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Join Form; Panbookin played by raff1985
Topic Started: Mar 31 2011, 07:57 AM (1,342 Views)
raff1985
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Character I wish to be: Panbookin

Planet I want to start on: Valhalla (I picked this for training as I intend to train heavily then move on to jobs and earn Zeni to obtain a ship with training equipment, if there is a better path for a attempt at a lawful good growth path I am open to suggestions)

The way I Distributed my 100 points:
Vitality:25 ()
Speed: 10
Toughness:25
Stamina: 25 (+25 from calculating = 50 total)
Strength:15

Distribute 3 points between
Intelligence: 1
Charisma: 0
Determination: 2

the one green fundamental Technique I Picked to start with:
Energy Blast

Fighting Style I wish to have:
Calculating

How did you find this site: Link on DBZEpisode.org

What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying:
I am a Long time in person role player who has found himself without a group to game with. I hope to stay for as long as you'll have me, but may be infrequent in posting due to my being a novice at online RPGs.

(Recommended) AIM Screen Name: Chrisraff1985 (almost never on)

(Required) Email Address: chris@raff.us

Sample Role Play:

Jake awoken to the alarm blaring but like a fool he had hit the snooze button one too many times. He had thought he would get just a little more sleep. He had a tough day ahead and the extra rest would do him well.

“What would 15 more minutes matter?” Jake thought as he hit the button.

The next thing Jake knew he was looking at the clock and half the day was gone. He had missed his doctor’s appointment. His wife would never forgive him. It was bad enough the doctor had said he was infertile, now she would think he didn’t care.

“Like I don’t have enough to worry about?” He said to no one but himself, cursing his fate and punching the wall.

He had been laid off and hadn’t found the courage to tell her yet, and that was weeks ago! He was a coward and he knew it. She would leave him for sure.

“Why’d she have to go and want a kid now any way?!” the economy was still poor, and not getting any better despite what the propaganda said.

“I need a work out. At least that’s free!”

He ran out the door after having gotten dressed in his most disheveled pair of sweats and his feel good message shirt. He ran for what seemed like days, trying in vain to out run his problems.

When he finally stopped to catch his breath he had arrived at the gym. His feet had taken him to the one place where it all balanced out, the one place that made sense.

As he walked in he was greeted by his old trainer. “Ain’t you supposed to be at the doctor? What happened, the sailors get shy again?” the old dog said waving the junior trainee he’d been holding the punching bag for aside.

Bobby D always did know how to hit below the belt. Always knew just how to get him to loose his cool. And like every other time in his life it worked.

Jake “The Joke” they’d called him back in the day because he could never take one. Jake took a good solid swing at Bobby. Bobby, thinking it was all in good fun, didn’t even put up his guard. He fell to the ground.

There was a hush though out the gym. Everyone there knew that not even the joke could get way with that.
“So Jokey, Ya think ya got what it takes huh?” Bobby said as he got back up slowly with a deadly glint in his eye.

The first blow bobby sent Jake’s way Jake dodged like it was nothing. The second wasn’t much either but they were just tests to see how far Jake would go before backing down. Like stubborn mule he was Jake didn’t see the blows for what they were instead he tried for a lead in wit his left, bobby had always known him for a righty Jake didn’t think bobby knew that he’d been training his south paw to be as good as the main hand.

It did him no good Bobby was a master at his craft and when that south paw came at him, he just side stepped it and Jake went flying. “Over balanced didn’t I always tell Yaz not to loose your footing?”

Anger pilling upon self loathing, Jake ran at Bobby like a bull. Bobby couldn’t dodge Jake’s sheer speed this time and found himself knocked into the Bag.

Together they fell as all in the gym watched. Bobby D had had enough and twisted Jake into his signature move, one he hadn’t use in years yet knew like breathing. Jake had seen it once long ago but had never dared risk angering Bobby to this point, none of his students past or present would ever think of it. In moments Jake was in a sleeper hold that no one had ever been able to escape. He was conked out in seconds


When Jake woke up he was in his apartment, Susan, his wife, was there and so was Bobby D. She was holding the file he’d been hiding from her, his dismissal letter. In his frustration Jake had left it out.

“She’ll leave me for sure now I just know it…” Jake thought with fear.
You stupid idiot… you thought you could handle this alone? Without your friends? Without God?” she said with tears in her eyes.

“”All Yaz Hadda do was say sumthing Ya big galloot. Ya Know I’ve got your back. I’ve been looking for a chance to lighten my load, every one wants to be trained by the best and I’m getting too old for this shtick. I just needed a student good enough to pass the torch too.” Bobby said with something Jake had never recognized as coming from Bobby before. Was it Compassion?

And with that Jake fell back to bed and rested knowing that God had answered a prayer he’d never dared voice.
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OldeNappa
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Ummm I'm pretty sure your sample roleplay needs to be about your character. Not positive, but pretty sure. And your name is spelled Panboukin for the record.
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It doesn't have to be. It just has to be a sample of any kind of writing.
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Whaaaaaaaat?! I never knew that! No fair.
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Diive
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07:44 AM
Whaaaaaaaat?! I never knew that! No fair.

Well, Alex has said before that he prefers it to be a sample of writing for the character you want to be... so that he can see how you intend to write the character.

It's also a good idea to do some writing as the character you want to be before joining as them. How else will you know if that char works for you or not? If you join as a char you actually don't enjoy writing for, you'll just end up quitting the game or using one of your character switches right away.
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I wrote as a different charcter on my join form; as I recall, I wrote about the Trojan War, before joining as Yajirobe.

Also, the +25 from your fighting style doesn't get added to your stats, but to yoru bonuses instead. So you don't list it in your distributed stats.
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Seta
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I noticed you already tried to join the wiki. (Got the email today while doing shopping)

Should've waited until after Alex checked in.

I will state to go through your RP because there are some minor errors like not capitalizing 'Bobby'.
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raff1985
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I apologize for the errors I ran it through spell checker in MS word but it seems to have missed a few errors.
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