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| Topic Started: Jun 15 2011, 11:58 PM (470 Views) | |
| kensei | Jun 15 2011, 11:58 PM Post #1 |
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Character you wish to be: Kensei (sorry couldnt get a picture )Planet you want to start on: Vegeta (Customs only) Distribute 100 points between Vitality, Speed, Toughness, Stamina, and Strength: Vitality: 20 Stamina: 20 Toughness: 17 Strength: 18 Speed: 25 Distribute 3 points between Intelligence, Charisma, and Determination: Intelligence: 1 Charisma: 1 Determination: 1 Pick one green fundamental to start with (list here): Energy Wave (Saiyans Only) Fighting Style you wish to have: Tactical How did you find this site: I looked up DBZ roleplay What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: Its amazing, forever! (Required) Email Address: king.fergus@yahoo.com ROLEPLAY SAMPLE: Kensei usually trained just by sparring with some random saiyan he found on the street, but today he felt like something was different. All day his eye had been drawn to a mountain, so he finally decided to go to the mountain and check it out. Once he got to the mountain, he found a large cave with only small specks of light running through it. With his natural pride he was in no way afraid so he went into the cave. To make sure nothing was there he threw a rock into the cave, but he heard a sound almost just like the sound the war machines of the Tuffles made. He stood in place puzzled by the noise. He eventually just decided to disregard the noise and continue through the cave. As he ventured further into the cave, he saw many small reptilian creatures, so he blasted a few of them with his basic energy wave and made himself a meal out of them. After his meal he went further into the cave and noticed more bug like creatures crawling everywhere instead of reptilians like before. As he stopped to sit on a rock, heard a very creepy laugh from the end of the cave, so he started running towards the end of the cave to check it out. He started to hear the creepy laugh again and strange noises like rocks scraping against each other and breaking. He had a strange feeling that whatever was at the end of this cave was not of this world. Then it started to sound like the thing laughing was getting closer to him. He shot a ki blast through the cave and saw a wrinkled brown bug eyed creature with an M on its forehead. "HOLY HELL!" he exclaimed as he shot it, but the creature dodged every time and laughed its creepy laugh then said, "thanks for releasing me from my mechanic shell" it laughed again, then flew out of the cave so fast the wing knocked Kensei down. History: Look above other than that he was a normal saiyan |
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| Komandr | Jun 16 2011, 10:35 AM Post #2 |
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Welcome to the site! First things first, you do NEED a picture. Next, you need to break up your RP text into nice, neat paragraphs. Basic rule of thumb is to make a new paragraph whenever somebody new speaks. "Greetings," Omega dipped his head to the female saiyan, "Reports tell us that..." "I really don't give a damn what the reports say," Blackfire growled. Something along those lines. Second: Your history needs to be a SEPERATE 300 word sample from your roleplay. |
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| kensei | Jun 16 2011, 12:01 PM Post #3 |
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ok ill try to get a picture, fix the paragraphs and make a better backstory |
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| Shaoran | Jun 16 2011, 06:49 PM Post #4 |
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Your rp sample and history are separate. |
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| AwesomeVegeta | Jun 17 2011, 10:08 AM Post #5 |
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What he means, is that you should write two parts. One should be dedicated only to your character's past - such as their birth, early childhood, what they did while growing up, who their family is/was, who their friends were/are, how they got to where they are today. The second should be the Role-Play sample, which should just demonstrate your level of RPing ability. Since you basically have it written, you should just work on grammar, punctuation and spelling. It will read a lot better if you use paragraphs and follow Blackfire's suggestions. Hope that clarifies for you! |
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