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Dabura update (complete); Week of 8/28/16
Topic Started: Sep 4 2016, 03:23 PM (193 Views)
olddab
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Dabura update

Activities

Location:earth

Started building: weighted clothing :0/2 weeks

Training:: master roshi for techniques: +20 all stats, +20 speed, +20 stanima +4 sp (net pl gain:240 net ki gain:120 , net sp:8)


Job

Teacher: 0/3 +5 strength, +350 zennie


Buying:

Weighted cape: -1,000 zennie

Net zennie after update: 350

Learning moves:none

Equipment:

Equiping weighted cape: +13 strength, +13 stanima (net ki gain: 26, net pl gain: 52)

Claims

Claiming 21 rpc and +30 exp from:http://forum.alexsdbzrpg.com/index.php?showtopic=72956


Rpc/Dp distribution:
-2 DP for + 30 vit (pl gain:60, ki gain:30)

-10 rpc (set) for +25 to all stats (+200 pl, +100 ki) +35 exp

-11 rpc (singles) for +22 to all stats, (+166 pl, +88 ki) +33 exp



Base stats

Pl: 75% 3,600/ 4800
Ki: 75%1,800/2400
Str: 600:
Stam: 600
Spd: 600
Vit:600
Toug:600
Determination:1
Charisma:1
Intelligence:1


Total Gains
Pl: +818
Ki:+409
Str: +105
Spd;+87
Stam:+100
Tough:+87
Vit:+117

Exp: +98 exp
Sp:+ 4
DP:-2
Rpc:-21

Final stats

Pl: 75% 4,213/5,618
Ki:75% 2,106/2,809
Str:705
Stm:700
Spd:687
Vit:717
Toug:687

Sp:8
Dp:0
Rpc:0
Exp:98/100

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Kintoyo
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Alllright so, all the numbers that I could find seem to add up, you should be good to go in that regard.

The set up of your update needs to be a lot better organized, though. Everything is kind of all over the place, which makes it really difficult for me as your monitor to keep track of everything. Most people follow the same format I use (Link). You don't have to use this exact format, but I definitely want you to take a look at how it's set up and try to mirror something similar to it. You can also browse some other updates and see if someone else does anything you'd like, but here are the major parts that you should change that would make my life a lot easier.

1. Keep everything as condensed as possible. Primarily your stats. You can list them in such a way as to show what your previous numbers were from the week before, how much you're adding, and what your new numbers are all in the same area. This will save me a lot of time and headache, which I'd appreciate (as would other monitors if they ever do one of your updates. We have to do a lot of these every week, so the easier you make them for us to understand the better). But as you can see on mine, I use the first part of my update to list all the different changes I am going to make from training, purchases, equipment, etc. Then, I use the second half of my update to condense all of those numbers together and do all the math at the end. This format will make your life a lot easier too down the line, trust me.

2. Color coding is your monitor's best friend. This isn't something that's really required but it helps me out a lot. As you can see on mine, I use one color to indicate additions I'm getting to all my stats, a color to indicate a specific change to a specific stat/category, and then a color to indicate what I'm getting from equipment. Some people go more detailed, some do less, but the one thing that helps me a lot is at least making a differentiation between what additions you're getting to ALL your stats and what you're only getting to specific ones. This helps me double check your math more quickly.

So, try to follow something more along this line next week. I'm a bit hard to get a hold of for help at the moment cause I don't have internet, so if you have question or want any help learning to organize your update a bit better feel free to ask any staff member and they can give you more tips. :) And when you do your next update, also make sure to link to this one in it -- from here on out, you'll always link to your previous update that way your monitor can double check that you carried over your numbers correctly.

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