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| Kumhi Osa Update #1; June 17 - 23rd Complete | |
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| Topic Started: Jun 19 2013, 03:35 AM (516 Views) | |
| Lettu | Jun 19 2013, 03:35 AM Post #1 |
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General / Claims -CU: 1/??? +0 all -Training/Roshi/For Moves + 25 ((human racial bonus) all stats, +10 speed, 10 stamina, and +4 SP 0/??? -Claim: A Death To Remember +9 exp, +270z, +18 all stats, +8 rpc, -2 Alignment -Build/Read/Inscribe: Saiyan Weights (0/1 Week) Job: -Criminal 0/3: + 625z (human racial bonus) Purchases / Sales / Learning Italic Weights, Equipping , Equipped as 2 accessories, Amplifies training by +10 strength and +5 all other stats (+25 ki, +50 pl) (-1,400 Zenni) -Purchase from Buu + 2 SP / - 1 Zenni Gem of Telepathy (-350 Zenni) Learning Bukujutsu -4 SP Learning Dynamite Kick -4 SP SP/DP Usage 2 DP, +12 Intelligence Equipment: Karate Gui, Equipped on the body, Amplifies training by +8 speed. Can be worn with a leather suit or Capsule Corp Vest. Italic Weights, Equipped as 2 accessories, Amplifies training by +10 strength and +5 all other stats (+25 ki, +50 pl) Total Stat Gains +48 All +10Str, +18 spd, +10 stamina NEW Power Level:___3,745// 4,994 NEW Ki:___1,872// 2,497 Strength:___565 +48, +10 = 623 Speed:___565 +48, +18 = 631 Toughness:___580 +48= 628 Stamina:___575 +48, +10 = 633 Vitality:___565 +48= 613 Int: 10+12= 22 Cha: 21+0= 21 Det: 12+0= 12 Zeni: 1,000+625 l +270z -1,751= 144 EXP: 0 +9= 9 DP: 2 +2 -2= 2 SP: 4 +6 -8= 2 Rp Credits:0 +8 -0= 8 |
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| Lettu | Jun 22 2013, 09:57 PM Post #2 |
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http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?sho...0#entry22102579 +2 SP - 1 Z |
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| Fenn | Jun 23 2013, 03:19 AM Post #3 |
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You know you're the first person I've had to tell who has put TOO much color in their update. Just color the numbers, and if you don't have information to add, don't include it. Like the level up line? If you're not leveling up, don't put it in there. Also, don't put information down twice. I can see you're using 8 SP to learn techniques from your learning section, so you don't need to put the total in another section since it goes in your math section on the bottom. Edit your sale with Buu into your main update. |
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| Lettu | Jun 23 2013, 04:09 AM Post #4 |
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fixed |
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| Cado | Jun 23 2013, 11:36 PM Post #5 |
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You should be gaining 6 SP, making your final SP 2 SP. |
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| Lettu | Jun 24 2013, 02:46 AM Post #6 |
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Fixed. I got all mixed around. |
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| Fenn | Jun 25 2013, 07:20 PM Post #7 |
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Now you took... almost ALL the color out. You need to find a middle ground, sir or madam. Bardock is my favorite example of a perfectly clean, well-formatted update, so click this and see how it's done. Final Strength gains are off, final Speed gains are off. |
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| Lettu | Jun 25 2013, 07:51 PM Post #8 |
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Fixed, I was told by Starrk it was off and had to fix it. -.- |
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| Fenn | Jun 25 2013, 08:16 PM Post #9 |
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Apologies for the inconvenience. |
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| Shaoran | Jun 26 2013, 01:15 AM Post #10 |
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'pproved. |
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| Fenn | Jun 26 2013, 01:16 AM Post #11 |
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Rei beat me to it. |
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