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Ki Crush/crushing Punch; Custom Advanced
Topic Started: Mar 1 2011, 11:04 PM (781 Views)
Bardock
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Ki Crush/Crushing Punch (depending on distance):

Bardock is an adept CQC (Close Quarters Combat) fighter with an exceptional grasp of Ki control and great physical strength. The attack is as follows:


A blue sphere of Ki envelops his hand up to his elbow. Then, he brings his hand forward and fires a dense beam of Ki at the opponent inflicting a massive amount of damage. Due to it's density, it can crush the area hit, though not severely unless the target area was already weakened. The use of Telekenesis can aid in tracking the enemy from a distance for a more accurate hit.


If within close proximity, this attack becomes a powerful Ki empowered punch that has the power to severely crush the muscle, bone and organs of the area hit. It has the power to also crush the exoskeleton of Androids. May be used in grapples, though it cannot crush during a grapple unless charged.

SP Cost: 22
Ki Cost: 14%
Damage: 6 (Crush)
Actions: 2-3
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There's a non-severe way to be crushed? :huh:

Looks good but most are not a fan of "hard to dodge" being added in to attacks. I think it is a given that it would be hard to dodge with the size and if speed is boosted.

Would it be hard for, say, Tapion to dodge? No. But that's probably why people don't like that 'hard to dodge' bit added into the descriptions...imo.
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Bardock
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Think of it as getting your leg run over by a motorcycle as opposed to a truck. It'll hurt like hell, but what's worse?

The size of the blast would make it difficult for anyone to dodge, but I'll add realism when RP'ing it. Up close or far away, it'll be hard to dodge if I combine it with speed boosting techs.
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Next people will be using the phrase "Nearly impossible to dodge" and other shit like that.
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Bardock
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Edited out the part that causes a shitstorm.
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I think having the maximum damage rating as well as an added effect might be a little too much for an advanced. Perhaps dropping it down to level 6 might be more appropriate?
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As is stated on the site, no advanced should be a lot more powerful than the Kamehameha(the standard for advanceds).

This is clearly a lot stronger than the Kamehameha. As Oboe said, bring it down in damage rating. IMHO, I think 5 would be a better rating, but that is just me. XD
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*not more stronger*, but how about more useful ;)


....like my Black Hole technique perhaps :)
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Bardock
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Dropped to a 6 until the higher ups want it down. My reasoning for it being so high is that it fits my way of fighting. It's an aggressive, powerful tech. Thanks for the input.
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Lower the ki drain. Change SP cost. Lower damage.
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Edited.
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Ki cost should be 12% but whatever. SP cost should be 21.
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Re-edited.
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Approvido.
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Waiting for reapproval.
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approved i guess
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I'm the only one who can approve techs, Mr. Karas.

I will re-approve it, however.
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