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| Topic Started: Dec 26 2007, 10:22 PM (232 Views) | |
| favre | Dec 26 2007, 10:22 PM Post #1 |
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Character you wish to be: Captain Ginyu Planet you want to start on: Namek (For Saiyans) Fighting Style you wish to have: (For Aliens) Stat you wish increased by +5: Strength How did you find this site: Google What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: I used to play them years ago and decided i want to get involved in them again. As long as possible. AIM Screen Name (required): Lewisbrown04 Email (required): favreqb04@hotmail.com Name registered on forums (required): Favreqb04 Please include a small example of a roleplay that you might have done in the past. Must be above 300 words. (Required) Captain Ginyu stands an empty area with just Goku in front of him. Mountains everywhere the wind is blowing Goku’s hair as they stare at each other. "I think its time for you to die my friend..." says Captain Ginyu. "Ha, give me your best shot!" Goku Replies. Goku and Captain Ginyu get into their fighting stances. "Oh that’s a big mistake you little PUNK!" Captain Ginyu screams. Captain Ginyu charges at Goku and goes to punch him in his face, Goku dodges the punch and proceeds to kick Captain Ginyu in his stomach. Captain Ginyu flies against a mountain as rocks fall everywhere and cover him up "How pathetic. He was easier then I thought." says Goku proudly. "IT’S NOT OVER YET!" Captain Ginyu shouts in the distance. Captain Ginyu screams as he flies out of the pile of rocks, and is floating still in the air. "Please...you thought you could get rid of me that easily?" Captain Ginyu asks with a smirk. Goku stands there stunned. "Now prepare yourself!" Captain Ginyu screams. Captain Ginyu charges up a purple energy blast and shoots it at Goku, Goku Jumps up in the air dodges it and in an instant Captain Ginyu teleports behind Goku and kicks him in his back. Goku flies into the ground, then Captain Ginyu begin shooting hundreds of energy blasts at Goku lying in the ground. "HAHAHAHHAHA!!! You fool!" Captain Ginyu screams. As the smoke clears Goku is just laying there unconscious. Captain Ginyu flies down next to him and gives him a couple kicks. "I guess you’re not as strong as they say huh Goku?" Captain Ginyu asks. Captain Ginyu points his finger out as a small beam shines on the tip of his finger. He shoots it through Goku's head instantly killing him. "Now that you are gone I can go and take over the universe! hahaha! I will be starting with planet earth. Now...what should I go to destroy next?" Captain Ginyu says Captain Ginyu flies up in the air and searches for the nearest down and just begins destroying everything in sight. "These humans are just pathetic. They are so weak and futile. They just stand absolutely no chance against me. It’s like taking candy from a baby." Captain Ginyu says Captain Ginyu flies down to a nearby civilian hugging his daughter in fear. "Look at you...pathetic. You can’t even defend yourself you just curl up in a ball and cry like a baby." Captain Ginyu says in an angry way. "Please...don’t hurt me..." A Civilian begs. "Okay I won’t." Captain Ginyu says with a smirk. Captain Ginyu grabs the man's daughter throws her up in the air and charges up and energy blast that hits her and completely destroys the girl. "Well...I didn’t hurt you as you asked." "Hahahaha!" Captain Ginyu says. Captain Ginyu flies away and continues his destruction of earth |
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| OldZorn3 | Dec 26 2007, 10:58 PM Post #2 |
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Looks good to me beside some gramatical errores, put it on word and if you dont have word check it over, you just need to wait till Zarbon/Alex to post |
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| ricanheat | Dec 26 2007, 11:16 PM Post #3 |
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I would work on your grammar a lot more also, instead of: Captain Ginyu grabs the man's daughter throws her up in the air and charges up and energy blast that hits her and completely destroys the girl. "Well...I didn’t hurt you as you asked." "Hahahaha!" Captain Ginyu says. I would put: catching the man off guard, Captain Ginyu proceeded to grab the human girl's scruffy neck and, in one quick motion, threw her up in the air while delivering a sharp kick to the panicked man's gut. As the girl flew into the skies, the alien lifted his arm straight into the air, his palms pulsating with a purple energy. To the human civilian's horror, the purple blast of ki shot upwards, and upon contact with the girl, disappeared in a huge explosion, sending the girl to the abyss see the dfference |
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| Old_Bebi | Dec 27 2007, 12:38 AM Post #4 |
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Yeah, it's good, but feels rushed. Still, I hope you improve, and get accepted. It'd be cool having a Captain Ginyu here that's truly evil. The other Ginyu Corps characters decided to go good, and I liked Ginyu. |
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| disgraced hbk | Dec 27 2007, 12:47 AM Post #5 |
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yea and if we got a reccome and Guldo to join, we could make the Ginyu Force. |
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| Old_Bebi | Dec 27 2007, 12:50 AM Post #6 |
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Well, considering some are good now, and this guy's evil, there'd be problems... "Now, men, go rape and pillage that town over there!" "...But sir, that doesn't seem very--" "Shut your wussy pie-hole and beat the shit outta those orphans!" "...I don't think i like you anymore..." "I'LL BREAK YOU IN HALF, BOAH!" |
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| disgraced hbk | Dec 27 2007, 12:54 AM Post #7 |
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Good point. Well then We'd only be the evil ones. And besides, Ginyu and Burter were the ony two in the Ginyu force with black chest armor. So we'd be the only two in the force |
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| Alex | Dec 27 2007, 01:23 AM Post #8 |
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Message me on AIM when you get a chance so I can accept you. |
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