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Fiammata Rapida; Custom Fundamental
Topic Started: Dec 9 2010, 12:20 AM (689 Views)
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Technique Name: Fiammata Rapida (6 SP)

Attack Power: 3

Ki Drain: 3%

Action Cost: 1

Effect(s): None

Description: Janix coming from a special family of warriors has always pulled out his ki in the form of flames, giving the ki a more physical form than usual. This has allowed the development of unique skills. The user begins this particular skill by concentrating a dense amount of ki into either of his/her palms, sometimes even both. After the correct amount of ki is collected the user liberates the ki while placing their palms in the opposite direction of which they are facing. This causes the flames to release all together and cause the user to propell forward in a more fast manner than usual, this can be used as an escaping skill. It can also be used as a surprise lunging attack, combining the newfound speed and a proper punch give birth to a mighty strike. Whenever it is being used, the form must be shouted. When its a lunge the user must say "Fiammata Rapida, assalto" whereas the user is escaping he must say "Fiammata Rapida, fuga". Each of these forms will let out a different sort of flame, assalto's flame is a more fierce, potent flame, while fuga's flame is more tranquil and peaceful, allowing him to make more evasive movements.

Edited to add SP cost.
Edited to add more description.
Edited Ki Drain.
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That word (liberate) ... I do not think it means what you think it means.

You might want to make this tech a little more clear in description.
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Liberate: to free; to release from restraint; to set at liberty.


But still I changed it to release in the second time I used it in my description so its easier to understand. I think its more clear as to what the purpose of this skill is, if not I can try to describe it even more. It's pretty much like using ki blasts as a turbo or to give you more acceleration.
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Except there's already Speed Teleport among other things. You're describing a tech that is supposed to make you go faster... yet overall seems useless in the grand scheme of things.

And then at the end you're basically using Wolf Fang Fist except with fire to it...
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It's supposed to be a kind of lunging attack or as a escape mechanism. I want it more for rping than anything. 'Sides it doesn't really matter if you find it useless since its my skill and I'd be the one using it not you, no offense. I see no reason why it shouldn't be approved, it doesn't raise stats, its not a type of god mod.
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well if you're sure... *shrugs* No skin off my bones.

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Wait, the SP cost is off. Isn't it 2 for every 1 damage?
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You are correct, will correct it accordingly. Would I need a re-approval?
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Ah. Yes. I missed that. Reapproved.
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Edited description, made it more fun =P seeking re-approval.
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I still think it's something that doesn't need a full on tech for since it seems mostly RP, but eh. Re-approved.
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Just edited the Ki drain as 6 is quite ridiculous now that I think about it, at least for what it does.
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