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Reno Starstruck; Joining
Topic Started: Jan 4 2010, 06:30 AM (263 Views)
Reno Starstrike
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Please note that custom characters require a picture of your character and a separate 300 word history/biography in addition to your sample roleplay.

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Character you wish to be:
Reno Starstrike
(Hyrbid
[Human/Demon]
Human: Sense
Demon(Dominate): Being able to Majin

Planet you want to start on:
Earth

How did you find this site:
Recommendation: Saint Dane

What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying:

I love DBZ RPGs so I believe I can strive in this one. I plan on staying for more than a month.


(Recommended) AIM Screen Name:
Egotisticalbr33z


(Required) Email Address:
mr.eriklgordon@gmail.com

(Required) Please include a small sample roleplay. This could be a roleplay that you have done on another site (if so you will be asked for a link to the thread during your AIM interview) or it could be a completely unique roleplay written up on the fly. Must be above 300 words.

Biography
There was an organization called Garuda. They focused on crime and I don’t mean preventing it. Highly advanced spiritually these human beings were able to tap into the psychic powers creating a psychic oppression system within their bodies. They dubbed this power, psycho. Like any other crime syndicate they aimed for territorial control and for power. Baine Starstruck, the current organization leader, wanted power like any other, and it was something he would fight and put his life on the line. He was a special psycho user and excelled where most could not. He was physically, mentally and spiritually stronger than anyone of his companions.

A war broke out; a serious war. Garuda was attacked by another crime syndicate which labeled themselves simply 0. 0 based their advancement with technology, and on a power scale their technology came to be on par with the psycho power. Baine would not allow them to take over and as a desperate measure to save his entire organization he formed a pact with a demon tribe near the entrance of hell during a moment where he died. Being revived with more than his psycho power, he wiped out 0 with a single blow.

Having to fill out the requirements after wards, Baine married Dratina Valotosk, the demon leader of that tribe. This became public to very little in the human realm, but that specific demon realm heard the news at every kitchen table at dinner. This was to publicize Dratina and help her gain dominance politically. Baine had to live with her in that realm for all eternity, but as a gift and apart of the pact, ten years later he left a son by the two of them.

His name was Reno Starstruck and he was given directly to the new leader of Garuda. He was in charge of looking after the boy and teaching him the ropes to their business. This starts the story of Reno.

Sample


Chapter 2 -God, The Innocent Kitten

To defy God would be blasphemy, would it not? Rising your blade against an deity, that has been thought as suicide. Be it not a way to prove you are above the deities? If you were to become above them, what holds you in place? Naught can control you, and life can be lived without restriction. It is not true that religion reached its acme nineteen hundred years ago, and that we are for ever to refer back to what was written and said in those days. No, sir; religion is a vital living thing, still growing and working, capable of endless extension and development, like all other fields of thought. There were many eternal truths spoken of old and handed down to us in a book, some parts of which may indeed be called holy. But there are others yet to be revealed; and if we are to reject them because they are not in those pages, we should act as wisely as the scientist who would take no notice of Kirschoff's spectral analysis because there is no mention of it in Albertus Magnus. Sir Author Conan Doyle spoke truth within his fiction, which was set to be false. How beautiful fiction can be when it speaks truth under false pretenses.

Through the eye of blue the world seemed to be cold and broken. Through the eye of pink the world seemed warm and welcoming. Behind that smile was a girl tearing away from her truths and her lies. There were no wrongs for her, everything seemed right, even the deceit. Taking a very short lived step forward, God walked literally on the surface of water as if it were earth. Each ripple moved like sand as she made her way across the lake. The sweet smile which reflected both ways crescent moons the world up and down. The bare kitty wore nothing now, not even her coat or boots. She bathed completely naked in the wind using her tub as the ground. Her claws were still small, but effective they were as she licked the very sharp point, and just by the sheer force of her finger against her tongue the crimson trickled down her bottom lip. Her prey stood in-front of her, not effected by her seemingly egotistical stride to him, which came slow. There was no wonder about her, the beast in-front of her took her as being stupid. He felt high and mighty matched up against such a small opponent.

He literally towered over her several feet, with his body in the shape of a human. He took the likings of a super human, with skin slightly mutated from his hunger for human souls. His saliva charred the earth beneath them, much easier than the earth around this false liquid one. Unlike God, he didn't walk on the water, he swam slowly smelling the souls within her body. She was indeed an easy target which made her hunts so much easier than the others. Also something was beautiful about her innocence that made you want to taste every single soul she possessed. At that slithering note, he took off toward her in a blurring speed to slice at her and open her up. His claws ripped through the wind patterns and slammed into her body and in an instant he stopped, and the force caused him to push up against her.


He saw a very small trickle of blood run down his face. He pulled away slowly watching as he ripped his head off her claws, leaving a gaping hole in his forehead. He reached up to hold his forehead and as he did leaving his abdomen open, she ducked in and start punching him without much thought placed into each hit. He tried to grab onto her and stop her but before he could she raised her elbow up and jammed it into his chin to throw him off and lifted up and came with her knee to bring him up slightly into the sky. Her movements and facial expression, for a change, had become blank. She was devoid of emotion for the time being and fought because she was told to fight. Grabbing onto his ankle, she slams in on the water hard and fast enough to make it emulate ground and as he sunk slowly she jumped on him and stomped on him repeatedly. The abuse he took was not planned, nor was it meant to be purposely done. Everything was on reflex. They both sunk in the water, God only half way in before she floats back onto the surface. her control and her ferocious fighting style were on key.

Watching him swim to the surface, she slowly floats his way bending down and scrapping her self proclaim ground, making the soft noise water makes. The beast looked up to her for the moment and displayed hsi fear to her finally. She was again to take a life without notice of its significance.

"You don't really know what you are doing...searching for purpose by following orders blindly. Go ahead and end me..." he spoke leading his fear away from his eyes. She stopped again, and on cue that voice of Truth spoke.

"You know we have to kill him, its an assignment, you took up the extra assignment to look for your reason God." On instinct to those words she nods and went stiff and sliced right through his skull. His body dispersed into nothing, to leave behind a soul. She picks up the the soul and leaned it to her right wing, giving it to the silent Lies behind her and she watched him eat it and looks up to the sky, her eyes lowering to a dead gaze to the moon.

"Who am I, really? My creation was not necessary...I find it very random, nya" she flew into the sky slowly looking down onto the earth, seeing it again in two different eyes. Her blue eye glazed down at the cold of the world. It saw the evil, and the darkness. Then through the pink eye she saw warmth and care. Her eyes softened to the sight from her pink eye, and a single tear dropped from her eye and hit the water, causing it to ripple outward to touch the earth. Flying off, it was time to take a break from her summer extra assignment.
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Dabura
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Wow, mate. Awesome job. Can't wait to see Crimson's. I only see one mistake; you have no Roleplay Sample, only a Biography. Did you intended for the second part of the Biography to be the Sample as well?
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Well Chapter 2 is the sample I think.
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Dabura
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Oh, right. I see the word sample hiding in there now. Thank you, O' Pan, my guiding light of Endrial.
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"It is pride that turns angels into demons."

DaddySenpai - Tomorrow at 12:40 AM
if i use deca
ill always have a friend
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Looks fine to me. I'll get you added to the site tonight. Make sure you know the 3 step process of updating and how to report and claim your roleplay bonuses.
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