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Sandanju; Custom Fundamental
Topic Started: Dec 19 2010, 07:30 PM (408 Views)
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Name: Sandanju [-4 SP]

Attack Power: 2

Ki Drain: 3%, 1% Vitality

Action Cost: 1

Effect(s): None

Description: Your boxing prowess and incredible hit speed have given way to a new technique. Since the very day you acquired a glove you have prized your punch speed even though your feet aren't nearly as fast. In response you decide to challenge this into an ultimate attack and defense. To achieve this the user winds up his dominant fist as if to throw a normal punch, yet using his incredible hit speed the user throws ten punches in only a moment

The punches rain forward in a wild blur of fists in the target's direction. The range and aim may differ in any situation, the punches however stay mostly ground together. The punches are mostly light, the primary advantage is that when placed correctly they can create serious damage. When this is achieved the attack exactly resembles the spray of a "Sandanju", a shotgun.

Special: May be used in grapples - The tension created when thorwing and pulling back punches multiple times causes damage to the user.
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Your SP cost is too high. It should only be 6. (Damage level X 2)
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Edited, thank you, Digu.
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why the **** can it only be used twice? It's a fundy, they can be used infinitly
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Maybe he wants to make it that way? What business is it of any of ours if he wants to limit himself on it?
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It's meant to be a sorts of finishing blow. My character's strength and precision makes it so that if he must use this more than twice, he's doomed.
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Still though if it's something he's doomed if he tries to use it more than twice, I don't see why he couldn't make the effort anyway. Ah, but then again, my characters tend to be built on the 'human rolex' philosophy.
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Consider it somewhat like the Spirit Cannon (Or whatever) from Yu Yu Hakasho. It could only be used once every day or something like that.
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Postponing this technique until further notice.

EDIT: That was an inspiration, Digu.
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Fair enough. I was just getting kinda curious and like I said my characters tend towards the 'stubborn ox' archtype ;)
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I was admiring your toughness just yesterday, Gosai. My character however will be the ultra fast boxer who lands thousands of punches in seconds. That is also one of the reasons for me holding it off, changes need to be made.
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Haha, cool. Cant wait to see how the technique evolves.
Also, despite adding more clutter to the threat, I'm curious what weight class he's in.
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Feather Class in Japanese Classes for now, though I'm pretty sure he will grow some since he is only 15 years old.
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just a suggestion here. But since it is a fundimental and you are limiting it to two uses, why not have it be able to finish a combo? I.e. may be used in conjunction with 2 quick attacks. So for one action you'd have

2 Quick Attacks(jabs)+Thunder Fist


In a sense to end a combo? Just a suggestion :)
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That is almost like what I had in mind for later, the move itself will be a combo. Thanks by the way, it's spawned another Idea to add to it.
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