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| Nail (the Iv); A Namekian with a untrollable heart | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 1 2010, 02:50 PM (339 Views) | |
| andyg | Jan 1 2010, 02:50 PM Post #1 |
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Character you wish to be: Nail Planet you want to start on: Namek (Saiyans Only) Fighting Style you wish to have: (Aliens Only) Stat you wish to increase by +15: (Changelings Only) Name and Picture of your underling: How did you find this site: I found this site on Google and when I was looking at other DBZ RPG's, they weren't that good so I looked at this one and it wasn't that half bad. What makes you want to join and how long you plan on staying: I want to join, because it wil make me have something to do incase I get bored. How long do I plan on staying is when I get bored of it. (Recommended) AIM Screen Name: I don't have one, but I will have one until this is accepted. (Required) Email Address: andygbg23@hotmail.es *He will have Namekian clothes, the similarites he will wear and apperence is wooden shoes, green skin, lines and parts on his body and on his arms. The differences he will have is dark grey baggy pants, the thing on his neck, but it is a hood and it is dark grey and it is baggy, but not tthat baggy and with a cape attached with it and the same colour as his clothes, the out lines on his arms are light blue and the other parts on his arms are flesh colour, the first layer on his body, the whole part on his body is the same colour on his arms, but the second layer has its outline red, but the other part is flesh colour, and the third layer is the same thing as the first layer and also his finger nails are black. (Required) Please include a small sample roleplay. This could be a roleplay that you have done on another site (if you will be asked for a link to the thread during your AIM Interview) or it could be a completely unique roleplay written up on the fly. Must be above 300 words (Song starts: Shadow theme from Sonic Adventure 2 Soundtrack: Throw It All Away) Bio/History: Nail, which also known Nail the IV, as in the fourth generation of the Namekian of his Family Tree, was born and raised on Planet Namek. His parents were murdered from the slaughter from creatures from other planets, it happened year ago, when one commander, was in buisness of child slavery every time, when a Namekian was born, he would command his creatures to Planet Namek to capture them and send them to him.Where he would controll them with dark aura on them and train them. The reason why, because he was in a war with the Namekians for a long time, and suprisingly, it is still continuing. He was despretly losing the fight of the war, he knew that he needed to do something, so he send his creatures early, so they could get more of them at night, and then escaped at day time. They killed parents who got in there way, but they managed to get Nail, he was crying. The commander put him in the chamber and activated the dark aura transfer, most of the dark aura went into his body, but then a powerful Namekian came up and blasted the ship with its powers, which stoping the transfer of the dark aura transfer. He managed to get Nail, he was crying of the dark, terrifying thoughts and dreams that were in his head. The Namekian rushed down to Namek, he planned to raise him, so through out the years. Nail had grown up to a young man, he had a dark heart, from doing bad things to people and having a bad attitude and murderisim, he was impaitent, creul, bold, but he still had good things in him, this was caused from the dark aura transfer. The Namkian who was raising him was worried that will he be a dark person? He didn't know what to do, but what will he do to fix the Namkian's dark heart? (Song ends) (Song starts: DBZ Budakai Soundtrack: Move Foward Fearlessly) ''Huuuhhh! Gahhh! Yaahhhh! Uhhhh!!! This is the sounds of training, the Namekian training with the all grown up Namekian. The Namekian kicked him in the back while Nail tried to punch him, ''Power is nothing if you try to win, finding the weakness, will make you win'' He said, Nail grunted and punched him in the face, but ducked and countered with a roundhouse kick. Nail flew into the rocks, ''Be defensive, being all offensive, will make you all, but injured. Nail pounced up into the air and a claw strucked hand ready to attack him, like an eagle in the air. The Namekian went up to him high speed and grinned at him, ''Remember, there is always ups and downs for the enviorment your in'' Nail gasped in fear and he was knocked down with a strong punch, he hit the ground hard. He groaned in pain while he was trying to get up on his feet, but he felt like he was being pushed down with some invisible force. The strong Namekian went down with high speed and grabbed his neck and lifted him up, ''Remember, some moves have their own side effects, if you don't study them physically in battle, you could've figured how to escape it''. (Song ends) (1st song starts) Nail had some dark aura around him and went beserk, and tried to escape with hands pulling the arms squezing him to death, when he tried really hard to pull with all his might, the Namekian just squezed harder, then when he ran out of breath, he went back to normal. (Song ends) (Song starts: DBZ Budakai 2 Soundtrack: Soul Vaccination) After training, the two Namekians sat down by the pond looking at the sun. Nail was iratated, the Namekian looked at him and said: ''Hey, you look iratated Nail, whats wrong''? Nail looked at him, ''Its because of your stupid advice! I always get annoyed with your sayings''! The Namekian said: ''Now with that abrasive atitude, you will not learn respect to others, Nail, and it looks you matured yet for a 17 year old man'' Nail looked up, ''Yeah, so what'' The Namekian looked suprised at him when he said that, ''Nail, I can't belive you would say that!, you are one careless Namekain! Nail! And what are you saying that my advice are annoying you?! I'll tell you one more advice of combat, Nail!, ahem! If- ''Now, not with the same old advices again! ''Well, to bad! If you have to here it''! Then he sensed something, then he aid to Nail: ''Somethings coming''! (Song ends) He quickly went into a fighting stance. A huge energy cluster came down to the two Namekians, the crashed down into the ground, making dust covering the whole area. (Song starts: DBZ Budakai Soundtrack: Thrilling Time) When the dust cleared, it was the creatures who captured Nail! The Namekian gasped, as the creatures scowled. ''These are the creatures who tried to capture you, Nail''! Nail gave a look of confusion. The Namekian went into side stance with a L bent shape arm with his fist closed and grunted, Nail reached out his arm, ''What do you mean? These are the creatures who tried to capture me? I don't even remember a thing''?! The Namekain flared a spark of ki, ''Hey! What are you doing''?! The Namekain smiled, ''I've got to tell you something Nail'' ''Huh?'' ''My name is Nailion, Nail, your older brother'' Nail went up on his knees, ''What!'' ''Its true Nail'' Nail puts his fist beside his right leg and smiled. ''Heh, so I have a brother, heh, fighting with you might be fun'' Then Nailion extended his arm, ''Then come on!!! Then fight with me''!!!! Nail went into knees bent stance and putted his arms on his hips, ''Fine, it will be a pleasure fighting with you''. Can they beat them the creatures who tried to capture Nail? *Can you help me find or make me a picture that the Namekian I want, please! |
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| Tala | Jan 1 2010, 06:49 PM Post #2 |
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Cannon Characters don't require a history/ bio. Lucky you. A few things about your roleplay, there are a lot of unnecessary commas and a lot of mispelled words. Those things can be caught pretty easily with spell check. I would encourage you to write your roleplays in a word processor before posting them. That's what I do, and I find it helpful. Good luck! |
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| andyg | Jan 1 2010, 07:07 PM Post #3 |
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Was the song thing good? |
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| Alex | Jan 2 2010, 12:14 PM Post #4 |
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Okay your roleplaying could use some work but it's okay. I'll get you added to the site tonight. You are accepted. |
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| andyg | Jan 3 2010, 02:12 PM Post #5 |
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Am I accepted yet and did you get my message yet? |
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| andyg | Jan 3 2010, 05:20 PM Post #6 |
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So I'm accepted right? why aren't you sending me something? |
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| Dabura | Jan 3 2010, 05:48 PM Post #7 |
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NEFARIOUS
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He's not going to send you anything besides an invitation to the wiki. He is going to add you to the site soon. He must have gotten busy if he didn't already. Just wait. |
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