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Complete!; [12/30-1/5]
Topic Started: Jan 5 2014, 10:48 PM (293 Views)
Mika
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[align=center]Color Code
Gains
Total Gains
*Special Stat Gains
Purchases
Miscellaneous


Location: Earth


Activities:
CU Count: 1/14 - [+0 all stats]

Master Training w/ Roshi – +25* all, +10 Speed, +10 Stamina, +4 SP
*[Human Gains w/ Roshi]

Equip Karate Gui [+8 Speed]

Bonuses:
*Collect Player Appreciation Day Bonus [+200 all stats]



Total Gains:
+30 EXP, +10 all, +100 zeni, +3 RPC,


Purchases/Sales/Learning/Building/Job:
Building
Lightweight Clothes (0/4)
Job
Criminal (0/3): +625* Zeni
*[Human Gains w/ Side Job]
Learning
Power Blast, -4SP Deflect, -4SP
Purchases
*Elixer (x3) +15 all stats (+60 ki, +120 pl) 900z Gem Of Telepathy 350z

Final Stats
Experience: 30/100
Power Level: 4,184 + 2,020 = 6,204
Ki: 2,092 + 1,010 = 3,102
Strength: 523 + 215 + 25 + 10 = 773
Speed: 523 + 215+ 35 +10 + 8 = 791
Toughness: 523 + 215 + 25 + 10 = 773
Stamina: 523 + 215 + 35 +10 = 783
Vitality: 523 + 215 + 25 + 10 = 773
Determination: 11
Charisma: 21
Intelligence: 11

Misc Changes:
SP: 4 + 4 - 8 = 0
DP: 2 + 0 = 0
RP: 0 + 3 = 3
Zeni: 1,000 + 625 - 900 - 350 = 475
Alignment: 0 [/align]
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Mika
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Bump
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Tommeh
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couple of things

dont bump after 1 day, unless you were on second page, which i dunno if u were give us more than one day to get to your updates, we'll get to you dont worry

cu counter starts at 1

zeni should be 375

list your stats prior to the gains or having them right next to them

or just look at the update template we have somewhere...

fix and reply
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Marek
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I'm gonna to be honest. This update format of yours wants to make like...kick a puppy. It's fucking terrible.

Format your updates like so - http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?showtopic=57448

That is if you want them to be checked.
http://www.alexsdbzrpg.info/page/Lord+Ice

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Aya: You're talking erect. You're always talking erect.
Revan: No amount of lube can save you. But i appreciate the gesture.
Jordan: I want to be the oiler/fluff guy.
Kamatayan: You suck me and I suck you?
Toma: Toma and Chish are now Eskimo Brothers IC.
Vlad: one moment your in a nature spa the next you are in an emergency room finding out an eel found its way into your anus
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Marek
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Strength: 523 + 200 + 25 + 10 + 15
Speed: 523 + 200+ 25 + 10 + 15 +10
Toughness: 523 + 200 + 25 + 10 + 15
Stamina: 523 + 200 + 25 + 10 + 15 +10
Vitality: 523 + 200 + 25 + 10 + 15

Make sure to color your final gains. And condense all gains of one color into a single figure. If you list out all of your gains like this, I need to match each figure, this takes an unnecessarily long amount of time. You also need to have your totals listed for your stats. Did you happen to look at the update I linked to you a few days ago? I'm not trying to be rude, I was rude a few days ago tbh, but, the easier it is to read your update the quicker I can approve it in the future.

For instance, Goten's and Chaos's are normally so easy to get through I can read and approve them within like, 5 minutes.

You also really don't need to color anything other than stat gains.
http://www.alexsdbzrpg.info/page/Lord+Ice

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Aya: You're talking erect. You're always talking erect.
Revan: No amount of lube can save you. But i appreciate the gesture.
Jordan: I want to be the oiler/fluff guy.
Kamatayan: You suck me and I suck you?
Toma: Toma and Chish are now Eskimo Brothers IC.
Vlad: one moment your in a nature spa the next you are in an emergency room finding out an eel found its way into your anus
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Mika
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Yeah I'll go for a new template after this one, thanks for your patience. Fixed it I think
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Marek
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Much, much better. But your speed is 8 too low.

EDIT:

Also, don't wait on this to be approved to post another. Otherwise you'll miss out on a week.
http://www.alexsdbzrpg.info/page/Lord+Ice

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Aya: You're talking erect. You're always talking erect.
Revan: No amount of lube can save you. But i appreciate the gesture.
Jordan: I want to be the oiler/fluff guy.
Kamatayan: You suck me and I suck you?
Toma: Toma and Chish are now Eskimo Brothers IC.
Vlad: one moment your in a nature spa the next you are in an emergency room finding out an eel found its way into your anus
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Mika
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Fixed
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Marek
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Approved.
http://www.alexsdbzrpg.info/page/Lord+Ice

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Aya: You're talking erect. You're always talking erect.
Revan: No amount of lube can save you. But i appreciate the gesture.
Jordan: I want to be the oiler/fluff guy.
Kamatayan: You suck me and I suck you?
Toma: Toma and Chish are now Eskimo Brothers IC.
Vlad: one moment your in a nature spa the next you are in an emergency room finding out an eel found its way into your anus
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