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Territus; Custom Advanced
Topic Started: May 12 2018, 01:59 PM (140 Views)
Broli
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Territus - The LSSJ enforces his mental might and unfathomable will onto his opponent. A transparent beam of energy is shot from his pupils directly into those of the opponent, causing their nervous system to to shut down. For the next few moments all of their guards fail. They can remain defenseless briefly or pay a toll to fight the irresistible urge.


Function - Prevents a single opponent to use any defensive techniques and/or defensive items in their next post. Opponent may opt to use 1 action and 7% of their ki to break free of the technique, allowing them to respond with defensive maneuvers freely. If the opponent chooses not to break free then Broli loses 1 action in his following post. May only be used once per battle.

DR - N/A
Ki drain - 10%
Action cost - final 2 actions in post
SP cost - 16
Effect - N/A though very Blind-like (targeting defensive actions, for a single post)

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Edited by Broli, May 22 2018, 04:13 PM.
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So this is basically a 3 action 5% ki cost Stun as a fundamental? If it isn't resisted then you just don't get to defend so the user blasts their opponent away (Say with 2 Charged Advanced and a Finisher adds in a DZ and drops this as the last action) then your opponent has to take 3 actions off defending and spend 5% Ki or can't defend at all.

That is too much for a fundamental imo.
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I agree, the function is too potent for a custom in general.
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The aim was to make it a expensive mirror of Solar Flare, I just wanted there to be some chance of escape for the opposition. The 3 actions and -5% ki would only be applied to those want to avoid being stunned then bombarded with other ki atracks, so one or the other but not both simultaneously. At the end if you resist you'd be down 3 actions and 5% ki, but won't take as much direct damage. I'm cool with making this an Advanced tech or making the resist cost 2 actions like Solar Flare's stun lasting 2 actions.
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Yan Cass
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It would definitely need to be an advanced meaning it would cost you two actions to use and definitely be only two actions to resist, maybe even 1 if you're charging ki for the escape.
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Advanced now. Edited to cost final 2 actions in Broli's post and resisting now only costs 2 actions for opponent.
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I like the mechanics of this but the RP might need to change a bit. An overwhelming sense of defeat doesn't really make sense if you use this on Beerus, imo. I'd rather it be more like.. a physical reason your opponent can't use defensive techs. Even if it's somewhat bullshitted, lol. But I do like the mechanics and I do see a way around it so it's pretty balanced in my eyes. Opens up a new mechanic which is awesome. Great job on making something creative.
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Thanks, fixed it up a bit.
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Abo
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I somewhat dig it now. Like a reverse ultra instinct lol. You're removing their instinct.

I think the 2 actions to avoid it + the 5% ki is a bit hefty, especially when you offer the alternative of stunning Broly for one action if you don't take it. It's not really an issue, but only in the sense that nobody is going to choose that route, so it's kind of more an issue for you than your opponent.

Just since 2 actions can potentially be 66% of a person's post, leaving them one action.

I'm suggesting one action and 7% Ki or something. Cuz honestly there are situations where them using their Ki/action to avoid it are beneficial to you and it's a neat mechanic. I just don't see it being used.



Buuuut other than that. Looks good to me for sure
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Should be good to go now.
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any defensive techniques and/or defensive items in their next pos

I just want to ask if the base action block or the base action dodge are in your mind considered defensive techniques or are you referring to Barrier, Evasion, Opal Electricity, Transmute etc...
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Approval from me, assuming the answer to the above question is just defensive techniques. I'm assuming this only applies to things like deflect, kiai, etc. I'm assuming people can still dodge, block, and use offensive techniques.
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Blocking and dodging were exceptions, should of pointed that out. Other techniques are the actual target. Those two are available to use.
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