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Relampago; Custom Fundamental
Topic Started: Dec 2 2010, 10:25 PM (644 Views)
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Technique Name: Relampago

Attack Power: 3

Ki Drain: 6%

Action Cost: 1

Effect(s): None

Description: The user uses ki to manipulate cellular electrons which form lightning at the users disposal. The user concentrates the lightning at the tips of his index and middle fingers before shooting an incredibly fast lightning bolt at the target.

Special: NONE

Note: Lightning travels at 93,000 miles per second

Total SP cost: 6SP
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I'm sorry, but a fundamental that can not be dodged? I just don't see that happening.
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Seems fair to me. Like a Mesposo, only it's a bit more draining on him, and fairly creative with his own race. I like it, myself.
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I'm sorry, but a fundamental that can not be dodged? I just don't see that happening.


They have undodgeable fundamentals already.
Jai's feather thing was approved. Mesposo is undodgeable too.
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ah well, after my Getsuga Tenshou (which I switched for detonation tail) we get another Bleach named attack :P

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Actually Relampago means lightning bolt in spanish, I had no idea their was already a move with the same name.
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Actually there's already a move that is basically the same thing. MINE. My Kyushojutsu basically is the same thing as yours. Except mine I have to touch. Hence 'touch of death'.

Also, electricity would affect androids a lot more than an organic. Fried components anyone?
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Yeah when you say they experience numbness you should be more specific

And I believe it costs more SP to make undodgeable AND for the extra effect of say.. paralysis.

what's more, Androids would indeed suffer more from the attack because they're generally metallic and you'd be a fool if you didn't know metal conducts electricity.
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euh wrong my dearest friends...living tissue...by normal standards that is, is build out of 60 to 80% water, which according to the EGS or electrical guidance scale is five times as susseptable for electricity, meaning it is easier affected by it than metal.

BUT

on the other hand, a human (65-70% water) can withstand a shock of over 50,000 volt (though only on low ampere) while electrical components would be fried by that same shock. I leave it up to you to decide on this, just giving some facts
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It is all based on two factors.

Most androids outside of terminator style androids have hulls as well as skeleton protecting important mechanisms.

First obstacle is the hull, if the conductive metal is too mediocre a conductor it can shield with a slight to high joint interference and sensory delay. A metal as Titanium would be a saving metal for the hull of an android struck by lightning for its low conductivity of heat and electricity, temporarily paralysis with little chance of termination as the hull is insufficiently breached.

Same with the skeleton but now more vulnerable for its slimmer and covers the brain and any damage to that would be a game changer or a termination blow.

Now we must factor in what the android was conditioned for, an android conditioned to survive no matter the conditions would likely have mechanism based electrical shielding or even assimilation of electronic energies to a backup energy supply or just storage.

All and all my take is it’s a Taser for all races at least.
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I have edited the technique to reflect given suggestions. The technique now stuns the opponent for his/her two next actions. The damage level has been raised to 3 and the SP cost to 6. The last change was that I changed it to an Advanced technique due to its extended strength. Also know that I will have to wait till Monday to have the proper amount of SP.

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It's too weak to be custom advanced plus do you have the ability to make one yet? And it would have to have a critical to stun.
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I posses 5 fundementals so yes, I will remove the effects other than Cannot be dodged. I will also revert it to fundamental and lower the Ki cost slightly.
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I meant a custom advanced. You have to unlock the ability to have a custom advanced.
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You need 100 INT.
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The technique has been further edited and is now ready for approval.
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Wouldn't a bright light alert someone to the attack about to be unleashed instead?
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Tell that to the Taiyoken. It could also cause you to have a reptillian reaction. Bet that would work great on Changelings! :lol:
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I don't exactly understand what you mean by a Reptilian reaction... especially considering I've cared for a fair few in my time.

I would think that the flash of the power up at the end of one's hand would be vastly different from the solar flare in many ways. Not least of which it would probably affect the user as well considering the source of the flash.

And even so, an eye shield would help in protecting the opponent.

I'm personally wary of techs that are close to mine.
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Further edited, and if this doesn't work, you may close this thread.
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Ki Drain should now be 6%.
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I don't think I'm going to be approving anymore lightning based attacks after this one. Only so much you can do with it.

But... approved.
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Thats sobering, I have several other lightning based techniques in line. Yet thank-you Pan-chan.
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