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Kumhi Osa Update #1; June 17 - 23rd Complete
Topic Started: Jun 19 2013, 03:35 AM (516 Views)
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General / Claims
-CU: 1/??? +0 all

-Training/Roshi/For Moves + 25 ((human racial bonus) all stats, +10 speed, 10 stamina, and +4 SP 0/???

-Claim: A Death To Remember +9 exp, +270z, +18 all stats, +8 rpc, -2 Alignment

-Build/Read/Inscribe: Saiyan Weights (0/1 Week)

Job:
-Criminal 0/3: + 625z (human racial bonus)


Purchases / Sales / Learning
Italic Weights, Equipping , Equipped as 2 accessories, Amplifies training by +10 strength and +5 all other stats (+25 ki, +50 pl) (-1,400 Zenni)

-Purchase from Buu + 2 SP / - 1 Zenni

Gem of Telepathy (-350 Zenni)

Learning Bukujutsu -4 SP
Learning Dynamite Kick -4 SP


SP/DP Usage
2 DP, +12 Intelligence

Equipment:
Karate Gui, Equipped on the body, Amplifies training by +8 speed. Can be worn with a leather suit or Capsule Corp Vest.

Italic Weights, Equipped as 2 accessories, Amplifies training by +10 strength and +5 all other stats (+25 ki, +50 pl)

Total Stat Gains
+48 All +10Str, +18 spd, +10 stamina

NEW Power Level:___3,745// 4,994
NEW Ki:___1,872// 2,497
Strength:___565 +48, +10 = 623
Speed:___565 +48, +18 = 631
Toughness:___580 +48= 628
Stamina:___575 +48, +10 = 633
Vitality:___565 +48= 613

Int: 10+12= 22
Cha: 21+0= 21
Det: 12+0= 12

Zeni: 1,000+625 l +270z -1,751= 144
EXP: 0 +9= 9
DP: 2 +2 -2= 2
SP: 4 +6 -8= 2
Rp Credits:0 +8 -0= 8
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http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?sho...0#entry22102579

+2 SP - 1 Z
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You know you're the first person I've had to tell who has put TOO much color in their update. Just color the numbers, and if you don't have information to add, don't include it. Like the level up line? If you're not leveling up, don't put it in there. Also, don't put information down twice. I can see you're using 8 SP to learn techniques from your learning section, so you don't need to put the total in another section since it goes in your math section on the bottom.

Edit your sale with Buu into your main update.
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fixed
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You should be gaining 6 SP, making your final SP 2 SP.
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Fixed. I got all mixed around.
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Now you took... almost ALL the color out. You need to find a middle ground, sir or madam. Bardock is my favorite example of a perfectly clean, well-formatted update, so click this and see how it's done.


Final Strength gains are off, final Speed gains are off.
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Fixed, I was told by Starrk it was off and had to fix it. -.-
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Apologies for the inconvenience.
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Saiyan Sword Master
'pproved.
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Rei beat me to it.
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