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Goku; uh,my join post
Topic Started: Jan 17 2010, 06:10 PM (540 Views)
rusho
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Character you wish to be:goku jr.

Planet you want to start on:earth

(Saiyans Only) Fighting Style you wish to have:calculating

(Aliens Only) Stat you wish increased by

(Changelings Only) Name and Picture of your underling:

How did you find this site:google

What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying:hardcore dbz fan,and this is the perfect place to express it,for as long as you'll let me

(Recommended) AIM Screen Name:davdallaz14

(Required) Email Address:davdallaz14@aol.com

here's my roleplay:oops,here it is:He woke up this morning having that same dream about a fire in the whole building. Many people were dying and he was just sitting there in the corner of a random room watching my mother and father die at the feet of their killer. He will never forget those eyes. It was a light purple with six ripples in his eyes. His killer had the doujutsu called the Rinnengan.
He went downstairs to start the teapot and breakfast. Suddenly a large crash is heard from the stairs. Shinji walks to the stairs and on the floor he sees books and papers scattered with his roommate Tylee on top of the papers. She says, “Ow! Sorry Shinji, I was in a hurry.” He replies, “Be more careful! Let’s go, we have to go to the Academy for Chakra training.”
They both rushed out the door after a quick bite to eat. As they were walking for a bit Shinji realizes he forgot to pick up his custom weapon at Shizune’s Weapon shop. The two walk over to the shop and enter to see a line of amzing customized weapons made by the owner. Tylee walks over to the shelves and buys a couple of kunai. Shinji sees Shizune calling for him. He greets her, “Good Morning Shizune.”

She says, “Hey Shinji your swords is set and ready to go. Chikaru Samba holds seven weapons: Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Demon Windmills, Explosive tags, poison smoke pellet, and a seventh one is creating combos with your sword. The seals of the swords need your chakra. There are seven Panels on the sword, press with chakra and the weapon that you want will come out of it. That’s it. Your total is 1000 gold.” Shinji pay’s 2000 gold. Shinji says, “ That’s for restocks on my weapon for later.” Shizune nods then both Shinji and Tylee head out to the Academy. theres more but i think this is a bit much
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You forgot your Roleplay sample.
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oops,here it is:He woke up this morning having that same dream about a fire in the whole building. Many people were dying and he was just sitting there in the corner of a random room watching my mother and father die at the feet of their killer. He will never forget those eyes. It was a light purple with six ripples in his eyes. His killer had the doujutsu called the Rinnengan.
He went downstairs to start the teapot and breakfast. Suddenly a large crash is heard from the stairs. Shinji walks to the stairs and on the floor he sees books and papers scattered with his roommate Tylee on top of the papers. She says, “Ow! Sorry Shinji, I was in a hurry.” He replies, “Be more careful! Let’s go, we have to go to the Academy for Chakra training.” They both rushed out the door after a quick bite to eat. As they were walking for a bit Shinji realizes he forgot to pick up his custom weapon at Shizune’s Weapon shop. The two walk over to the shop and enter to see a line of amzing customized weapons made by the owner. Tylee walks over to the shelves and buys a couple of kunai. Shinji sees Shizune calling for him. He greets her, “Good Morning Shizune.” She says, “Hey Shinji your swords is set and ready to go. Chikaru Samba holds seven weapons: Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Demon Windmills, Explosive tags, poison smoke pellet, and a seventh one is creating combos with your sword. The seals of the swords need your chakra. There are seven Panels on the sword, press with chakra and the weapon that you want will come out of it. That’s it. Your total is 1000 gold.” Shinji pay’s 2000 gold. Shinji says, “ That’s for restocks on my weapon for later.” Shizune nods then both Shinji and Tylee head out to the Academy. theres more but i think this is a bit much
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Not bad brother but try roleplaying in third person.

For example

He woke up this morning having that same dream about a fire in the whole building. Many people were dying and he was just sitting there in the corner of a random room watching my mother and father die at the feet of their killer. He will never forget those eyes

Instead try

He woke up that morning having had the same dream about a fire in the whole building. Many people were dying and he just sat there in the corner of the random room watching his mother and father die at the feet of their killer. He would never forget those eyes.

Also try and space out your text in paragraph form. Other then that you should be fine man and welcome.
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rusho
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thanks,im just waiting for a staff member to give me the okay
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rusho
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wow, can anyone help? i havent gotten in yet
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Tambourine
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RP with me, dammit!
Your roleplay is a wall of text. Also, make sure it's 300 words long.

EDIT: Also, catpaw isn't a fighting style.
EDIT2: AND you are not an alien, therefore you don't get that +15.
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thanks tamborine ill chaange and remember
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there,i think i finished my form :o
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