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| Topic Started: Jun 15 2010, 07:23 PM (390 Views) | |
| Vlad | Jun 15 2010, 07:23 PM Post #1 |
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week 6/6- 6/15 Consecutive Weeks 2nd Training self-1st week-+15 all stats (+60 ki, +120 pl) Leveling Up: Distributing: 10 rpcs=+12 all stats (+48 ki, +96 pl) and +300 zeni. 2 DPs to int= +6 Battle Bonus: NA Spars NA Job NA Building: NA Buying Gem of Telepathy Learning NA Equipped[/B ]NA Stats EXP: 5/100 Alignment:0 Power Level: ????/ 3,080 Ki: ???? / 1,540 Strength: 385 Speed: 385 Toughness: 385 Stamina: 385 Vitality: 385 Determination: 10 Charisma: 10 Intelligence: 10 Stats gains Alignment: 0 EXP:+5 bonus PL: +216 Ki:+108 Strength:+27 Speed: +27 Toughness:+27 Stamina: +27 Vitality: +27 Determination:+0 Charisma: +0 Intelligence: +12 Total Stats After This Update Alignment:0 EXP: 10/100 PL: 3,296 Ki: 1648 Strength: 412 Speed: 412 Toughness:412 Stamina: 412 Vitality: 412 Determination:10 Charisma: 10 Intelligence: 22 Total Gainages After This Update Alignment: 0 EXP:0 PL: 0 Ki:0 Strength:0 Speed: 0 Toughness:0 Stamina: 0 Vitality: 0 Determination:+0 Charisma:0 Intelligence:0 Changes Total DP: 0 (2-2=0) Total SP: 2 Total RP:25 (25 -10= 15 +10bonus= 25) Total Zeni: 875 (1,000-425= 575 +300= 875) Affiliation: Star Alliance (co-captain) |
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| Diive | Jun 15 2010, 07:40 PM Post #2 |
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You should always include the week the update is for and whether or not it is complete in the thread description. |
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| Vlad | Jun 15 2010, 07:49 PM Post #3 |
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fixed? |
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| Blank | Jun 15 2010, 07:52 PM Post #4 |
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The update is quite messy nor clearly laid out. Forgive me for being picky, but it's hard to really read through a mass of numbers and words when they're all jumbly. I now know your 'Gain' at the top of the update is from your RP bonus, but, in future, could you label it appropriately. It's a big help and it gets things moving along smoothly. In other words, I'd like you to condense everything down to relevance, and perhaps take a look at other approved updates for templates. Use headings, underlines, bolds etc. just to add some design to it. That way it's laid it decently enough that we can both read it and get out math right.
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| Vlad | Jun 15 2010, 08:08 PM Post #5 |
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I am greatful for the honesty. |
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| Blank | Jun 15 2010, 08:12 PM Post #6 |
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Alright, you need to have a heading labelled 'Total Gains', and list your... well, total gains. That way it's very easy for me to see the transition between your current stats and your after update stats. Also, as Diive rightly said, the date of the update needs to be in the topic sub-title. |
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| Vlad | Jun 15 2010, 09:18 PM Post #7 |
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modified |
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| Vlad | Jun 16 2010, 05:37 PM Post #8 |
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any further recomendations? |
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| Blank | Jun 17 2010, 08:18 AM Post #9 |
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Yes Bonus is spelt without the second 'O' The heading needs to be called 'Total Gains', as I said before. These need to be laid out in the same format as your before and after stats. I've said it again already but have a look at other updates from other characters and use them as a template. |
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| Vlad | Jun 17 2010, 11:31 AM Post #10 |
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the stated problems have been eliminated. |
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| Blank | Jun 17 2010, 12:54 PM Post #11 |
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There are still quite a few things wrong with this, Vlad, so let me show you how to do your first update with the following example. Learn from it so you can update yourself in the future. Consecutive Weeks Training Leveling Up: Distributing: Battle Bonus: Spars Job Building: Buying Learning Equipped Total Stats After This Update Alignment: EXP: PL: Ki: Strength: Speed: Toughness: Stamina: Vitality: Determination: Charisma: Intelligence: Total Gainages After This Update Alignment: EXP: PL: Ki: Strength: Speed: Toughness: Stamina: Vitality: Determination: Charisma: Intelligence: Changes Total DP: Total SP: Total RP: Total Zeni: Also the amount of gains you are receiving is incorrect. Please look over the site again, [n]thoroughly[/b] for the gains you recieve for the particular training you're doing. |
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| Vlad | Jun 17 2010, 01:16 PM Post #12 |
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oh, I gain from my first week training. so I add that to my 10rpc use gains I was uncerten on if acuisition of training was like building in the reported week. |
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| Blank | Jun 17 2010, 02:57 PM Post #13 |
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You're confusing me now :S Just completely delete your entire post of what you've done and USE the template I gave you above! |
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| Vlad | Jun 17 2010, 06:06 PM Post #14 |
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Have I made progress? |
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| Vlad | Jun 18 2010, 05:10 PM Post #15 |
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ready? |
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| Vlad | Jun 19 2010, 06:38 AM Post #16 |
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I await the verdict. |
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| Blank | Jun 19 2010, 07:06 AM Post #17 |
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Finally this is much better. Please, use this template in future. You may now edit your wiki, but don't forget to reply back here when you have. |
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| Vlad | Jun 19 2010, 07:45 AM Post #18 |
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updated thogh there was an error in total SP, it is 4 and not 2, I have yet to spend one |
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