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Topic Started: Dec 20 2007, 11:15 AM (277 Views)
ssolanki
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character u wish to be:Nail

planet u want to start on:Namek

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How did you find this site:Like other people i was also looking for a dbzrpg and through google i found this site.

What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying:I am a true dragon ball z fan and i would like to stay forever on this site.

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Preparation To Fight (part-1)


It was the the end.The whole universe was under the control of evil Frieza.His empire had many strong fighters.Only one man(Nail) was left who was capable of defeating the evil king.Nail lived in forest and stared training himself for the final battle.Nail said"even if get a very high powerlevel i will not be able to defeat Frieza .Frieza has a very high exprience so i will train hard,"He trained himself in high gravity and fought with many powerful fighters.Soon he decided to attack Friezas castle but he need a very powerful spaceship to reach there and only one man could help him in this task-Badruk.Nail said"i should checkout the spaceship,"
Nail said goodbye to his master(Guru)and started his quest.


The Fusion(part-2)


Badruk was a strong man and had a super sonic spaceship.Nail decided to steal his ship.It took him a month to find his place.Meanwhile he dicovered his new keokane attack.At Badruks place when he was just going to steal his ship he discoverad Badruk was his lost brother.Nail thougt he could help him defeat Frieza.
When Badruk retuned he told him he was his brother .Nail said"plz fuse with me so that we can defeat Frieza and free the universe,"After the fusion nail became super namek and his body grew bigger.Later he was ready to go.

The Final Battle(part -3)

He reached planet Frieza but to enter his castle he had to fight against his guards.
The guards were his old enimes-Jeice and Captain Ginyu.They said "nice to see u let us show u our new powers," They both charged up two massive balls of spirit energy,hurling them at Nail,but the bombs had no effect.Nail charged two big power discs(energy disc) and attacked them.Captain Ginyu doged but Jeice was cut in two halfs.Nail attacked him but captain ginyu used his ki attack on Nail.Nail lost his one hand.He collected all his power in a beam and killed him.

Frieza entered the secne.He was in full mood to fight with one handed Nail. After defeating Captian Ginyu Nail became a super Namek.He stared fighting with Frieaz but he was of no match with his super fast speed.Now he had to use his keokane attacks.Frieza charged a big ball and attacked Nail but with the help of keokane he was able to rebound it towards Frieza.Frieza was not able to sustain his own attack and died.Later Nail's hand grew back.


Now Nail is the storngest Namek in world and rules the whole universe.With the help of dragon balls he was able to call back all the dbz heros
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shen
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Hmm, put your RP through a spelling and grammar check. There's a lot of missing letters and capitols in there...otherwise...it'll pass
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disgraced hbk
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give it some Dialogue. And put detail into it.Instead of

"they both attacked them with their spirit bombs and it had no effect"

say "They both charged up two massive balls of spirit energy, hurling them at Nail, but the bombs had no effect whatsoever. Do that, and Ill give you a pass
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thanks :rolleyes:
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OldVeggie
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I'm agreeing with Dabura. It is passable if grammar and spelling is cleaned.
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