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| Topic Started: Dec 29 2009, 01:54 PM (359 Views) | |
| Upum | Dec 29 2009, 01:54 PM Post #1 |
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Character you wish to be: Upum (full sayian custom) Planet you want to start on: Earth (Saiyans Only) Fighting Style you wish to have: Balanced How did you find this site:Google What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying:I always wanted to play a DBZ RPG so i googled dbz rpg and this popped up i don't know how long i will stay but i think about a year is alright. (Recommended) AIM Screen Name: Goku96 (Required) Email Address: goku96@live.co.uk Roleplay sample: Upum was training in the Time Chamber , he was training with Zetsumetsu his father. "finally am a super sayian" said Upum. "Amazing! I've never seen anyting like it!you're a super sayian!!"said Zetsumetsu. After Upum became a super sayian he was uncontrollable he killed his father Zetsumetsu. ."oh no!! what have i done" said Upum. Then A few hours later Upum walked out with his father in his hands. Cargo the new guardian of Earth he healed his father. Upum never became a Sayian that day. One day Upum walked out of his house to go and get some food... "I'll see you later dad!" Upum said , As he was walking through the woods a strange voice came through the bushes , he started walking to it , then a strange monster came out "what the...?" said Upum "who are you?!"Upum shouted , "my name is Pun"he said as he was walking towards him "what do you want from me?!" said Upum , Pun punched Upum in his face "what do you want from me" shouted Upum , "i want to kill you!"said Pun , Upum stands up "well your not!!". At The house Zetsumetsu senses the evil energy he quickly runs and when he gets there Pun tries to finish Upum off with his Finger beam then Zetsumetsu runs "look out" Zetsumetsu shouts as he runs into Upum and then Zetsumetsu dies Upum gets angry "you little punk" he shouts "let me show you my ultimate transformation!" Pun transforms into Super Pun "Ha Ha HA! now you DIE with this planet" said Super Pun in a loud voice "now its your turn!"said Super Pun "you wont get away with THIS!" said Upum, "i want to show you my transformation too" Said Upum, Upum finally awakens His sayian power. "Why did you come here?!" asked Upum, "Hmhmhmhm" Laughed Super Pun "well, i came here to rule this planet, then i sensed you so i thought you can be my first victim" said Super Pun , "well you wont get away with this"said Upum , He throws an energy ball at Super Pun, Super Pun dodges it " that tickled" said Super Pun Cargo senses the fight "oh no am not a good guardian after all"said Cargo "maybe you need to go and heal Upum's father" said Cargo's helper "your'e right maybe i do need to go and help" said Cargo "good luck" said Cargo's helper. At the woods Super Pun was beating Super Sayian Upum "Hey son" said Zetsumetsu , "what? where are you dad?"shouts Upum "other world son, don't worry about me give him the best Kioha you've got!"said Zetsumetsu, Cargo uses instant transmition "im here!" said cargo quickly "where is your father?!" said Cargo "other world in peace" said Upum "huh? you mean he is in hell?"said Cargo "no he is in heaven" said Upum "how can i help?" asks Cargo "get out of here right now!" shouts Upum "ok as you wish" said Cargo , Cargo uses instant transmition back to the look-out "he doesnt want any help" he said as he looks at his helper "what about his father?" said Cargo's helper "other world" said Cargo , Super Pun was running out of energy so he decided to finish Upum off "hahaha! say good bye!" shouts Super Pun " Big dark Attack!" shouts Super Pun "kioha!" shouts Upum . The Kioha attack had all Upum's energy and it was alot stronger than big dark attack , Upum defeats Pun after that Upum was back to himself again he went back to the house and ate a senzu bean. he never forgotten that day. "All the fighting is finally over" said Upum The History Of Upum: Upum was a very poor when he was a young boy he never knew who his mum was ,Upum loved fighting so he asked his dad to join the worlds martial Arts tournament so his dad agreed when Upum joined the world tournament he was different than before he wanted that money so he and his dad can afford to live , mean while the guardian of earth sensed his energy cargo wanted him to defeat a monster that he sensed , Upum had a hard time winning the world tournament but at the finals he faced the world champion Sombier they had a long fight but finally Upum noticed that he was changing he didnt know how to throw an energy ball nobody knew that only his dad knew it over the years his dad trained him really hard and they were rich then after three years later that monster destroyed a lot of cities his dad knew he was coming to this city so he was training hard with Upum, Upum knew he had secret powers but he didnt know how to unlock them so cargo came and assisted to help their city it was Upum's first time on the look out and then cargo assisted them to the time chamber. And our story begins here. Picture of Upum: ![]() *hope its GOOD and impressive :)* |
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I am Upum the ultimate saiyan <how can i make a real sig pl0x?> | |
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| Old Gohan | Dec 29 2009, 01:56 PM Post #2 |
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DA BU RA!
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You need to add a bio since it's a custom character, and you RP sample could do with a bit of work... |
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| Kagetane Hiruko | Dec 29 2009, 02:14 PM Post #3 |
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cool pic tough |
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| Upum | Dec 29 2009, 02:36 PM Post #4 |
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Thanks is it good enough for it to be added?
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| Gosai | Dec 29 2009, 07:09 PM Post #5 |
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Just some suggestions with your roleplay sample: Breaking it up into paragraphs. Standard procedure is to make a new paragraph each time a new character speaks. As well, maybe some description of the environment and/or the characters in question to get some idea of the people we're dealing with? Eh, that's my two cents. You can get a couple tootsie rolls with it
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| Upum | Dec 30 2009, 08:03 AM Post #6 |
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ok, i will but ive seen lots of roleplays with 1 paragraph so i thought it was easier i didnt kno sorry |
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is it good enough for it to be added?

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