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Join Form...; Bojack...the one and only.
Topic Started: Jul 12 2011, 05:00 PM (455 Views)
Elemento
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Character you wish to be: Bojack.

Planet you want to start on: Yaridrat

(Canons only) Distribute 200 points between Vitality, Speed, Toughness, Stamina, and Strength

Vitality - 50
Speed - 25
Toughness - 50
Stamina - 25
Strength - 50

Distribute 3 points between Intelligence, Charisma, and Determination:

Intelligence - 1
Charisma - 2
Determination - 0

Pick one green fundamental to start with: Bukujutsu

How did you find this site: Google search

What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: I'm going to be blunt. I love roleplaying, I joined this site because it looks good, refined, and exactly what I'm looking for. As far as how long I'll be here...I will attempt to stay here for as long as my human body let's me. So, unless I come to an untimely end, then please expect to see me here.

AIM Screen Name: Kerunou

Email Address: dweems128@yahoo.com

Please include a small sample roleplay. This could be a roleplay that you have done on another
site (if so you will be asked for a link to the thread during your AIM interview) or it could be a completely unique roleplay written up on the fly. Must be above 300 words.


"Harrrraahaaaahaaha", a sinister laugh echoed loudly through the nearby snowcapped mountains as Bojack hurtled toward the Red Ribbon army's infamous hideout, only known as "Muscle Tower".
Bojacks deep blue jacket and ember colored hair flailed in the heavy breeze as he soared ever so closer to the tall, dark, snow covered tower.

Slowly, Bojack descended onto the slushy, white landscape. His large boots *squished* through the snow as he pounded heavily on the huge wooden door made made of pure, thick, oak. The large door began to crack and eventually gave way to Bojacks heavy, powerful fists. The door finally exploded open and the cold breeze slowly drifted into the tower.

"These fools believed they could contain me, keep me out, they were fiercely mistaken!!!" Bojack shouted as he began powering up two massive ki blasts, one in each of his large, veiny palms. An enormous, shining, red and silver battle robot came out from around the corner, it was at least four to five times the size of Bojack.

"Foolish Army!!!!!! You don't know to use your power!!!" Bojack said in response to the arrival of the robot. Bojack then swung his right arm, as if he had thrown something, and hurled the massive purple ki blast out of his hand at an explosive speed, then he did the same with the other one. Both of the giant, purple, blazing ki-blasts screamed toward the robot. An enormous red and purple explosion was the destructive result, the robot lain there, destroyed, fiery pieces of metal showered through the air as Bojack walked through the next, dark, gray hallway, his footsteps were heard as his signature sadistic smirk covered his face.

Impatiently, Bojack jumped up and ascended upward, towards the sky. Moments passed, and a massive thundering of explosions were heard, Bojack had crashed through the very roof of the Muscle Tower, which caused giant pieces of rock to fall down the incredibly tall tower, which then squashed twenty to thirty Red Ribbon soldiers that were down below. The tower had now become a shamble of destruction.

Bojack laughed and held his hand up high in the air, and he then shouted in a rough, low, vocal tone, "Begone, you pitiful waste of space!!!". In his hand, began to glow a flaming, glaring, orb of pure green energy. Blinding green light shined out of the once vastly powerful orb.

"HAAAHAAAHAAA" could be heard echoing in the final moments before Muscle Tower was turned into oblivion. The massive, shining, green orb soared straight down into the core of Muscle Tower, and moments later...the blast had created an explosion of cataclysmic proportions. Bojack had destroyed the tower, and at this time now, he had shamelessly walked away, which made Muscle Tower just another pawn in his never-ending quest for mass destruction.
"Strength does not come from physical capacity. It comes from an indomitable will." - Mahatma Gandhi
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Kuro Tatsuo
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break up the paragraphs a bit, ill edit this once i read it when they are spaced for more tips
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Also, we use past-tense for RPs here. Change that and break up those paragraphs like Goten said. And you have people speaking in the blocks of text. Each time somebody new is speaking you need to create a new paragraph for it (there are, I think, a handful of exceptions though).

Not going to lie, I only skimmed through it for the reasons I said above^, but I liked what I did read.
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Alright, thanks for the quick response! I made some changes, put it in past tense, and broke up the paragraphs like you told me. Thanks again. Please let me know if I did anything wrong!
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When the wiki comes back up, create an account and PM it to Razak.
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Elemento
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Alright, great. Thanks again!
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