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| Joining Custom Human; Asch* | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 15 2010, 08:48 AM (298 Views) | |
| Dias | Jan 15 2010, 08:48 AM Post #1 |
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*Please note that custom characters require a picture of your character and a separate 300 word history/biography in addition to your sample roleplay.![]() Biography: Once known as Asch the Bloody for a single war he fought in the past. After being kidnapped by a strange man while he was a child all was lost to him. Years of grief and anguish he trained under a master under the name "Boy" till one day he to vanished, the one person asch thought he really knew. Asch once again alone fell into the hands of mercenaries. They quickly knew he was no ordinary warrior as he excelled on missions and especially on the war front. But even as the tides of war raged on, deep down something was calling to him. Asch left the company of the mercenaries and travelled where ever the wind took him. while in his travels he joins the knights under the alias "Asch". His original name is forgotten. Asch assaults enemies with a wild fury in hope to one day find his captor. Asch also occasionally helps people, having a little more good in him that even he does not know. Also he mostly prefers working alone, while keeping his deep hatred for life, his name is a play on the ashes of the "Holy Flame" that he once heard about from a story, one of his only few memories. He's extremely short tempered and and be impulsive. He also has a romantic side though he will never admit it. If he is to die, he wishes to die as a knight. Being as he has no memory, Asch is in constant search for piece's of his memory. For as far back as he can remember he awoke covered in blood in a empty battle field full of corpses and the debree of war. Little does he know but a family does await him, A family of royalty and to them Asch is still alive...a imposter. Character you wish to be: Asch Planet you want to start on: Earth Race: Human How did you find this site: Browsing Google What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: I've joined role playing forums in the past, But I've never seen one so complex. It looks really fun. I plan on staying as long as you allow me to. (Recommended) AIM Screen Name:AschFonFabre (Required) Email Address: underwearwithmyname@yahoo.com (Required) Please include a small sample roleplay. This could be a roleplay that you have done on another site (if so you will be asked for a link to the thread during your AIM interview) or it could be a completely unique roleplay written up on the fly. Must be above 300 words. A breeze brushed against the side of a small girls cheek as she bent over to pick up a piece of fire wood. "Father,...Father..I have the last piece" As she began to stand up a group of men riding three large horses rushed towards her kicking up dust with incredible speed on the old dirt road. "Ahh,..Nooooo" cried out the little girl expecting to feel there crushing hooves. As a few seconds past the little girl felt nothing and slowly opened her eyes. Long red strands waved in front of her like ribbon she had seen once in a parade. (Am I?!,...Am I ok?). After thinking for a moment the little girl looked down to see a arm wrapped firmly around her waist she jumped with surprize and a shot of fear. A little shaken the girl looked up only to have the bright sun blinding her leaving only a silhouette of the figure. "You ok?..." Said the man his words sharp and his eyes never once setting upon the little girl. "Ummm,...Umm...Yes I think so". Her cheeks turning bright red as she realized that she was still in his embrace. The man gently set her back on her feet releasing her from his iron grip. Turning towards the riders he rested one hand on the sheath he held closely to his right hip. As he began to walk towards the riders his bloody red hair were as whips in the breeze. "Wait! WAIT, SIR!, what is your name?!" screamed the little girl. As her small feet stomped to the ground to help with her approach. The man stopped for a moment his dark clothes swaying little to the rough breeze. Slowly turning his head giving the little girl a side glance. And with a quick smirk he replied. "Asch,...The bloody" ................................................................................................................ Thee end
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| Seta | Jan 15 2010, 08:53 AM Post #2 |
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You need a bio. |
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| Dias | Jan 15 2010, 08:54 AM Post #3 |
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Sorry Pan I apologize for over looking that^^. |
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| Tambourine | Jan 15 2010, 08:59 AM Post #4 |
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RP with me, dammit!
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And to specify your race. |
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| Dias | Jan 15 2010, 09:05 AM Post #5 |
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Sorry guys, I am just starting my coffee drinking now lol, And I forgot to mention custom character in my title. Please excuse me. |
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| Tambourine | Jan 15 2010, 09:50 AM Post #6 |
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RP with me, dammit!
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This is pretty nice, but the bio needs to be 300 words long. |
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| Dias | Jan 15 2010, 10:00 AM Post #7 |
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Yeah I was having a minor writers block, Ill add more depth into the Rp. And thanks Tambourine for keeping me in the heads up. |
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| Seta | Jan 15 2010, 10:22 AM Post #8 |
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I helped you out a little bit. ![]() Remember, you don't need commas with other punctuation like you have. |
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| Dias | Jan 15 2010, 10:25 AM Post #9 |
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lol Yes, you are quite right^^. And you did help me thank you. |
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| Seta | Jan 15 2010, 10:28 AM Post #10 |
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I edited your topic title too to make things more obvious. Good luck. |
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| Dias | Jan 15 2010, 10:39 AM Post #11 |
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Thanks Pan your a sweet heart. |
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| Seta | Jan 15 2010, 10:42 AM Post #12 |
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Never been called that before. Oh you're missing punctuation at the end of your sentences. Like:
It should be:
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| Alex | Jan 15 2010, 12:54 PM Post #13 |
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Looks great. Accepted! I'll get you added this afternoon. |
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