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Sarumi, The Wandering Loner; The bio of Sarumi Harunami.
Topic Started: Feb 19 2011, 06:05 AM (437 Views)
Sarumi Harunami
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Character you wish to be: Sarumi Harunami
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Planet you want to start on: Earth

Race:Human

Vitality:15
Speed:25
Toughness:10
Stamina:15
Strength:15
Intelligence:5
Charisma:5
Determination:10

Distribute 3 points between Intelligence, Charisma, and Determination:

Fundumental:
Bukujustu


How did you find this site:Google xD

What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: I enjoy DBZ and I've been researching and looking at a few rpg sites. This one looks pretty good and I wanna see it :). I plan on staying for a month, then if I like it 2 years.

(Recommended) AIM Screen Name: N/A

(Required) Email Address: o.mekhi@yahoo.com

It was a sunny afternoon, the sun casting the shimmering light among Earth. The grass danced in the wind as it blew past the mountains and meadows. A small grassy field, right in the outskirts of a nearby town, a girl sit. Her silky black hair waving in the wind. The glistening sunlight casting it's beautiful glow on it. Her eyes shone as amethyst, piercing and deep. She was soft and smooth, her creamy skin balancing out her slightly crooked smile. Her name was Sarumi, 10 years of age, with nowhere to go. The wind would pick her up and drift her to her next destination, and on and on the wind of hope would carry her on onto the next journey that awaits her.

Sarumi glanced around here surroundings, wondering what to do next. The most she could see was rustling beneath a bush where a squirrel might be, the placid chirping of a bird in a high branch of an oak tree, and the small noises of a nearby snail, making it's way up the tall oak tree. She had lost many things, only relying on her heart to take her on and on the endless journey. She began walking, treading forward with each step onto the dirt path of destiny. Things await her in her future, things mere humans could possibly never imagine. Every journey, begins with a single step...

History: It all began years ago, when Sarumi was born.Her parents Riyoko Sunimi and Oi Sunimini loved her very much and spent most of their time caring for her. She was torn away from her true parents in a brutal fire that started, killing her mother and father. Her father had hidden her in a small compartment under the house, then ran to save her mother. He was then never seen again. She was then found by an elderly couple named Chiyo Harunami and Piko Harunami, who took her in and nursed her. They lived in a small house off the outskirts of a nearby village, near a stream that stretched as far as the eye could see. They had a single son, Aoi Harunami, around her age. They grew up together, in happiness, they helped and cared for eachother, more than siblings nor friends. But then a deadly flood sweeped her village, killing evreyone in it, exept her. She was able to survive thanks to Aoi. He went out to get her to saftey after she was knocked out on impact with the table during the flood. People say he was dead, but she never belived them, she always kept hope to one day see him again. She then left, alone, one her own path. She wanders, looking for her place in the world. She hopes of good and great things to come and never looses hope of what she thinks is right.
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Veritas
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Your characters history and the RP example need to be 300 words each, not in total. The rp can be about anything, not necessarily involving your character just something that shows your skills and you chars history, well thats just obvious.
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Koyu
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In addition to what Janix said, you'll also need an image of the character.
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Sarumi Harunami
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Honestly I cannot think of more to add.
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Veritas
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You could try being more specific. Who were her parents? How'd they the adults die and she the infant survive? Where does she live? What happened to the boy who saved her from the flood and how did he do so? How and why was their relationship is as it is? Well you get the point.

You also didn't specify her race, so you should specify it and have fun with it in your bio.
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Sarumi Harunami
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Ok. Evreything you suggested I added. If it is still less can you sugest a little more. Thank you.
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Veritas
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Lol, thats not quite what I meant, they were merely suggestions as to what to add, so you would take an idea from there. I can't take you through holding your hand, I can only show you the path so you learn by yourself. Remember that the rp sample has to be 300 words+ and the bio has to be 300 words+ separately.
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Lilly
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It looks like you forgot to distribute the three points between Intelligence, Charisma and Determination.
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Sarumi Harunami
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Fixed.
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Codyislost1
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I plan on staying for a month, then if I like it 2 years.


Just because of what you said right there, I hope you get accepted. I really do. Looking over your join form and the things you have said, I can actually say that I like this noob. This is the first time I have admitted to that in probably two years now. Honesty is something that is hard, extremely hard, to find amongst these people here.
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OldOldToma
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Your Intelligence, Charisma, and Determination are separate from your Strength, Vitality, and so forth. They're called "traits," and are not part of the 100 points you distribute to your primary attributes.

You should separate them from your other stats and distribute three points between them, and put the points you spent on them originally into your attributes somewhere.
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Kaiya Nakano
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Yeah, you get 100 in the first five, then 3 to put in the next 3. Looks good otherwise though, if the RP posts are a little on the short side. Im just glad that we don't have an...

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Alex
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Seems good now. Register on the wiki and then PM me the URL to your account and I'll get you added.
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