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I'm Sorry But...
Topic Started: Feb 17 2008, 02:48 AM (286 Views)
Alex
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I'm sorry but I just HAD to post this. You know where it came from but I won't say the site's name. This post was made in response to a join form made on this site and was attempting to instruct the joinee how to become a better RPer. There are not that many words but I counted at least TWENTY errors in it. Hilarious... Here is the post:

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I won't force you cause it isn't really 100% nessecary but....

When you have dialoge, a suggestion is this:

"Goku, what are you doing!?" Exclaimed Piccolo (no period here?)

"Doing the only thing we have a choise to do!" Goku exclaimed back.

Basically, like you see in books, when people talk they arn't in on paragraph but in there on (wtf?) sentance. If someone talk's more the one sentance than its like this.

"Goku, what are you doing!?" Exclaimed Piccolo. "Do you realize you could die?"

"Doing the only thing we have a choise to do!" Goku exclaimed back. "I have to do what needs to be done and give it all my ki!"


Each time Piccolo "exclaimed" something, it was actually two errors. One for it being capitalized for no reason and the other because he was asking a question, not stating something, so it wasn't an exclamation. I also found the phrase "exclaimed back" particularly hilarious. Imagine if a teacher of yours wrote a paragraph at the end of your paper after grading it and it had 20+ errors in it. Would you take him seriously?
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Oh god- why did you do that ? Why would you ever do that? I still haven't stopped the bleeding, and I sincerely doubt my eyes will ever work the same after this!
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Man, and here I thought this thread was something unimportant like you saying we were going to shut down, but this is really something. Those aren't even 100 words, and 20 errors... Godfucked writing skills. The worst part is he apparently got in with such horrendous linguistics and is now allowed to force them onto others. It's a sad day for the English language...

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shen
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Who is Piccolo over in 'that site' anyways? I'd like to castrate him for wasting less than one minute of my life for reading this piece of crap that looked like a 5 year old wrote it.
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<CENTER><select><option>Dabura</option><option>Level: 12</option><option>EXP: 140</option><option>Location: Vegeta</option><option>Stats</option><option>Power Level: 12110</option><option>KI: 6055</option><option>Strength: 1545</option><option>Speed: 1432</option><option>Toughness: 1500</option><option>Stamina: 1496</option><option>Vitality: 1514</option><option>Zeni: 835</option></CENTER>
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If memory serves me correctly, and there were no changeups in the mean time, that would be VJ. You know, the pimp one.

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You know, I can't help but wonder if VJ is actually deliberately screwing up 'that site' over there lol.
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<CENTER><select><option>Dabura</option><option>Level: 12</option><option>EXP: 140</option><option>Location: Vegeta</option><option>Stats</option><option>Power Level: 12110</option><option>KI: 6055</option><option>Strength: 1545</option><option>Speed: 1432</option><option>Toughness: 1500</option><option>Stamina: 1496</option><option>Vitality: 1514</option><option>Zeni: 835</option></CENTER>
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Nah. Senka didn't even manage to do that, so I doubt Qutok would as much as make a dent.

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Alex
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That roleplay wasn't made by Piccolo. It was made by Cell.
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That roleplay wasn't made by Piccolo. It was made by Cell.

Wait, Cell as in the Cell that took over my body and ripped my face off and climbed out of me Cell?
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