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| New Recruit :); custom Namek: Rain | |
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| Topic Started: Dec 28 2009, 04:11 PM (391 Views) | |
| Rainy | Dec 28 2009, 04:11 PM Post #1 |
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![]() Character you wish to be: Rain Planet you want to start on: Namek How did you find this site: google, Can find anything there. What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: Just want to try this out and see if it is fun. My first time doing this so I hope it is ok! (Recommended) AIM Screen Name: DracoNamekDBZ (Required) Email Address: RainMandbz204@yahoo.com (Required) Please include a small sample roleplay: The battle field was raining hard making the dirt turn into mud. Lightning was striking in the background as the two fighters where taking a quick brake. Two nameks stood a crossed from each other where in a heated battle. One of the Nameks look like a regular namek, as the other one was a different color than your average namek. "I see that you've gained strength from the last time we spoke" spoke Rain. "Yes I have, and I see you haven't changed my old friend" spoke . Kip. With a quick movement from Rain, his feet shifted forward and he charged forward. The two namek's met in the middle, crashing into one another. Both of there fist slammed into one another making a large explosion a crossed the field. The two started throwing combo's back and forth to one another. Each blocking the other opponents attack and then throwing an attack them self. The two namek's power level where even accept the namek Rain was a little bit stronger than Kip. Rain knew he had to get an advantage on Kip, and needed one quick. Instead of blocking the next attack, Rain grabbed a hold of Kip's right hand. With Kip trying to get his hand from Rain, he throws his left hand towards Rain. Rain used his other hand to grasp a hold of Kip's left hand. Rain then jumped up and threw both of his feet up. As his feet hit, Rain released both of Kip's hands to make his entire body fly back. Rain then quickly charged forward, knowing that this was his chance to get a head of Kip. As Kip caught his balance back, Rain was right in front of him ready with his next attack. Rain quickly threw his right fist towards the gut of Kip. This made Kip lean forward wrapping both of his hands around his gut. Rain knew that this was his chance to get a head on the fight. Tightening his fist up, Rain threw his right hand into the back of Kip. This made his body weak and fall towards the ground. Rain quickly threw his right foot into the right side of Kip's ribs. This made his body fly backwards into a rock. Rain stood still cracking his neck from side to side awaiting Kip's return to the fight. History: Rain was born like any other Namek, out of an egg. His color was a the usual green like every other namek. As he grew up his colors started to turn dark brown and black but his father still loved his son. The rest of the namek's around there little village started to get scared of what Rain was turning into. Rain still looked like your average namek, but what was different was his skin color. His power level was above the average namek. His height and weight was around the normal, but his sense where high above the rest. Along time ago, way before any namek that lived was the ancients. The ancients believed in many story. One of the stories was the birth of the great Draco Namek. This namek would rise above all namek's and the save the planet from destruction. He would have to go above and beyond his fighting capabilities to beat his opponents. His faith would have to run high and he would have to believe in himself to crush everything around him. Like every other ancient story. They become forgotten and the people move on with there lives. No great threats have threatened the planet namek and yet Rain still walked the earth. Rain was a Draco Namek but didn't believe that he was great at all. His power level was above all but his technique in battle was still weak. All namek's where afraid of what Rain was because he was different from them. As Rain got older, the more the people feared him. They thought he would turn into an evil that would crush there beloved planet. After Rain's twentieth birthday; the people of the village where threatened by a lost Saiyan looking for the namek ball's. Rain stood toe to toe with Saiyan, battling back and forth. As Rain stood over the namek, he looked around to see his village has been torn to pieces. The people of the village banished Rain from there village and told him to seek out the great Namek Guru for help. His father was saddened from what happened to him but knew that this would be better for him. Rain packed his things and walked away form the village. As he cleared a nearing, Rain looked back to his old village to remember all of his good past times there. As he turned around Rain looked a head to begin his adventure towards Master Guru. |
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| Dabura | Dec 28 2009, 04:12 PM Post #2 |
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NEFARIOUS
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Sorry if you were about to add it or something, but you need a Roleplay Sample. Custom characters also need a 300 word history. |
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| Rainy | Dec 29 2009, 01:01 PM Post #3 |
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Ok, sorry that it took a little bit but this if my first time and I wanted to make it good. Lol wrote it down on paper and had my mom review it for me. Always good to have an english teacher as a mother. Well I hope I pass
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| Rainy | Dec 30 2009, 12:13 PM Post #4 |
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so was it good? And how long does this normally take? Sorry if i'm bugging just want to start because I have so many ideas written down. Just let me know and I will wait till that day
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| Old Gohan | Dec 30 2009, 12:15 PM Post #5 |
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DA BU RA!
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Just wait for Razak to see this, and you'll be added
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| Dabura | Dec 30 2009, 12:17 PM Post #6 |
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Really, it's not bad for a first timer. My only suggestions are to slow down when you type it, because you have some minor grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes. Nothing big, just looks like you got in a hurry. We all do it. Other than that, just wait it out like Yajirobe said it. Alex (Razak) should be making his rounds soon. |
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| Rainy | Dec 30 2009, 12:24 PM Post #7 |
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Ok yea I see them now, I was kind of hurrying. Had something to do and my mom was rushing me. I hope he lets me in and I get to roleplay with you guys. |
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| Alex | Dec 31 2009, 12:11 PM Post #8 |
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Looks pretty good. Make sure you know how to update your wiki and how to report/claim roleplay bonuses and I will get you added tonight. |
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| Rainy | Dec 31 2009, 01:08 PM Post #9 |
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yea i saw that and read it. I think I have it all figured out, but if I have any questions i'll ask someone. Thanks alot for letting me join and I won't let you down. I can't wait to start roleplaying
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