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The Cake......; is a lie..... *incom*
Topic Started: Jun 15 2010, 07:23 PM (390 Views)
Vlad
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week 6/6- 6/15

Consecutive Weeks 2nd


Training
self-1st week-+15 all stats (+60 ki, +120 pl)


Leveling Up:


Distributing:
10 rpcs=+12 all stats (+48 ki, +96 pl) and +300 zeni.

2 DPs to int= +6


Battle Bonus:
NA

Spars
NA

Job
NA


Building:
NA

Buying
Gem of Telepathy


Learning
NA

Equipped[/B
]NA

Stats

EXP: 5/100
Alignment:0
Power Level: ????/ 3,080
Ki: ???? / 1,540
Strength: 385
Speed: 385
Toughness: 385
Stamina: 385
Vitality: 385
Determination: 10
Charisma: 10
Intelligence: 10

Stats gains

Alignment: 0
EXP:+5 bonus
PL: +216
Ki:+108
Strength:+27
Speed: +27
Toughness:+27
Stamina: +27
Vitality: +27

Determination:+0
Charisma: +0
Intelligence: +12

Total Stats After This Update

Alignment:0
EXP: 10/100
PL: 3,296
Ki: 1648
Strength: 412
Speed: 412
Toughness:412
Stamina: 412
Vitality: 412

Determination:10
Charisma: 10
Intelligence: 22



Total Gainages After This Update

Alignment: 0
EXP:0
PL: 0
Ki:0
Strength:0
Speed: 0
Toughness:0
Stamina: 0
Vitality: 0

Determination:+0
Charisma:0
Intelligence:0


Changes

Total DP: 0 (2-2=0)
Total SP: 2
Total RP:25 (25 -10= 15 +10bonus= 25)
Total Zeni: 875 (1,000-425= 575 +300= 875)

Affiliation: Star Alliance (co-captain)
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You should always include the week the update is for and whether or not it is complete in the thread description.
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fixed?
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The update is quite messy nor clearly laid out. Forgive me for being picky, but it's hard to really read through a mass of numbers and words when they're all jumbly.

I now know your 'Gain' at the top of the update is from your RP bonus, but, in future, could you label it appropriately. It's a big help and it gets things moving along smoothly.

In other words, I'd like you to condense everything down to relevance, and perhaps take a look at other approved updates for templates.

Use headings, underlines, bolds etc. just to add some design to it. That way it's laid it decently enough that we can both read it and get out math right. ;)
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I am greatful for the honesty.
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Alright, you need to have a heading labelled

'Total Gains', and list your... well, total gains. That way it's very easy for me to see the transition between your current stats and your after update stats.

Also, as Diive rightly said, the date of the update needs to be in the topic sub-title.
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Vlad
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any further recomendations?
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Yes
Bonus is spelt without the second 'O'

The heading needs to be called 'Total Gains', as I said before.
These need to be laid out in the same format as your before and after stats.

I've said it again already but have a look at other updates from other characters and use them as a template.
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the stated problems have been eliminated.
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There are still quite a few things wrong with this, Vlad, so let me show you how to do your first update with the following example. Learn from it so you can update yourself in the future.


Consecutive Weeks


Training

Leveling Up:


Distributing:


Battle Bonus:


Spars


Job



Building:


Buying


Learning


Equipped



Total Stats After This Update

Alignment:
EXP:
PL:
Ki:
Strength:
Speed:
Toughness:
Stamina:
Vitality:

Determination:
Charisma:
Intelligence:



Total Gainages After This Update

Alignment:
EXP:
PL:
Ki:
Strength:
Speed:
Toughness:
Stamina:
Vitality:

Determination:
Charisma:
Intelligence:


Changes

Total DP:
Total SP:
Total RP:
Total Zeni:


Also the amount of gains you are receiving is incorrect. Please look over the site again, [n]thoroughly[/b] for the gains you recieve for the particular training you're doing.
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Vlad
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oh, I gain from my first week training. so I add that to my 10rpc use gains

I was uncerten on if acuisition of training was like building in the reported week.
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You're confusing me now :S

Just completely delete your entire post of what you've done and USE the template I gave you above!
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Have I made progress?
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Vlad
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ready?
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Vlad
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I await the verdict.
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Finally this is much better.

Please, use this template in future.

You may now edit your wiki, but don't forget to reply back here when you have.
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updated

thogh there was an error in total SP, it is 4 and not 2, I have yet to spend one
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