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Marrs #2 (Done!); Ending July 23, 2016
Topic Started: Jul 22 2016, 10:00 PM (286 Views)
Uranis
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Strength
Speed
Toughness
Stamina
vitality

Last Update: http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?showtopic=72361

Activities

-Consecutive Counter 2/19

- Training with master Roshi for Moves(+40 All, +20 Speed, +20 Stamina, +4 SP)


-Spend 3 DP on Intelligence

- Quest ( http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?showtopic=72456 ) (: +300 zeni, +2 DP, +45 all stats, +6 RPC, +10 EXP)

-PRP ( http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?showtopic=72392 ) (+9 rpc)

-BuiLDING Capsule Corp ship (0/6)

- use Power systems(+500 due to power systems])

Job

-Criminal with Alien Bonus (+600z)(+10 str.) --(⅓)--


Purchases / Sales / Learning

-[auction] bought Sayian gauntlets and Boots from Dajj ( http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?showtopic=72420 )(-100z)

- Buy tonic (-400z) And used (+3 DP)

-Learn Mouth Blast (-4 SP)

- Buy Power systems (-500z) [ONE TIME USE]

Equipment Gains:

-Body: Weighted Clothing[+13 Str, +13 sta]

-Arms: Sayian gauntlets(Fire Rune) [+5 str, +5 tou]

-Legs: Sayian Boots (Fire Rune) [+5 str, +5 tou]


Total Stats After Update

Power Level: 5658

Ki: 2829

Strength: 323 (+85 All)[+500 due to power systems](+33 Str)= 941

Speed: 1440 (+85 All)(+20 Spe) = 1545

Toughness: 600 (+85 All)(+10 Tou) = 695

Stamina: 603 (+85 All)(+20 Sta) = 708

Vitality: 400 (+85 All) = 485

Det: 10

Cha: 10

Int: 25 + 18 = 43

Other Changes

Zeni: 0 (100 + 900 - 1,000)

Alliance Zeni: 0

SP: 8-4 = 4

DP: 3-3+2=2

RPC: 15

EXP: 10/100(0+10) (Level 1)
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Walid
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I'm going to ask you to do the following that will make this look so much better, and easier on staff doing your updates.

First, for things like EXP, RPC, don't just post the totals, include the math for them like. 10 / 100 (0 + 10). Also your RPC is off, 9 + 6 = 15, not 16.

Second, it's really helpful if you condense your gains like with Zeni. Let's say there's 4 sections, One is total, one is your starting amount that you had last week, the next is the total of your gained zeni, and then finally the total of your spent zeni.

So for this update it'd be: Zeni: 0 (100 + 900 - 1,000)

The third thing are stats. You did use two colors, but what I'd like to see is all stats being one, other stats like +20 Spe, +10 Tou, another color. Things above like your +45 all stats from your RP report should be colored as well, would make things so much easier.

Aside from the recommendations I said above, RPC should be 15 and Strength should be 941, which means Ki and PL are also off.
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Uranis
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...Seriously...2nd page...So BUMP!
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There's really no reason to bump your update as long as I'm the staff member who oversees this column since I have my forum settings to show like 100 topics per page. What is a reason to do it is to let me know you've fixed your update. I only check if there's been a reply letting me know it's been adjusted.

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