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying:as long as i'm jeice AIM Screen Name (required): HALOmonster1993 Email (required):HALOmonster1993@aol.com Name registered on forums (required): jeice Please include a small example of a roleplay that you might have done in the past. Must be above 300 words. (Required) It was a hot day on Namek Jeice was searching for dragon balls for his wish to rule the universe.Out in the distance Piccolo and Pikon were training.Pikon"Thunder Flash!!!!"Piccolo"Speical Beam Cannon!!!"As the two blasts collided it made a huge explosion.Jeice just happened to notice it and dashed over.Jeice"well well well if it isin't my little friend piccolo and who is this?"Piccolo"how dare you show your face on my planet."Piccolo"Pikon this ones personal leave him to me."Jeice"well are you just going to stand there because I have some Dragon Balls to find."Piccolo"you kill my family blow up my home kill my best friend.....YOU DIE NOW!!!!!!"Picolo"SPECIAL BEAM CANNON!!!!"Jeice teleports behind Piccolo and punches him.He keeps teleporting around him while punching Piccolo for about a minute.Then Piccolo starts punching back.Blood spurting everywhere then Jeice teleports up high in the sky.Jeice"CRUSHER BALL!!!"Pikon jumps in front of Piccolo and takes the hit.But it was two much for him and he was blown far away and slamed into a pile of rocks.which instantly kills him.As picolo gets up Jeice teleports down and starts punching the shit out of him.Picolo"ENOUGH!!!!!!"Picolo throws Jeice away.But Jeice teleports right backand knees him in the face.CRACK!!!Picolo's jaw broke.Then Jeice kicks him down to the ground.Jeice"CRUSHER BALL!!!"When the dust cleared Jeice looked around but Piccolo was gone.There was a humming sound comeing from behind Jeice.He turned around and was hit with speical beam cannon.As Jeice bent over piccolo dashed toward Jeice.Jeice looked in horror as piccolo came into view.With a powerfull rage Jeice summoned up all of his power into one last crusher ball.Piccolo was finnaly defeated.With all the energy he used Jeice blacked out.Two days later he woke up and a purple thing with horns was standing beside him.Jeice"where am I?Rest, your on my ship now. "My name is Captain Ginyu."To be continued. |
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| Semiazas | Dec 5 2007, 05:26 PM Post #2 |
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| disgraced hbk | Dec 5 2007, 07:53 PM Post #3 |
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ok her's some advice 1)make paragraphs with indents 2)use quotation marks 3)You have to say stuff like "Rest, You're on my ship now. I'm captian Ginyu" it would look good if you make these changes |
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| JordanD | Dec 5 2007, 07:56 PM Post #4 |
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ok thanks i'll do that |
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| Fasha | Dec 6 2007, 11:16 PM Post #5 |
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Change your title from: I Whould Like To Join As Jeice to: I would like to join as Jeice. Realistically Alex might just not even look at your Join Form no matter how good it is and fail you just because you used incorrect grammar and spelling in your title. |
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| JordanD | Dec 9 2007, 09:34 AM Post #6 |
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How when I go to edit it won' let me. |
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| Fasha | Dec 10 2007, 05:57 AM Post #7 |
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Edit the first post. |
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