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| Topic Started: Nov 22 2010, 04:50 PM (256 Views) | |
| Volg Zangief | Nov 22 2010, 04:50 PM Post #1 |
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The Red Wolf
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Hello, I want to start off by stating in general that I am not directing this comment to any particular individual whatsoever. What I would like to suggest is directed to Role Players in general, and as the title states it is about detail. I have been "snooping" around other peoples Role Plays and notice a great lack in detail for the majority. The dominant subject for details in most Role Play here is emotional and thought based. Detail however is also very well used in action, how certain things unfold along with detailed analysis of the happenings to avoid conflict. Most of the details are covered on the main page, but I want to encourage Role Players to get beyond what the main page says by itself. Most role players spin out 400 words or more in emotion and thought based topics, and when it is time for the action all they can push out is "throwing a punch" "swinging a kick" ect. What I want to know is how fast, how hard, where, which arm, which foot, and I would like comparisons. Would your punch rival a speeding bullet, or are you attacking with the ferocity of a tiger? Things like this that not only spice your Role Play, but make it generally more enjoyable to read. I would like anyone who has read this far to watch this video. It has hundreds of battle details which you might incorporate into your next Role Play. |
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| Alex | Nov 22 2010, 05:12 PM Post #2 |
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Officer of the Damaskian Army
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Pretty good battle. I had read about Doomsday but never saw it. What series is that from? |
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| Vlad | Nov 22 2010, 05:15 PM Post #3 |
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good movie...still there is only room in my heart for one villain of the S and that’s brainiac |
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| Volg Zangief | Nov 22 2010, 05:20 PM Post #4 |
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The Red Wolf
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They created a movie to honor Suparman's death, the original 1992 story line was adapted to an animated version. Which movie, I am not exactly sure. |
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| An Old Android 17 | Nov 22 2010, 05:44 PM Post #5 |
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The world is a cold dark place
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Ive seen that movies its pretty good. |
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| Seta | Nov 23 2010, 04:55 AM Post #6 |
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The Right Turn in History
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I think everyone knows how devastating my hits to their kneecaps are. That's all I have to say on the subject. Especially considering I did the description class and have posted many different walkthroughs on how to do detail and description properly. |
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