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I Lied About The Spoilers; 8/1 - 8/7 Complete
Topic Started: Aug 7 2016, 04:06 PM (142 Views)
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<span class='tarble-stage'>UPDATE 4</span>
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<b>MAIN</b>
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Planet - Kanassa [ #JustMercThings ]<br>
Log In Bonus - 4 | 19 [ <span class='gain'>↑ 5 All Stats</span> ]<br>
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<b>TRAINING AREA</b>
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Solo Training [ <span class='gain'>↑ 40 All Stats</span> ] <br>
Equipment Bonuses [ <span class='gain'>↑ 4 Strength</span> ] [ <span class='gain'>↑ 5 Toughness</span> ] [ <span class='gain'>↑ 44 Stamina</span> ] [ <span class='gain'>↑ 20 Vitality</span> ] [ <span class='gain'>↑ 4 Intelligence</span> ]<br>
Learning: Telekinesis - 3 | 4 [ <span class='loss'> N/A</span> ]<br>
Learning: Telepathic Link - 3 | 6 [ <span class='loss'>N/A</span> ]<br>
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<b>BANK ACCOUNT</b>
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Mercenary - 3 | 3 (not promoting) [ <span class='gain'>↑ 15 Stamina (Alien bonus); 350 Zeni</span> ]<br>
Bounty Hunter - 3 | ?<br>
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<b>CRAFT STATION</b>
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Saiyan War Ship - 3 | 9 <br>
Lightweight Clothes - 2 | 4 <br>
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<b>ADVENTURE JOURNAL</b>
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N/A
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<b>END STATS</b>
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PL: 7,348 [ Base - 6,802 | <span class='gain'>↑ 536</span> ]<br>
Ki: 3,674 [ Base - 3,401 | <span class='gain'>↑ 268</span> ]<br>
Strength: 926 [ Base - 877 | <span class='gain'>↑ 40 All Stats; 4; 5</span> ]<br>
Speed: 665 [ Base - 620 | <span class='gain'>↑ 40 All Stats; 5</span> ]<br>
Toughness: 675 [ Base - 625 | <span class='gain'>↑ 40 All Stats; 5; 5</span> ]<br>
Stamina: 1,348 [ Base - 1,244 | <span class='gain'>↑ 40 All Stats; 15; 44; 5</span> ]<br>
Vitality: 725 [ Base - 660 | <span class='gain'>↑ 40 All Stats; 20; 5</span> ]<br>
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<b>END TRAITS</b>
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Determination: 10 [ Base - 10 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> ]<br>
Charisma: 10 [ Base - 10 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> ]<br>
Intelligence: 41 [ Base - 37 | <span class='gain'>↑ 4</span> ]<br>
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<b>END MISCELLANEOUS</b>
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Zeni: 1,400 [ Base - 1,050 | <span class='gain'>↑ 350</span> | <span class='loss'>↓ 0</span> ]<br>
Experience: 0 [ Base - 0 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> ]<br>
SP: 4 [ Base - 4 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> | <span class='loss'>↓ 0</span> ]<br>
DP: 0 [ Base - 0 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> | <span class='loss'>↓ 0</span> ]<br>
RPC: 0 [ Base - 0 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> | <span class='loss'>↓ 0</span> ]<br>
Alignment: 0 [ Base - 0 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> | <span class='loss'>↓ 0</span> ]<br>
Tokens: 0 [ Base - 0 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> | <span class='loss'>↓ 0</span> ]<br>
Scenari: 0 [ Base - 0 | <span class='gain'>↑ 0</span> | <span class='loss'>↓ 0</span> ]<br>
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Your toughness is off by 5. The actual final I'm getting is 675. Edit as needed and reply when finished.

That's the only error, so just fix that up, and we'll be golden.
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Fixed it.
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Approved~

Also, just sharing this as a point of interesting. Super love your format, but it took me a bit to figure out what was going on in your actual stat section where you were adding everything up.

The most convenient thing you can do for your monitors is separate your +all stat gains from your equipment gains with a different color. You can look my last update for Agatha to see what I mean. I separate my +all stats from my equipment gains and my training stat gains, which makes it easier for other monitors to check my numbers to make sure everything is adding up.

You don't have to do exactly how I am, but the easiest thing is definitely to separate the +all from the equipment, then all you have to post is your total +all stats from the gains you get for each specific stat. It's not a requirement, but the monitors have to grade a lot of these every week, so even small things like this that make our jobs easier is super appreciated. :)
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