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19's First Update[completed]; 9/8/08 - 9/14/08
Topic Started: Sep 13 2008, 04:48 AM (245 Views)
Rilldo
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(I'm really sorry if this is not correct, as it is my first time trying)

9/8/08 - 9/14/08

[Training]

Begin self training

Adds +15 all stats per week (+60 ki, +120 pl)

[Job]

Errand runner

+7 speed, +350 zeni

Upgrade to Route runner(0/3)

[Bonuses]

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Android 19:
+25 EXP, + 4 all stats, + 50 zeni, + 1 RP Credit


10 Intel. Neutral bonus

[Building]

Begin building weighted boots [0/1]

[Purchases]

Weighted gloves
Amplifies training +3 strength and +2 stamina (+5 ki, +10 pl).

Gem of telepathy

[Equipment]

Equipping Weighted gloves

[Gainages]

Power level: 162
Ki: 81
Strength: 22
Speed: 26
Toughness: 19
Stamina: 21
Vitality: 19

[Stats before update]

Exp: 25/100
Power level: 616
Ki: 308
Strength: 77
Speed: 77
Toughness: 77
Stamina: 77
Vitality: 77
Determination: 10
Charisma: 10
Intelligence: 10

[Total stats after the update]

Exp: 25/100
Power level: 778
Ki: 389
Strength: 99
Speed: 103
Toughness: 96
Stamina: 98
Vitality: 96
Determination: 10
Charisma: 10
Intelligence: 10


[Changes]

Zeni: 1,000 + 350 = 1,350 - 825(Weighted gloves and Gem of telepathy) = 525 + 50 zeni(Spar) = 575
SP: 4
RP credit: 0 + 1 = 1
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wmutrombone83
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ok gainages are right except you added wrong:

[Gainages]

Power level: 130---------->162
Ki: 65---->81
Strength: 22
Speed: 26
Toughness: 19
Stamina: 21
Vitality: 19
Determination: 0
Charisma: 0
Intelligence: 10----->0

You put the neutral intelligence in your bonus section as it is a bonus +10.

Also I don't see where you spent your 4 SP on a fundamental technique? If you didn't want to learn anything then you still have your 4SP. If you did please put down the fundamental you learned.

Also your zeni is at 575 Total.

Fix this and ill look it over.
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<SELECT style="background-color: #920909; color: #000000; font-family: Corbel; font-size: 14px; width: 200px; "><br /><OPTION>Alliance: Ascended Knights</OPTION><br /><OPTION>Location: Namek</OPTION><br/><OPTION>PL: 84,806[Full Power: 87,696]</OPTION><br /><OPTION>Full Giji KK PL: 128,958</OPTION><br/></SELECT></div>
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Rilldo
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Uhh I fixed them
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wmutrombone83
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BTW looking good for your first update 19 forgot to tell ya that.

Ok for your final stats is the same mistake you added your ki up wrong thus making your pl wrong too.

[Total stats after the update]

Exp: 25/100
Power level: 746------->778
Ki: 373-------->389
Strength: 99
Speed: 103
Toughness: 96
Stamina: 98
Vitality: 96
Determination: 10
Charisma: 10
Intelligence: 20------->10(since the other 10 from being neutral is a bonus section)

other then that your fine. Fix it and ill look over it again. And again good job on your first time update.
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<SELECT style="background-color: #920909; color: #000000; font-family: Corbel; font-size: 14px; width: 200px; "><br /><OPTION>Alliance: Ascended Knights</OPTION><br /><OPTION>Location: Namek</OPTION><br/><OPTION>PL: 84,806[Full Power: 87,696]</OPTION><br /><OPTION>Full Giji KK PL: 128,958</OPTION><br/></SELECT></div>
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Rilldo
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Thanks :o , and I fixed them, it should be good now.
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Good job 19. APPROVED
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<SELECT style="background-color: #920909; color: #000000; font-family: Corbel; font-size: 14px; width: 200px; "><br /><OPTION>Alliance: Ascended Knights</OPTION><br /><OPTION>Location: Namek</OPTION><br/><OPTION>PL: 84,806[Full Power: 87,696]</OPTION><br /><OPTION>Full Giji KK PL: 128,958</OPTION><br/></SELECT></div>
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