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| Joining As Jyuun; Custom Character Half-Saiyan | |
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| Topic Started: Mar 15 2012, 02:01 AM (319 Views) | |
| astraight06 | Mar 15 2012, 02:01 AM Post #1 |
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![]() Character you wish to be: Jyuun (June) Planet you want to start on: Valhalla (Customs Only) Character Race: Half-Saiyan (Customs only) Distribute 100 points Strength:20 Speed: 20 Toughness:20 Stamina: 20 Vitality:20 Distribute 3 points Determination:2 Charisma:0 (+5 racial for a total of 5) Intelligence: 1(-5 racial for a total of -4) Pick one green fundamental to start with (list here):Bukujutsu How did you find this site: Google; how else. What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: I love to role-play and I have been searching for a decent Dragonball universe to explore. This site seems exceptionally constucted and I plan on staying for as long as the site remains active. (Recommended) AIM Screen Name:n/a (will set one up if it makes this easier.) (Required) Email Address:astraight06@gmail.com Bio: Valhalla the training ground for the Saiyan elite. This harsh environment with its infernal heat and awe inspiring storms is my home. I was more or less born here, but I guess a more accurate term would be created. You see on Valhalla a special project was commissioned by Overlord Luther 10 years ago. This project was to successfully breed a Saiyan-alien hybrid that on average would be stronger than the average Saiyan with the same level of training. It’s ironic that the species most suited to this breeding project was the normally weak human from earth. I am unaware of exactly who the donors were for my genetic makeup, but it is of little consequence. The Saiyan military is my family, and Overlord Luther my father. I was able to survive outside of my incubator by June of that year. Unlike the other creations I was undistinguishable from other Saiyans save my lack of a tail, and possessed a naturally high power-level. By the time I was six years of age I had mastered the ability to fly, and given my first mission. I was to with my bare hands exterminate my “brothers” because their upkeep had become a fruitless burden upon my father. We were locked in a large sparing area, and my brothers were ordered to surround and dominate me. The fools 6 of them in all attempted to slay me, but by the end of the day they fell to the ground broken and my place within the ranks of the Saiyan military secured. Father was most pleased by my brutality, and efficiency. By others I am regarded a fourth-class Saiyan, and while better the alien slaves I am not worthy of any position of rank, or honor. It is my sole ambition to rectify this. I am Saiyan in spirit and I will prove I am more than just a foot soldier. I am Jyuun and I will be the first half-breed to stand among the Saiyan elite. Sample Roleplay: Location: Saiyan garrison-Experiment training area Time: 7:00am There I sat in the center of the sparring ring. Unlike my inferior "brothers" I was up before dawn, and had already begun my training when I was given the order. Any moment the fools would be arriving and we would have our little contest. Unknown to them the winner had already been chosen, and I would be the only one leaving this ring alive. Growing up a Saiyan all you know is duty and these lay-abouts were a disgrace. Nothing but a stain upon our race. A stain that must be removed. Maye always the first to stir his lazy bones entered the room shortly. He was a half Namekian, and a truly disgusting sight. He stood little more than 5’ and appeared as a wrinkled green man. He rarely spoke, and was the “brother” that I liked the most. “A pity he would have to die,” I thought. Then there was Julai; a half Arlian that looked like a Saiyan with chitin plates where armor would normally be found. He entered causally yawning and sighing. He was the most passive of the bunch and would not make for a warrior. Aprol was the next to arrive a half changeling, and the only specimen whose power rivaled my own. He stood just over 6’ and resembled a small purple ape. Strong and cunning I knew he would be the only challenge. Though his lazy nature, and bulky slow moving form would make him an easy target. January, February, and March the so called triplets entered next. A disgusting mix of Saibaman DNA and Saiyan to created mindless killing machines. Unable to perform normal speech and often insubordinate these tiny green monsters were useless as true soldiers and were little better than there Saibaman parentage. As the last of my brothers entered the room the bay doors closed hard, and we could hear the locks engage. A monitor on the north wall clicked on and the face of our trainer Janus appeared. “Good morning children. I believe you have your assignments so I won’t waste any time explaining. You have until the end of the day to complete your task or you will all be exterminated. Good luck, and may the best warrior win,” Janus growled as the monitor clicked off. I stood ready to face my opponents as they surrounded me. Never once did I doubt my victory. It was easy, maybe too easy. I flew above the ring circling them just out of reach. Starting with the weakest of the lot Julai I dove down into a kick. Unable to block this maneuver it connected squarely at the base of his neck. I heard the delicious crunch of breaking bones, and my pathetic excuse for a brother fell to the floor. I could not help but laugh at this as I ascended once more. “Well are you lot going to stand there or just fight? Don’t make it easy for me if you dare to call yourselves Saiyan,” I roared hoping to goad them into more of a fight. The tactic proved successful as the triplets began leaping trying to catch me. January however made the fatal mistake of using his Acid blast ability without coordinating it with the other two leaping idiots. The brunt of the force caught March in the stomach. His flesh liquefied and he slumped to the ground doubled up in agony. Maye spoke to me then “Jyuun I do not want to kill you please stop this madness. We were only ordered to subdue you there is no reason to be so rash.” I snorted at this comment. He had just made himself my new target. “ Maye you are as soft as your parentage and are not worthy of the trickle of Saiyan blood that runs through your veins. Rash? What is rash? There is only Victory and defeat. I know which one I will have today, do you?” I asked lunging for his throat. As I gripped it his fist slammed into my abdomen. The force of the blow was intense, but I could not afford to release him. Instead I channeled the pain into rage and flung the Namekian slug into the monitor. The display shattered and he was stuck within it convulsing due to the electricity now passing through him. The lights flickered as he fell from the monitor lifeless. “Three down three to go. Any last words?” I asked as the remaining two triplets screamed what I can only imagine were curses at me in their strange guttural language. With the remaining saibamen-hybrids spraying acid at me wildly I spent my time in the air dodging lazily. Aprol simply stared at me. In his eyes I could see his fury, and I must admit it was beautiful. He charged at the triplets and slammed their heads together. “now come down so I can do the same to you!” He growled gesturing to their now caved in skulls upon the mat of the ring. Eager to oblige I retrieved a large shard of glass from the monitor and approached the ape. He lumbered forth and swiped me with his massive arms. I crashed to the mat and lay flat on my back. The ape leaned in to finish me, but it was all futile. I thrust upward the shard, and punctured my brother’s throat. He gasped and collapsed on top of me. The oaf did more damage to me dying than he ever would have in any other situation. Two of my ribs and my collar bone were crushed by his bulk, but I was able to slip free. I fell to the mat exhausted, and went unconscious. The fight had left me without any spare energy, but a wide wicked smile upon my face. I was proud to have completed my first mission so well. I was proud to have proved myself a Saiyan. I spent the next week in a rejuvenation tank, but when I recovered my new orders were in. I was to report to Overlord Luther Immediately for training. I hurried there not wanting to disappoint the man I considered my father. |
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| Diive | Mar 16 2012, 09:30 PM Post #2 |
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Your RP and Bio are walls of text. Please try to break them up into smaller, more manageable paragraphs. |
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| astraight06 | Mar 16 2012, 09:43 PM Post #3 |
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The Forum killed my formatting and the paragraphs are more separate now. They are the proper size for their content however. |
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| gogeta_95 | Mar 16 2012, 10:22 PM Post #4 |
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i want this character |
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| Diive | Mar 16 2012, 10:43 PM Post #5 |
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That's nice... but you'll have to apply for your own character. @OP... now that your RP is readable, I can tell that it's good... I dig it. However, we write in third person/paste tense point of view. I'm not asking you to rewrite your sample, it's good as it is... I just want you to acknowledge that you understand we use third person/paste tense (as you would find in any novel) on this site and will expect you to do the same. |
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| astraight06 | Mar 16 2012, 10:49 PM Post #6 |
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okay I'l keep that in mind for future posts. I'm used to writing for characters in first person past tense. |
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| Diive | Mar 16 2012, 11:12 PM Post #7 |
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Accepted. Register on the wiki and reply with a link to your account. |
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| astraight06 | Mar 16 2012, 11:17 PM Post #8 |
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http://www.alexsdbzrpg.info/account/Jyuun |
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