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| Topic Started: Nov 15 2010, 08:39 PM (362 Views) | |
| Gomek | Nov 15 2010, 08:39 PM Post #1 |
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Personal saga closed. 1/3 people currently in saga: Gomek,Papa Bush. Gomeks age: 13 Beginning: “pardon me” said the demon. “The name is jastly” he said. Gomek replied “Yes?” The demon Jastly had a mischievous look on his red face, ridges around them. He really was kind of short. Gomek heard a voice He paused as the people walking about him In West City to see who was talking to him. “Get out of there Gomek!” “can you open this box” Said the demon “it was my great, great, great elders possession. “ “only can be opened by Saiyan blood.” Gomek bit his thumb he put his blood on the box. “wait how did you know I was a saiyan!” The demon chuckled. “ My great elder was the great Babidi he left this box behind. It had a note on it “last resort on it” it was babidi’s worst weapon! And I intend of ending the saiyans! It’s a greater weapon than the Majin buu." “grrr!” A giant flash came out of the box blinding the world. “WHAT! ANOTHER SAIYAN!” as they saw a saiyan with golden saiyan armor appear before us. All the citizens of West city were running with terror written on their faces. Gomek froze. Word count: 205 |
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| Gomek | Nov 15 2010, 11:08 PM Post #2 |
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In an attempt to run, the great saiyan Takion blasted gomek out of sight. Takion Looked at the demon and grinned. He started powering up, and Gomek then realized There is no way to stop him from his objective. Gomek screamed and started powering up also. Takion realized the power from Gomek and laughed. Gomek went into a frenzy of pure rage. Flying to takion in hope of ripping him appart. He sent and Energy Dan attack. He punched Takion again...and again no use. Takion grabbed Gomek and said the words "GALIC GUN!" Gomek's eyes widen Gomek had passed out. Word count 101+205= 306 |
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| Gomek | Nov 16 2010, 10:11 AM Post #3 |
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Gomek Wakes up to the smell of smoke. He saw dirt,rocks,rubble of buildings everywhere. He got up to notice that what was once west city is now a crater of dust and dirt. His whole body felt cold. He took a look at his Right arm to see that it was scratched,bloody, and burnt up. "You!, you destroyed the town of west city,Destroyed my friends, and my pride." "I WONT LET YOU GET AWAY WITH THIS" Gomek screamed. He darted toward this tremendous energy. As he passed the lush green forest. he said "Come on guys im going to need a little help." He felt something he was very close the the enemy. Gomek Arrived. Takion chuckled. Gomek felt a great energy about him he heard a voice "There you go, Now beat him down!" Gomek nodded. He started to cry, and yelled. He threw a punch that he felt that wasn't even from him it was so powerful. In surprise he punched right through Takions armor and striked him in the stumach. Takions let out a gasp. Gomek sent an energy dan attack while takion was vulnerable. Takion has had enough, and grabbed Gomek and blasted him. Word count 202 + 306 = 508 ![]() |
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| Gomek | Nov 16 2010, 11:05 AM Post #4 |
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Gomek moved as takion blasted the ki blast, but was hit barely in the arm in instantly was really injured. He looks at Takion and sais "why are you doing this?" Takion chuckled. He dashed to Gomek and said "To destroy this planet." Gomek put his hand on takions chest and blasted with all his power, and saved a energy Dan attack in his hand. He punched and let it go. Takion laughed then stopped. He blasted down from the sky to the green forest.Takions armor is completely destroyed."I have a nudge he is just testing my strength!" Gomek thought. "why dont you just blow it up then?" "Ok." "No!" Gomek yelled Takion grinned. Word count: 116 + 508 = 624 |
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| Gomek | Nov 16 2010, 09:47 PM Post #5 |
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Gomek felt like he was being toyed with. He really didn't like his situation. He knows he needs some help. He senses another powerlevel was very near by. He turned to see his great buddy seth. He really was glad to see him, because he knew he couldn't survive. "got here as soon as i heard!" said seth. Seths eyes widened. He was starring at the injuries of Gomek. He has never seen anything like it before. Gomek nods as a reply to what seth said. Gomek tells Seth "ok we need to find a vulnerable spot, ok?" seth agreed " yes but how he won't let us near him!" "I know a way" said Gomek. Gomek took out the box that had earlier summoned Takion. Takion Face changed from a grin to a growl. He despised enprisonment boxes. Takion stood up, and laughed. Gomek had no idea what was going on with Takion, but he knew it wasn't good. Takion powered up, and transformed. He was different now. Gomek had no idea the power Takion now has. Word count: 177 177+624= 801 words all together. |
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| Gomek | Nov 17 2010, 01:32 AM Post #6 |
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"kaa---meeeehhhhh----haaaa---meeee---haaaa!!!!!" seth blasted at Takion. Takion changed his stance in the air and let the blast hit him. He was having trouble deflecting it back at seth. Takion realized that Gomek sent an energy dan attack also, so he knew he wasn't going to deflect it. He gave a smirk like he wasn't happy, but he didn't care. He just let go of the blast. It did some minor damage. A few scratches underneath his saiyan armor clothing that has been torn and ripped. Takion had now started stretching,scracking knuckles, and neck. He look at the saiyans and smiled a very creepy smile. "ok,now the testings done." "It's my turn." takions smiled. Gomek and seths eyes widened. "your bluffing" said Gomek "really?" "Tri Beam!" yelled Takion. word count: 128 + 801 = 929 words total. |
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| OldPapa | Nov 17 2010, 08:20 AM Post #7 |
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"That was my coffee," said Papa, greeting the alien Takion with a shoulder slam. He was moving so fast that the only sound he made was a whistle of death before the thud. As Takion flew back from the impact, Papa threw up a meaty fist and gritted his teeth with the rage of a spartan champion. "THAT WAS MY COFFEE! MINE! If you're going to destroy something, destroy the fetish shop--" his voice lowered with an expression of sadness. "My precious cafe . . . white chocolate soy lattes . . . gone. Gone forever. . . . " His short tuft of lion gold hair flapped in the wind. The tails of his navy blue suit danced in unison. Papa was so tall that his blocky presence hid much of the devastation behind him. If a camera had been trained on his manly figure, it would have panned over to reveal the remains of a few commercial buildings. He took no chances and fired his second greeting--an "Energy Dan" storm of ki blasts. Takion would make good practice for this new technique he had just learned. Next, he disappeared at eyeblink speed, ready to make his next move, unwilling to give up the momentum in his sudden attack. WORD COUNT: 200/200 |
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| Gomek | Nov 17 2010, 10:26 AM Post #8 |
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"Huh?" said Seth "I dont understand where he came from?" "Do we trust him? seth asked all these questions in panic. "calm down, He is on our side hopefully." Gomek said "He is mighty strong, and can help us do some serious damage or even destroy Takion." Gomek rushed over to see if He could help out any. Gomek just powered up a little and sent an energy Dan. Word count: 69 |
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| Gomek | Nov 17 2010, 10:50 AM Post #9 |
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Takion Has now dissapeared Seth yells "look out!" As Gomek sees that Takion has just punched through Gomek's saiyan armor. He Grasped, and spat out a glob of spit and blood. Everyone saw the power of that punch was way more powerful then he thought could be possible, but as he was falling he notice Takion punched right through him. He just let go, and blacked out as he was falling. Seth saw the bang when Gomek hit the floor.He couldn't believe Gomek had been killed,but Seth doesn't know what Gomek is doing, because he had told him of a plan. He said it would work. Seth still thought that it wasn't good so He went to go join Papa. He sent his strongest move the kamehameha! Takion was blasted in the smoke he could tell he was still there, but it had to do some damage. Takion sent a blast at Papa and seth it was massive. a Galic gun! word count 163 + 69 = 232 + 929 = 1161 |
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| Gomek | Nov 18 2010, 01:37 AM Post #10 |
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Seth was stunned.He wasn't aware of what was happening. Takion all the sudden stopped. As Seth was preparing to die, Takion said it's not possible! As He saw Gomek rise. Full health, and not a scratch on him. Takion had a terrified look on his face. Gomek had become what he feared the most,and takion can't stop the power flowing within Gomek.Gomek had a blue glow. Seth had always noticed when in a fight or in anger he glows blue. Gomek had now become a true saiyan warrior. What Takion feared most. He was an outcast made ultimate. With one weakness. Anything with true power. Beleiving in what they do can't be hurt by Takion. Takion is now shaking in fear, and grins trying to keep himself from acting with a weakness. He looked at them with a devilish face and chuckled. "You really should destroy that riddle in the box." Gomek reads "Pride beats the best Saiyan pride destroys all" "Total give away." "YOU THINK YOU CAN WIN!" takion exclaimed. "I am a ultimate saiyan, a LEGEND!" Gomek felt his power decreasing. He thinks to himself "It is going down by the second, I think the energy i was given is a timelimit!" Gomek raised his hand aiming at Takion. Takion changing stances to block the attack.*shwish* Gomek teleported behind Takion elbowing him in the back. Takion front flipped two or three yards. Gomek got in the possition of an energy dan attack, when Takion screamed "GALIC GUN!" Gomek just saw a purple light ripping his armor appart, and now Takion smiled. "Where did your pride go?" Takion chuckled. Gomek growled, and thought: How did my energy leave! Word count 283 + 1161 = 1444 |
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| Komandr | Nov 18 2010, 04:51 PM Post #11 |
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Guys, all rps must be 300 words+ Papa bush, you should know this... |
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| OldPapa | Nov 18 2010, 10:30 PM Post #12 |
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In his rage, Papa had let his overconfidence get the best of him. Normally he would have been more calculating in his attack but since his morning had been ruined by this faux pas interloper, all he wanted was a good clean hit. Takion went flying and Papa chased after him. Many of the blasts from the energy dan missed. Papa growled. If he wasn't too busy leading his onslaught with an outstretched arm, ready to punch this bastard and make him his new throwaround plaything, he would have snapped his fingers. Next time. He set a reminder in his thoughts to practice his aim. Power was nothing if the target was unhittable. What was he thinking, rushing in like that against an opponent he had no intel on. Clearly his aim was so bad that his opponent could dodge from a clean hit from a surprise attack. Just roll in with the punches, thought Papa. Shake this guy. You've got it. Just do it. Do it faggot. What was he thinking now? He shook off the weird thoughts before stranger insults could manifest. Just as he about to land a strike, Takion regained himself. He caught Papa's fist in both hands and meneuvered quick with a knee to the gut. Or so he thought. The fist vanished just as an elbow connected down on Takion's neck. Papa, having cooled his temper, had anticipated these fast reflexes and countered with a speed teleport. The first attack was just a parry. The real attack came from behind. Papa side-kicked him back towards his new ally. Seth, was it? He fired another volley of energy blasts. Most of the missed, but fortunately a few hit. As he watched the explosion waft away from the saiyan's back like water off a stone, he turned his palm over to examine his hand. What was wrong with him? Twice now his aim was off. He'd never encountered this problem before. What a day. He glanced over at the ruins of what used to be a bustling commercial district. =-=-=-= Someone screamed. A man was falling. Papa snapped out of his thoughts. The meaty saiyan thug with no eyebrows had put a hole into one of the two fighters. Ignore Takion for now, thought Papa. He was descending through a high velocity frostbite of spring wind to the ground and its platter of concrete wreckage. Faster than you could say, "shff", Old Man Papa had used a speed teleport to close distance between him and the young fighter. "Who is he?" asked Papa, catching the dying person in his arms. Without thinking, he whipped out his only sensu bean and put it into Gomek's mouth, hoping the rejuvenating powers of the magic seed would sew new flesh over the gaping cavity and replace his strength. For now, Seth would have to hold his own against the monster. Papa added to his new ally Gomek, "Tell me everything you know. I need to know his weakness." [Word Count: 551 / 751] |
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| Gomek | Nov 19 2010, 12:53 AM Post #13 |
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"Seth replied to Papa, He get angry when you get confident!" Seth knew Gomek wasn't ok. He powered up. Knwoing that he was their only hope, because papa was helping them donw there. Papa noticed that seth was getting ready with his Big attack.Seth as concentrated and devoted as possibel. He was confident that this would take him down the majority of his health. He thought of all his friends,parents friends,school mates that have been killed. His best friend gomek, Takion did it. "He did it all!" Screamed seth he was agitated. " I am Devoted, I promise to kill you at all costs!" Seth Powered up. He was crying the rocks started flying. Takion started leting out gasps of panic. Seths power was tremendous! He had experience true rage at this poing he has relized that he could take it all out on takion all of it. His parents abandoning him, Being alone all his life, tragedy following him everywhere. "WHY!" Lightining surrounding him. Takion now realizing that this is his final hour if as planned works. "Hahaha!" Takion said as he bursted laughing into wierd laugh. Seth stopped everything. "No!" Gomek screamed. "It worked, He got you out of your concetration!" Seth ran up to his thinking "Why you, Im going to beat you to a bloody pulp!" seth threw punches.Energy dan, Kamehameha,fusion beam,masenko. Seth knew he was done for. He did all his moves! leaning over in exhaust, Takion was sitting there asleep! How was he asleep during all that! thought seth. Wait I Wasn't concentrated! "Argh, No i won't let you!" Takion looked at him and nodded his head saying no. Seth was shaking gasping as if saiying "huh?" Takion looked at seth then nodded yes. "Special!" Seth knew what was going to happen. He was stunned. Takion had been charging it the whoile time and nobody noticed! Seth closed his eyes as if getting ready to meet his doom. *BLAST* A ki blast Launched and hit Seth. "Special.....BEAM.....CAAAAANNNOOOON!!!!!!! it knicked Seths arm partially, because the ki blast didn't do all that much to blast him. It was all that Gomek could do though in his brutal condition of getting blasted,punched,thrown up,down. He had fought as a proud should. The most improtant part is that he hasn't given up. He is still striving for success. He has it on his mind to destroy the saiyan. "Takion, On my honor, I promise to kill you at all costs The voice of Gomek surprised the saiyan. Takion looked at Gomek, and grinned. "nice to see your back in my little game." "Grrrr!" "You know i won't let you get away with this!, Takion!" Takion just looked back at seth. Gomek's eyes widened. Seth's arm had been almost ripped off, from mid shoulder down. Gomek looked angrier than ever. "What did you do with the person who brought you back?" "I ate him." Gomek's widened. " I ate him as a candy, jeeze don't worry." Gomek growled at him. Seth in shock still. Gomek and Papa were the only ones helping. They were the only ones that could possibly even help as the newscast came by Gomek knew what was going to happen. This is going to be tragic if we don't get all these innocent humands out of here papa! Gomek told them to leave, but that just got the attention of Takion. "What do we have here?" "More players?" "Ahh, I see. Lets test their strength" "NO!" Gomek exclaimed. *boom* one of the helicopter bursted into flames as the ki blast shot it down. "looks like they need some training to do." Takion said chucking. "Is this a game to you!?!?" "Yes." Gomek thought he wasn't serious before. He bow knows that he is not joking. Or serious at all. He hasn't even done his worst. They have just been getting tested this whole time. Gomek couldn't believe what was happening. All this happening in one day. Taking up almost the whole day. Trying to save the life of innocent bystanders. He had really tried his hardest, But he needs tactics. Which he isn't as good at, as he is blasting. But blasting doen't really help in this case we need something big. Someone who can do big damage, but that we can trust. He doesn't know anyone. So he realized that he is just going to have to play his game. "Are you just going to sit there you guys?" "All of you?" "I think im ready to do game over." As Takion played his game. Gomek was try to think of a plan to destroy Takion. Word count: 780 + 1444 = 2224 other character words: 551 + 200 =751 + 2224 = 2975 |
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| Gomek | Nov 20 2010, 12:35 AM Post #14 |
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Gomek's struggle find a way to defeat Takion was harder than trying to turn super saiyan out of the blue. Gomek drawing out all the nergy he possibly could. He could tell that Takion was getting impatiant, But Gomek was wondering why he was sent to destroy this planet. Gomek was puzzled. He is Ancient so he probably thinks that king vegeta sent him. To destroy the planet, But why earth. That's why they sent the legendary Goku. Gomek knew he was a descendent. He knew he had to hold his pride against this foe. Like he read about frieza. "Who did you get these orders from." Gomek knew the answer. "King vegeta." "What planet were you meaning to kill?" "Frieza, this planet." "No!,You idiot!" "This is earth!" Gomek couldn't beleive that he had done catacalystic damage to the planet for the wrong reasons.That Red demon was the one to blame. Gomek screamed. Takions tail was exposed from his sash. It was a gold color. Seth has seen this transformation before. There was a full moon, and eclipse! Seth with the arm that was good. used the move destructo disk at Gomek. Since he had been in shock his aim was horrible and hit the forest. Gomek's muscles grew tremendously.He notices that Takions great ape form isn't the regular it's golden. Seth fell to the floor. Forgetting about his own tail, he was too focused on gomek and takions. He started to grow. As he grew his arm seemed to regenerate. Gomek has now become great ape and so has takion. Takion laughed. It seems that this planet has to die too he thought. Gomek was out of control. Attacking the golden great ape. Now he could actually do damage. Gomek was wild, breaking buildings,mountains,Takion. He grabed takion's wrist straight and slammed his knee going upword breaking takions arm.Takion grownled and bit at Gomek.flattening the trees below them. Destroying more land that is needed. Gomek found it amusing to hulk boulders at Takion did nothing. It did minor damage but it did damage at least. Gomek mouthed beamed Takion with a tremendous power of uncontrolled wild oozaru.He was body slaming every thing then they saw seth. Bigger and stronger than both of them. he murmured "where were we." Seth called in a big bold great ape voice. Seth with ultima strength threw a giga punch at Takions stomach. Crack! Seth ripped right through. plah! Takion spat out blood and spit. and fell to the floor.Gomek attacked Seth out of wildness. Seth grabbed his tail and destructo disced it. slice! His tail flew off. Seth also severed Takion's Tail when he went barreling down to plumet to his death. Gomek saw Takion. He was severly injured. Gomek pleaded to Seth Let him go! Seth grabed his sword.Gomek restrains him. In a manner saying " I won't let you!" Seth put it back growling. Takion aching in pain squeezing his eyes shut he screamed in pain. He put Takion up and gave him as senzu bean to make him better. He looked like it did nothing but his wound was completly healed. Gomek knew that he didn't mean for all this to happen, and thought that they could use him as a friend. Even though Papa Bush and Seth would think he is crazy, But they would need someone like Takion. A strong saiyan that could protect earth if they trained him with the force of good. Gomek was now starting to understand the concept of Good and evil. He knew he must use his power for good. Like his ancesters and maybe one day become legendary.So After Takion was starting to feel better he was trying hard to make Takion feel better. Gomek knew it was a great big misunderstanding, But he knew that Takion could be trained again, For the use of good. Gomek gave Takion a pat on the back, and told Seth that he could be on their side. "So Takion, You think you want to be with us?" "I mean this whole misunderstanding was pretty intense, but if we would only have known." "Sure, Gomek it would be an honor to serve with you guys." "Takion come to my house we can all have dinner,practice,learn new moves. Ok?" "Alright. Sorry about your town. I can restore it if you would like." "Please do" Takion pushed a button on his cuffs it looks like a watch but does other stuff.Right before their eyes they see the town reapear. Gomek smile. Seth smiled and laughed. Papa bush was probably happy he could get his coffee back. Gomek flew signaled themto follow them to his house.Takion was right behind him.They passed the mountains,the desert,finally the east town forest.On the way there they talked about what they were going to eat and how good it was going to be. They were all proud to have worked it all out. At the big mansion that Gomek had built.Gomek said follow me guys and went over his traps set out for the bounty hunters sent to follow him. left,right,right,left,right. Gomek accidentaly fell on a tree trunk and everyone laughed. Gomek sat the face flat on the trunk for hours. Everyone sat down at the table after Seth had to go get Gomek. He realized his arm was all better. Full with feeling and a brand new freshfeeling about it. Gomek laughed as he told jokes at the table. Takion had his eyes fixed on the cloud laying out side. Takion growled. Then relaxed with it move out of view then growled when it came in view the whole time gomek and the other people they invited over like master roshi,and a couple other friends, most descendants of the legendary z fighters. Finaly the great mouth watering smell of chicken,pork,roast,rice,sandwhiches. Everyone sat at the table hogging down the food even worse that goku. Takion didn't realize what to do he hadn't eaten for so long. He didn't know what chicken was.So Gomek explained and he hogged it down like the rest of them. They had a good time. They tried playing ping pong Seth won the first round. Takiong got the Hang of it and got obsessed with it and beat everone after.They played poopl that Gomek had just bought and, no one could get it so Takion blew it up. Takion laughed. They watched tv, and Takion wanted to battle this so called batman. Gomek explained to himt hat it's fake. Takion felt like he had won the battle of batman and him already. So he was happy, And then he wanted to play ping pong again. They decided to play Gomek one most of them on Takion he blew up the ping pong balls that Gomek won on. He said they were magical or something. They went to go outside and train til Seth went home, and Gomek had told him to build a house out of the woods. He did, and thats the end of it so far. Wordcount:1197 + 2224 = 3421 |
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| Gomek | Nov 20 2010, 02:35 PM Post #15 |
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Until The explosion down in east city. Takion was asleep, but the noise of the explosion made him wide awake. They stared at eachother like if something bad was going on. Gomek called Seth. He had heard the explosion, and infact saw it. A saiyan arrived in town. It called them out to test their new friend ship. Takion signaled Gomek to get out of the house. He knew they were in for a fight so he transformed into his new saiyan armor. They blasted out of the forest headed to vanquish the destroyer at east city. They saw it was helicopters. more than 10 thousand. There was a leader he had his arms folded and grinned and pointed to the city "Grrr, No!" Gomek send an energy dan. The He was sitting in a floating chair device. He laughed and created a beam of energy.Seth had arrived and lined up with Takion. Gomek did a backfilp and lined up too. They all did their signature move. "Galic Gun!" "Kamehameha" "Kaaa--meeee-haa-meee-ha! Energy dan!" The blasts were all charged up and ready to blast. The helicopters bailed. Takion was telling them to steady it for the right moment. "Gomek it's your call tell when to fire." takion said. "steady...steady...FIRE!" They all fired at the enemy. The blasts joined together to make one big blast. an explosion with a mushroom cloud formed. The enemy was vanquished. And the city was saved. The town cheering for the saiyans. Word count: 247 + 3421 = 3668 Conclusion: 800 words +800 words +2000 words = 3600 words = +200 zeni, +1 DP, +6 all stats, +2 rp Credits, +10 exp +200 zeni, +1 DP, +6 all stats, +2 rp Credits, +10 exp +400 zeni, +2 DP, +15 all stats, +3 rp Credits, +25 exp -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 800 zeni, 4 DP,+27 all stats, +7 rp credits, 45 exp. |
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