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| Spontaneous Combustion; Custom Fundamental | |
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| Topic Started: Nov 17 2010, 09:30 PM (993 Views) | |
| OldPapa | Nov 17 2010, 09:30 PM Post #1 |
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Technique Name: Spontaneous Combustion Attack Power: 3 SP: 16 Ki Drain: 3% Action Cost: 3 Effect(s): Burn Description: Years of hard and disciplined training of the family bloodline art of the Skull and Bones fraternity has gifted Bush with sensory of aura and manipulation of chakra beyond most people. This is not the flare of energy one sees when powering up, but rather a more subtle energy field that exists around a person at all times (even when powered down or their ki signature is too faint to sense). This energy is fuel ready to be set on fire by a mental spark. This technique is Spontaneous Combustion. It is not enough to concentrate. By default, he snaps his fingers to begin the process or igniting a person into flames, although this can be accomplished by other means. After the initial combustion, the person's aura will continue to burn, hence the attached critical. The attack level is based on the opponent as if they were using the attack on themselves, because it is a self-harming technique Only Papa Bush can use this technique. The critical only applies to someone around its user's power level (i.e. 1.5x PL). |
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| Yon | Nov 17 2010, 10:06 PM Post #2 |
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I'm gar for you Bush. Don't make me homo now. I don't think it will work on Pan. If Videl used this move....it might be a different story. Funny tech you made there though. |
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| OldPapa | Nov 17 2010, 10:20 PM Post #3 |
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I'm not going to fight Pan, and even if I did, it would be up to the judge's discretion. But how I critical depends on higher intelligence to wow and determination to make you sick to your stomach. GAR. |
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| Koyu | Nov 18 2010, 07:33 PM Post #4 |
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Throwing this out there, but it's pretty much impossible for a Namekian, or any other being without a gender, many of whom inhabit this site, to be GAR for you. |
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| Android 13 | Nov 18 2010, 09:02 PM Post #5 |
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It doesn't necessarily have to be like that, Oboe. It could be more that they are just so astound by his awesomeness/stupidity that it affects them. Take Hercule for example, even Vegeta had a few "WTF" moments when he saw him being all high and mighty. |
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| OldPapa | Nov 18 2010, 09:46 PM Post #6 |
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Vegeta is right. It has little to do with gender or sexuality. It is what it is. An epic entrance. |
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| An Old Android 17 | Nov 18 2010, 09:51 PM Post #7 |
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Gar!!! |
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| Android 13 | Nov 18 2010, 10:02 PM Post #8 |
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Why do you people keep calling me Vegeta? |
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| Seta | Nov 18 2010, 10:05 PM Post #9 |
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Like I said before to other people, KC is lucky I let him have his 100% chance of poison. You can't have auto just because your determination is 501 and your opponent's is 500. |
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| Yon | Nov 18 2010, 10:06 PM Post #10 |
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Vegeta, I'm GAR for you. Now I hope this garlicious move gets approved by someone I'll never be GAR for. |
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| OldPapa | Nov 19 2010, 08:35 PM Post #11 |
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Cygnus has auto-immobilize if one of his stats is just 1 higher. Okay so I want auto criticals based on higher stats, what is fair? If INT/DET higher, then effectiveness of critical increases by 1/2, left up to judge's discretion? If INT/DET is 10% higher? |
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| Seta | Nov 19 2010, 08:47 PM Post #12 |
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Did you put in the 'or both' a little while ago? You can't have both. If you remove the 'or both' and no auto. |
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| OldPapa | Nov 20 2010, 01:58 PM Post #13 |
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Gar doesn't work only on the condition that det or int is higher. I will remove "auto", however and adjust the conditions. |
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| Seta | Nov 20 2010, 10:28 PM Post #14 |
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I think you mean actions, not turns. You can't take away full turns using a fundamental. |
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| Gosai | Nov 22 2010, 03:37 PM Post #15 |
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Papa Bush, we must form a Ginyu Force ersatz. Because all I see is Gosai watching this, and adding commentary. And then Ikusa no Inu to the face of the distracted foes! |
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| OldPapa | Nov 27 2010, 08:49 PM Post #16 |
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changed 'turns' to 'actions'. |
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| OldPapa | Dec 3 2010, 11:23 PM Post #17 |
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Bump new move! |
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| Volg Zangief | Dec 3 2010, 11:34 PM Post #18 |
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The Red Wolf
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It's ki, not chakra....
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| Gosai | Dec 3 2010, 11:50 PM Post #19 |
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Energy is energy. Just depends on the region you're from. Chakra was the term in India. It sounded exotic, probably why Masashi Kishimoto used it in Naruto. If I'm not mistaken some Native American tribes use the term 'mana' for similar internal energy. |
It ain't over 'till ya can't think thoughts anymore.![]() Gosai's stats | |
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| Seta | Dec 4 2010, 12:41 AM Post #20 |
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1) Seems a little godmoddy. Controlling someone else's aura? Yeah... 2) I don't like fundamentals having criticals since you can use them infinitely. |
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| OldPapa | Dec 4 2010, 12:47 AM Post #21 |
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Well, we only get a limited number of custom moves and it's up to the judge to award the critical. Most of the fighters here have incredibly powerful moves, and you have to admit, this is very original. What if I were to limit its usage, would that be okay? Or reduce the attack power to 2? |
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| Gosai | Dec 4 2010, 12:49 AM Post #22 |
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I'd thought this was an advanced from the description myself. Also, Pan, suppose the description had the user igniting some special component that happens when the ki/chakra/mana/what-have-you of the victim is mingling with oxygen around them? If the aura shows up like a gas or fire it must have some other affect perhaps? I dunno, I just like this attack because it's kind of similar to the Hiryuu Shoten Ha, which I really like. Even then though, that attack is advanced/finisher material. I just like the concept of a move that gets more powerful by having stronger opponents. :lol: |
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| OldPapa | Dec 4 2010, 12:51 AM Post #23 |
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and as for the "controlling someone's aura", everyone eminates a field of energy around themselves as a result of the inner "chakra" functions. Chakra, by the way, are non-physical organs according to certain philsophies. Naruto ripped off this concept and turned into it another form of ki, which is inappropriate considering the origin. A person theoretically has 7/8 main energy centers located in parallel with the major physical organs such as the genitals, throat, heart, brow, and head. The attack simply causes the potential energy to react into flames, hence spontaneous combustion. And it doesn't make sense for the damage to be based on my own attack level because this is the opponent's energy potential we are talking about. |
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| OldPapa | Dec 4 2010, 12:54 AM Post #24 |
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well put it this way, the move also is exponentially weaker against weaker opponents. What would you prefer: this or Gar. Honestly, I think this is more fitting to the style of this rpg rather than having a silly dragonball style move. I put effort into this move!
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| Diive | Dec 4 2010, 12:54 AM Post #25 |
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Please remove the word "Freemasons" from your description. Our fraternity has nothing to do with the sensing of auras or manipulation of chakra, and associating this tech with me and my brothers is very demeaning. Feel free to replace "Freemasons" with "Occult". That word more accurately applies to the art you're describing. |
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