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Alternate Dbz; should be fun
Topic Started: Jun 19 2008, 12:09 PM (643 Views)
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Ok so I'll post the first part of the show, and then the next person alters the next part.

i.e.

Poster 1: Goku and Gohan arrive at Roshi's house on the flying nimbus
Poster 2: Meanwhile, Raditz arrives on earth and meets the farmer, who offers him hospitality in his home. Raditz, being tired from a long journey, greatfully accepts.

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Goku and Gohan arrive at Roshi's house on the flying nimbus
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Raditz opens his saiyan pod in the upper atmosphere and with a grin decides talking Goku into returning isn't worth it cause he's probably dead so he decides to obliterate Earth.
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So Raditz returns to his space pod and flies it into space a little bit before realizing that based on the DBZ power system he isn't strong enough to blow it up. In his rage he flies back down onto earth and starts sending blasts all over the place.
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Krillin floating in the ocean on the last bit of the house that was once the Kame house looks up and sees thousands of blasts hitting the earth. Looking over he saw Goku floating. Checking his pulse he realized he was dead.
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So Goku has this 'wtf?' look on his face and Gohan's crying. Bulma, Krillin, Roshi, and the turtle are all dead. Raditz, done with his assualt, ignores this and returns back to his space pod, still pissed off.

Goku's like 'hey man, wtf do u think ur doin?' and he places Gohan on the ground as he flies over to Raditz and starts a fight.
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Krillin nearly drowns as Goku flew out of the water. Charging Raditz, Goku threw a punch but Raditz easily negated the strike and sent and elbow to Goku's face.
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As Raditz knocks Goku backwards with his elbow he realizes how similar Goku looks to his father and decides that he is the brother he has been searching for.

"Woah...dude, we're like bros!" He exclaims.
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Goku's eyes widened "Really? But you're ugly. How can we be related?"
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Raditz gets pissed off at his younger brother's remark and kicks him in the stomach, "at least I'm not weak! But look dawg, I gots this nice crib back on planet frieza with my homies Nappa and Vegeta. Its all good down ther."
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Goku looked up. "Man forget your Crib. I've got millions of Acres of land where we could battle all we want. Not to mention a room where we can spend 1 day in and get a years worth of training."
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Raditz stared into his brother's eyes, "SHUT. UP. Damn this place aint so bad afta all, but still, the gravity here is so low I'm gettin' a little air headed. You gotta come back and live wit ur family.
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Goku looked down and thought. "Well I am getting sick of these guys constantly coming to me when even the smallest badguy arrives. Besides, I want a life of training. Aight I'll go, but Gohan will too. I don't want his nose in those books. Bad for your health.So where's pops?"
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A tear formed at the tip of Raditz's eye, "oh, well you see he's in he-I mean in another dimension. Anyways we gotta leave soon, so grab your son and let's cram into the space pod, I hope you're ready for some brotherly love-I mean fun times?"
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With a laugh he said, "Gotta be better than some of the cars here." Flying down he waved to everyone and said, "Going home guys. May never come back. Tell Chi-chi, well I said adios." Grabbing Gohan he flew off waving to Piccolo as he saw him. Then they crammed into the small ship and flew back to meet with Vegeta and Nappa.
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Unluckily for them, they were unintentionally docked at a ship of much larger size on their journey. As they got out of their space pod and began to wander around the larger ship they see a huge party going on. Raditz begins to worry as he sees one thing - Jeice of the Ginyu force. This happened to be his birthday ship and all of his closest alien friends were around to celebrate.
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Goku's eyes widened and began to water with glee as he saw mountains of food. Rushing over he began to eat everything. Including the birthday cake which was chocolate.
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Raditz quickly grabbed Gohan and the two of them hid as Jeice approached Goku angrily.

"And who might you be?" He asked the most Australian accent.

Goku grinned, "name's Goku, bitch."
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Jeice looked around as everyone watched. "I like your style. Welcome to the party! I'm Jeice! Come and kick it with us. Oh and by the way don't touch the..." seeing the Cake, he became angry. "My Birthday cake has been eaten! Who did this?!"

Goku pointed at a random fat guy. Turning around Jeice took all of his money then shot a blast through him.
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Goku politely is escorted to a seat and given a small helping of food. Raditz, feeling jealous, leaves Gohan in the hallway and runs in.

"Hey?! What about me? I'm the dude's brother!" He announced.
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Jeice looks over and sees Raditz. "Ah so he's a Saiyan too? Man where do you guys come from? Thought there were three and now a 4th pops up. And who's that kid?"
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Goku looked up from his food and grinned, "he's my love child! Btw I think you look kinda funny..."
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I love how it was just you guys :D.

Jeice says, "Up yours man! Bring it!" He raises his hands above his head, preparing to blast the entire house.
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Raditz gets afraid, knowing the power of Jeice. "WOAH DAWG! DAT SHIT AINT RITE!"

Goku lets out a burp, "oh man, I was just messin' with ya! I love the hair!"

Gohan runs in and starts singing the happy birthday song, as his mom told him it was polite to sing for someone on their birthday.
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lol dang it Kui. Now I have to retype

Everyone cheered and sang along. Radditz on the other hand had a different plan. He knew Jeice carried his stash on the ship and he intended to find it. Sneaking out the door he went down the hall.


lol this is like DBZ in Da' Hood
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Raditz was soon met by Reacoome down the hallways in the kitchen, who had lost a bet and had to cook for Jeice's birthday party.

"HAHA LOOK GUYS I FOUNDS A MONKEY!" Reacoome screamed on site of Raditz.
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