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Botoraka (custom Char); Join form
Topic Started: Apr 6 2012, 02:54 AM (442 Views)
Botoraka
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Character Name: Botoraka

Picture: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=...kaichi#/d4jl4mp


Planet you wan't to start on: Valhalla


(customs only)Character Race: Saiyan

--stats--

(customs only)Distibute 100 points
strength: 22
speed: 20
toughness: 22
stamina: 14
vitality: 22


Determination: 1
Charisma: 1
Intelligence: 1


Choose one fundemental to start with: Bukujutsu


(Saiyans only)Fighting style you wish to have: aggressive


How did you find this website: Google


What makes you want to join and how long do you plan on staying: Dbz is my favorite anime so I play a lot of the games. I like role-playing games so this is sort of a cross- genre, which is awesome!I plan on staying as long as I can.



(Required) Email Address: jacobsims82@yahoo.com



Sample roleplay:



"Nothing. " He had been flying around the planet in look for a challenge for 3 hours now. He couldn't fail, He HAD to avenge the saiyan race!His father had always told him that each battle will bring you closer to becoming a super saiyan. Right now that was all that mattered. It had been seven years since planet Vegeta was destroyed by Frieza, seven years since he and a colony of saiyans evacuated planet Vegeta (thanks to bardock's warning). "AHA!! ", he thought, a huge power level was nearby. Releived to find a WORTHY adversary, Botoraka sped toward the power.
He landed, and saw the bearer of the power, a changling. He felt his anger boiling, and attacked. Botoraka attempts to use the full power energy wave, but the changling deflects it effortlessly. He flies toward the changling and attempting to punch it but it grabs Botoraka's arm and breaks it. He lets out a Wail off painl, and the changling kicks Botoraka to the ground.

"Hmph. You didn't honestly think an ape like you could defeat me?
Worthless, just like the rest of you petty race. Thats why I destroyed them, and your about to join them. ", said the changling. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! ", Botoraka yelled. His rage was uncontrollable, growing rapidly along with his ki flow. "What the!? ", yelled the changling. Botoraka's aura was becoming wild and uncontrollable, and he could feel his hair straightening upwards.Botoraka suddenly regained control. He
look at himself and realizes that he has become a golden warrior of legend, the mythical SUPER SAIYAN!!


---------------------History----------------------------------


Botoraka was the saiyan prince as the first born of King Deventum and Queen Oiishi. He'd pummel those who'd even look at him wrong and whenever assigned a trainer, said trainer would become the student thus Botoraka was forced to train himself. At age 5 Botoraka's power level had risen above King Deventum's strongest General's, and thus Lord Frieza made him a focus of his. At the age of 17, after avoiding Frieza for as long as he could, he was forced to mask his power level and fake his own death so that Frieza would leave the saiyans in peace. But Frieza decided they were to worthless to deserve to live, thus, he blew up planet Vegeta.
Botoraka and a large colony of other saiyans evacuated planet Vegeta sometime before Frieza blew it up. Botoraka and the colonists claimed planet Valhalla as they're home. The planet held no strong saiyans to challenge Botoraka. So Botoraka traveled the planet in search of another saiyan super elite, like himself. He would search for hours each day, all failed.He wouldn't find anything, even remotely interesting enough to quench his thirst of the fight until age 21. He encountered a very strong changling royal-blood. At first Botoraka didn't stand a chance until He transformed into a super saiyan.

This was the beggining of a new chapter in Botoraka's quest for
vengeance. Who knows what suprises might befall this fallen prince in the future?[
Building: Saiyan Armor W/ shoulders 0/3

Every battle brings me closer to becoming a pooper scooper saiyajin.
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Garou
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Just gonna say, please put in spaces after periods.

Also, when your character has a thought, do something like put quotes around it, or italicize it. That way, its much easier to distinguish thought from non-thought.

And you use second person in your roleplay. This should be changed to third person. Fix that up and you should get accepted when someone higher up gets the chance to look at this.
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Alex
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Your stat distribution adds up to 139 when it should be 100 and your trait distribution is 8 when it should be 3.
All-time ADBZRPG battle record: 86 - 4

Winner of Best Saga Thread of 2011 (Shard of Lujati)

Winner of RP of the Season Summer 2017 (The Village of Kulley)
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I edited my stats and trats.Sorry about that.
Building: Saiyan Armor W/ shoulders 0/3

Every battle brings me closer to becoming a pooper scooper saiyajin.
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Alex
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Alright no problem. Your roleplaying could use a little bit of work. I would suggest reading the roleplaying tips page. Also try to make use of the roleplay school forum once you are added as a member.

In the mean time, please register an account on the wiki and reply back with the URL so you can be added.
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Building: Saiyan Armor W/ shoulders 0/3

Every battle brings me closer to becoming a pooper scooper saiyajin.
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Alex
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You have been added to column 1 of the roster. Sorry for the delay.
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