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Karas Update; update for 6-15-10
Topic Started: Jun 15 2010, 08:26 AM (279 Views)
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Demon God of the Flaming Fist
-Location: on earth

-Begin training with Roshi: +17 to all stats, +20 str (+60 ki, +120 pl)

-Learning energy blast - 2 sp

-Begin building Saibaman seed (3 weeks)

-spend 2 dp on speed (+24 speed)

- Total gains

PL: + 125
Ki: + 71
Strength: + 20
Speed: + 41
Toughness: + 17
Stamina: + 17
Vitality: + 17

-total stats after this update

pl: 4,393
ki: 2,205
str: 424
spd: 445
tou: 421
sta: 421
vit: 421



- changes

0 DP
2 SP
0 RP
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"In the valley of pain"
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The Real Red Magma
I'm afraid your update is not that clear and precise.

But don't worry, your first update is the great learning curve of this site, and I'm here to help with that.

Better than me describing would be to have a look at any of the other recently approved updates. Try and gather yourself a template on how the update should be laid out.

For reference, the bare minimum you'll need to show:

- Location
- Training
- Learning/Buying/Building
- Equipment Gains
- Total Gains
- Total Stats After Update
- Changes [To your DP, Sp, Zeni and RP credits]
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For your training gains, you don't get +17 strength AND + 20 Strength. You get an extra plus 3 from the master training for strength, so your gain for strength should only be +20

Furthermore, your final stats are MUCH lower than those already given on your wiki.

Be sure to check everything thoroughly
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should be all set now
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"In the valley of pain"
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"Come to despair"
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The Real Red Magma
Much better. Approved

Go and update your wikia and reply back when you have.
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wiki is done, i think. this is my first update after all so im not sure i did the wiki right.
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Karas's Theme / Karas' Theme 2 / Karas' Theme 3

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Insieme per la vittoria

"On the mountain of Skulls"
"In the valley of pain"
"The strongest of warriors"
"Come to despair"
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Yup you did it fine, well done.
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