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Post by Kale on Mar 9, 2021 0:24:33 GMT -5
With the walls of a large coliseum inside Satan City there was a tournament happening inside with many people seated watching a motely lot of warriors step on to the stage and test their abilities against one another. There were fighters of all races that stepped upon the tiles of the hexagon arena and battled. The stage was not an ordinary one. When the fighters got ready to engaged it floated into the air a corners of the arena could shift to mimic any Earthly landscape or even emulate the idiosyncratic landscapes of other planets such as Namek or Freiza. One of the figures participating in this combat tournament was Joseph. He emerged from the dressing room outfitted in a black headband, with a blue gui, cuffs, and black pants. The young boy held a stoic visage as he made his way to the arena. His hair was currently standing blonde and spikey with his eyes being a passionate green. He had managed to tap into this transformation during an earlier match he had and decided to retain the form to help practice maintaining it, luckily holding the transformation wasn’t too strenuous during the sedentary period of sitting and waiting for the next round. Joseph stepped upon the arena and waited on his end of the battle grounds waiting for his opponent and for the referee to signal them to begin. He looked forward patiently with his calm flat expression, though the stoicism looked rather stern due to the nature of the Super Saiyan transformation. The referee stood interposed between the participants. “We went over the rules in the dressing room, obey my commands at all times, protect yourself at all times, to your corners.” The boy went to his corner and gave a small bow before the stage began to ascend above the floors it stood on as the fight was about to begin, he rose his arms up putting his hands in front of his face and tucking his chin, standing his with left foot and left hand forward. Once the bell rung he stormed forward swaying side to side as he approached his opponent. Once he was close enough he whipped his leading left hand forward four times at the opponents face in quick succession with his left foot tapping the ground with each one as he worked to close distance. As he performed those punches he moved in and pulled his back right hand back and arched it up to slam into his opponents stomach with an uppercut before rising up and sending another uppercut at their chin before shooting his left forward again to fire a jab at their torso using the longest range punch he could do to give him a cover to stifle any counter attack as he moved back out his opponents reach. He then circled around the other fighter rapidly whipping his left hand at their body two times before sending his right hand straight to explode against their chin with a right cross, he then moved in and unleashed a flurry of punches aimed at her face and body trying to surprise and overwhelm them with rapid strikes in an sudden burst of aggression as he stayed close to keep them engaged in a close range fight. Tiger Claw Stance
A1) Super Saiyan
A2) Quick Attack combo 4 Jabs at face
A3) Special Attack Combo 2 Uppercuts [Body uppercut, Uppercut at chin]
A4) 2 Quick Attack, 1 Special attack Combo [2 Jabs at body, 1 Cross at face]
Scouter 1) 4 Quick Attacks[flurry of blows]
Scouter 2) Grapple Attempt
Speed) First post handicap
Tactical) [0/3]
Character Level:66
Power Level: 1,302,737/1,740,923
Strength: 131,360[242,848]
Speed: 133,596[298,511]
Toughness: 129,796[257,713]
Stamina: 134,939[232,382-5,916=226,466]
Vitality: 132,838[214,941]
Determination:2,464
Charisma:2,171
Intelligence:6,047
Fighting Style: Balanced[22/100]
Fighting Style: [/b] Calculating[22/100] Fighting Style:[/b] Defensive[10/10][/spoiler] Head: Necklace of Patient Defense/Double Scouter[interlocked]
Body: Rectitudal Armor[Armor Gem]/Roshi Martial Arts Uniform[Under-armor Branded]
Arms: Rectitudal Gauntlets/Ki Knuckles[Interlocked]
Legs: Capsule Corp Utility Pants/Rectitudal boots[Interlock]
Accessory 1: Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable Special Attacks +100% Damage:][3/3]
Accessory 2: Anointed Shield
Accessory 3: Dragon Amulet FundamentalsKiai[1/1]
Mastered Dodonpa
Deflect[2/2]
Blast Punch
Dynamite Kick
Mastered Serafin Punch
Mastered Energy Wave
Power Blast
Mastered Beam Ball
One Finger Blasts
Blood Sigil
Mastered Hammerhead Bukujutsu
Power Fly
Smoke Bomb
Totsuzen No SuneaAdvancedKamehameha: (Beam)[3/3]
Juturna’s Master Signature Kamehameha: (Blast)[3/3]
Super Kamehameha[3/3]
Solar Flare[1/1]
Daji’s Signature Flame Shield[3/3]
Kiaiho[3/3]
Renzoku Energy Dan[3/3]
Heal
Ice Blast[2/2]
Heat Phalanx[3/3]StanceTiger Claw Stance[1/1] Crush Stance[2/2] Pole Arm Master Stance[2/2] Power UpDyne Power Up[5/5]
Energy Charger
Barrier[3/3]
Body Shield[3/3]
Zanzoken[2/2]Double Zanzoken[1/1] Shiyoken[2/2] Hassenken[2/2] FinishersX10 Kamehameha[1/1]
Galactic Machine Gun [1/1]SpecialEvasion[2/2] Composure[1/1] Pressure Points[1/1] Resilience[2/2] Retaliation[2/2] Transmute Energy[1/1] Sense Leadership Ki Suppression Ki Mastery III Martial Arts Mastery I&II [/i] Prepared Weapon TechniquesLong Haft[2/2]
Traveler’s Strike[2/2]
Improved Windmill[2/2]
Improved Cripple[2/2]
Nature Staff[2/2]
Crushing/Piercing Blows[1/1]
Final Smash[1/1]
Vibration Blade[1/1]
Healing Blade[1/1][/spoiler] Gigi Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan [/color] Ultra Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan 2
[/font][/b] ?[/color][/i][/b][/i][/spoiler] Senzu Bag[4]
Sonic Gun
Capsule Corp Shield
Capsule Corp Barrier
Bento box[potion(x2, Energizer)
Faurie Dust
Rapier of Light
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Post by Puar on Mar 9, 2021 3:47:07 GMT -5
Form: Super Human[2% ki] / Damage: 0% / Ki: 89% |
It was time for the final round and the excitement had built to an overflow from the audience. They have seen each fighter face off, one by one, and it left two of them standing. Satan City was all about the glory of finding the strongest and crowning them the champion for a few months. During the tournament, the current champion lost which left the title up in the air for anyone to claim.
Now it was down to these two…
.::Joseph and The White Hare::. That is what the metamorphous woman decided to call this persona of hers. She knew of Joseph but chose not to reveal herself. She was the cat he met before in the Astral Library. She also was on the odd adventure against the Bounty Hunter Guild that was such a fuzzy memory. But today she was only ‘The White Hare’. She was a rabbit humanoid woman with a smirk of confidence that could melt steel beams like jet fuel. White Hare walked from the entrance and to the center where both the referee and Joseph would be standing.
The first thing she notice would be his super powered state. Through her own ability to sense energy she realized immediately he outclassed her. Call it a sense of danger, or common sense but The White Hare knew that she was completely outmatched in power. Her muscles expanded in response to her feeling of dread, powering her own self up. She did a few stretches as the ref explained his involvement in this match.
It was the same exact spill from the other fights, so The Hare was not shocked at all. Her eyes remained on her opponent, even when she went to her corner. When she got there, her personal trainer was there with immediate advice.
“The lad powered up in his last fight. It showed a lot about what he is capable of. This is going to be a tough one, White. Take in account that it takes a strain on the body to maintain that form. He might just slip up and give you an opening for a large attack. Take it the moment you see it.”
White nodded her head while she took a swig of water from the bottle he held up to her lips. Unlike, Joseph, she did not exert her power so continuous. She did end up having to use a bit of her true power, but the moment the fighting was over with, she relaxed completely.
The arena did its magical floating maneuver and the battlefield exploded with vegetation. Like a sped-up time lapse, an entire forest grew out of the arena floor. This made straight-lined attacks more difficult. And thus, the arena chose an Earth forest as the grounds to start this match.
And then the Bell Rang. White Hare placed her hands in-front of her, fist balled, and her feet were evenly spread into a stance that made it seem like she was ready to Crush her opponent. Joseph swayed between the trees, disappearing and reappearing in White Hare’s vision. Good.
She would utilize this as a point to get use to his speed.
When he finally was upon her a spark of energy flare out from all around the body of White Hare. She instantly set the area ablaze around them as Joseph attacked her, and the fire attacked him back. Her head rocked side to side as she was too slow on her reaction timing to dodge him for now. The flames raged on again as he aimed lower toward her torso. They snapped at him like turtles that possessed flaming hot teeth. His uppercut lifted her off the ground and she winced at the pain it brought.
Just as I thought. He hits like a truck. He’s quick too, but I feel like I’m getting used to it.
As her feet touched the ground again, the boy assaulted her once more with a cluster of strikes. This forced her to let out an audible cry of pain, but that only made her focus more. Her eyes narrowed in focus as there was a split second of hesitation. She used that to turn and face him with a whip like punch going toward his face.
And that fist split into two and aimed also toward his leg.
It was difficult to tell which fist was real, but the one that aimed at his leg had to be the real one, if it landed that was the only one that hurt. Then came another punch that was cursed with a similar fate. Two fists came rocketing toward the youth, the real one went for his knee, while the fake went from his face again. After the confusing split attack came what seemed like normal strikes to his thighs, The Hare ducking low to aid in her punches. She replaced the illusion strikes with explosive ones this time, adamant on putting as much damage on the lower section of his body.
Each time she struck, she reset into a stance… a stance that surely was meant to Crush him. Each time she swung her fists and it connected with anything, be it the ground when she missed or the limbs of the youth, the trees shook. Leaves scattered from the shaking to rain down on them as if they were rain drops.
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Free.Crush Stance [Stance] |EXTRAS: Next post +1 Action. A1.Super Human [Super Form] |EXTRAS: +3,000 all, +65% all, +15% to speed. [-1% ki to all DR5 or lower techniques] A2.Flame Shield[DR:4] [KI:1%] [CE:Burn] [Energy] |EXTRAS: Versus A2. 20% Reduction A3.Flame Shield[DR:4] [KI:1%] [CE:Burn] [Energy] |EXTRAS: Versus A3. 20% Reduction Free. Take A4. [Energy] |EXTRAS:20% Reduction Free. Take S1 |EXTRAS: 20% Reduction Free. Illuson Wolf [4% ki] |EXTRAS: +50% damage to punches. Unblockable punches. 10% stun chance Free. Enter Grapple |EXTRAS: +2 Grapple Actions A4. Special Attack: Punch [Energy Stealing] [Physical] S1. Special Attack: Punch [Energy Stealing] [Physical] S2. Blast Punch[DR:3] [KI:1%] [Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: Ki manipulation DR Increase. G1. Serafin Punch[DR:3.5] [KI:1%] [Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: Ki manipulation Ki reduction. G2. Blast Punch[DR:3] [KI:1%] [Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: Ki manipulation DR Increase. -9% ki
Taken Attacks 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Special Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Quick Attacks, 1 Special Attack[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction]
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COMBAT INFORMATION
{Spoiler}{NOTES} Prepped Items: 1. Stun Grenade 2. Stasis Grenade 3. Cauldron Caffeine Pills 4. 5. 6. 7. 8.
TECHNIQUES
Power Ups -- 1. Dyne's Power Up 2. Energy Charger 3. Double Zanzoken 4. Kaioken x1-30 5. Super Kaioken x1-30
Fundamentals -- 1. Kiai 2. Deflect 3. Bukujutsu[0.1%k] 4. Power Fly[0.3%l] 5. Beam Ball [DR1][0.5%k] 6. Dodonpa [DR2][4%k] 7. Super Dodonpa [DR4][7%k] 8. One Finger Blast [DR2][4%k] 9. Blast Punch [DR 2.5][2%k] 10.Mesposo[DR0.5][1%k] 11.Mouth Blast[DR3.5][3%k] 12.Suiken[DR1][3%k] 13.Fire Breath[DR2.5][2%k] 14.Hammerhead[DR3.5][0.5%k] 15.Energy Wave[DR1][2%k] 16.Serafin Punch[DR3][4%k] 17.Energy Dan[DR4][7%k] 18.Umbri-Lance[DR4][6%k]
Advanced -- 1. Ki Shockwave[DR5][8%k] 2. Atomic Blast[DR4][7%k] 3. Dirty Fireworks[DR5][9%k] 4. Ki no Tsurugi[DR3.5][5%k] 5. Demiton Bomb[DR7][12%k] 6. Negative Arrows[DR5][10%k] 7. Kamehameha[beam][DR5][12%k] 8. Flameshield[DR4][2%k] 9. Grand Smasher[DR4][8%k] 10.Galactic Blow[DR4][8%k]
Finisher -- Spirit Sword[DR6.5][15%k] Spirit Bomb[DR10][4%k] Spirit of the People[DR7.5][16%k]
Rushes -- -Meteor Combination -Burning Shoot -Death Chaser -Open Ball Fist
Power Up -- -Dyne's Power Up -Kaioken x20 -Opal Electricity[9%k] -DZ -Energy Charger -WFF[2%k] -IW[4%k]
Stances -- Cat Paw Stance Crush Stance
Special Techniques / Items -- Sense Transmute Energy ST (8/8) KM3 Ki Suppression Shishio Soul Spark: +3% speed Fisticuffs Advanced Fisticuffs Leadership
{Spoiler}{EQUIPMENT} Body Arms Legs Head Accessory Accessory Accessory
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Post by Kale on Mar 9, 2021 23:29:49 GMT -5
The opening combinations of punches had hit their mark cleanly, but sudden bursts of fire like ki ensured that he didn’t land those shots for free. He yelped in pain and surprise as each burst of retaliatory flames engulfed him, and coughed as smoke invaded his lungs, he gritted his teeth as he stepped and retracted back between his blows. Luckily his physicality as well as the resilient fabrics of his gui did well to mitigate the damage done by the intense flames, smoke lingered on his person as he moved back preparing for his opponents next move. The white hare moved in to strike coming at his with preternatural strikes that appeared as though they came in twos from the same side, one aimed up at his face and the other aimed at his legs. He could tell this was a type of feinting technique but not which technique was the feint, Joseph thinking quickly discerned that it would be best to move off line from the path of both strikes the boy put his feet together and squared up his stance and pivoted to the side making the shape of a sharp C to avoid the first heavy strike. Joseph then pulled his left arm down before launching it up in an arch while thrusting his hips to explode beneath the bunny woman’s chin with an uppercut, he then followed by hurling his right hand to slam across her jaw with a hook. At this moment he could appreciate being the shorter fighter. The woman may be able to reach more with her size but her height opened the door to a defensive short coming, she had to punch down hit her opponent and striking so low meant she reached down even more. A fighter is traditionally taught to strike straight from a certain point of their center to not leave opening, but here her fist had to shoot lower than what that recommendation entailed, her striking arms were down meaning her arm and shoulder wasn’t in the way between her face and his fists, and he’d happily test this fighter’s jaw. After the two punch combination Joseph shuffled his feet and retreated back to get out the bunny woman’s reach. When the next split strike came towards the boy he took a quick step to the side, before popping forward with a step forward shooting out his left hand with a jab pulling that hand back half closed back towards his face while launching his right hand straight at the Hare’s face to nail her with a cross before taking a step back starting with his reared right leg. The next punch was empowered with ki and wasn’t coming in pairs this time. Joseph promptly placed his feet side to side like he was going to shuffle again before spreading them out and pivoting making the shape of a V as he evaded the explosive punch and attempted to get away from her center. He could feel the next punch was empowered with even more ki, rather than try to retract and circle around her with more evasive foot work he stood with his arms still towards his face and rose his leg up to intercept the serafin punch with his shin. Ki exploded from the blow and he could feel a shock against his leg, but it was lighter than what a clean shot to his thigh would have been. He kept moved his leg to guard against the explosive punch that follow. He noticed that quite a few attacks were aimed at his legs and the boy was sure that she meant to take his legs out from under him. It would have been wise to do so, taking the strength from his legs meant that he wouldn’t be able move his feet quickly to evade her, not to mention that the legs he stood on allowed him to draw power from the ground and give strength to the blows he threw with his fists, he would have to wary to protect them if she persisted in this tendency. Joseph stepped towards the bunny woman again shooting another left jab at her jaw before popping that same hand forward again at her stomach to knock the air out of her lungs. These jabs were his cover moving in to get close to her to where their feet were nearly touching, this kind of proximity is known as the inside or in the pocket in combat sports. Joseph turned his left shoulder until he snapped forward like a rubber band to slam her side with a left hook before shifting to do the same on the other side to hit her with right hook. After finishing that set of punches he moved to the other side and swung more hook punches at her sides before lowering down to strike at less conventional targets, delivering round punches to crash into her hips. It may have seemed like a strange choice to aim for such an area, the hips were some of the strongest bones in the body, but there was reason behind it. He wanted to slow her down and impede her ability to exercise her own range of movement. Free)Take A2&A3 A1) Tiger Claw Counter@A4[2 Special Attacks: Uppercut, hook]
A2) Counter[Power Level]@s1[2 Special Attacks: left Jab, Straight-Right/Right Cross][energy Stealing]
A3) Dodge@S2
A4)Block@G1&G2
Speed) 4 Quick Attack Combo:[Double Jab@face and body, Hooks@body][Energy Stealing]
G1) 2 Quick Attacks, 1 Special Attack[Hooks@torso, hook at hips][Energy Stealing]
G2) 2 Special Attacks[Hooks@Hips][Energy Stealing]Tactician[1/3] Character Level:66
Power Level: 1,296,812/1,729,082
Strength: 131,360[242,848]
Speed: 133,596[298,511]
Toughness: 129,796[257,713]
Stamina: 134,939[226,466-5,916=220,550]
Vitality: 132,838[214,941]
Determination:2,464
Charisma:2,171
Intelligence:6,047
Fighting Style: Balanced[22/100]
Fighting Style: [/b] Calculating[22/100] Fighting Style:[/b] Defensive[10/10][/spoiler] Head: Necklace of Patient Defense/Double Scouter
Body: Rectitudal Armor[Armor Gem]/Roshi Martial Arts Uniform[Under-armor Branded]
Arms: Rectitudal Gauntlets/Ki Knuckles[Interlocked]
Legs: Capsule Corp Utility Pants/Rectitudal boots[Interlock]
Accessory 1: Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable Special Attacks +100% Damage:][3/3]
Accessory 2: Anointed Shield
Accessory 3: Dragon Amulet FundamentalsKiai[1/1]
Mastered Dodonpa
Deflect[2/2]
Blast Punch
Dynamite Kick
Mastered Serafin Punch
Mastered Energy Wave
Power Blast
Mastered Beam Ball
One Finger Blasts
Blood Sigil
Body Slam
Bukujutsu
Power Fly
Smoke Bomb
Totsuzen No SuneaAdvancedKamehameha: (Beam)[3/3]
Juturna’s Master Signature Kamehameha: (Blast)[3/3]
Super Kamehameha[3/3]
Solar Flare[1/1]
Daji’s Signature Flame Shield[3/3]
Kiaiho[3/3]
Renzoku Energy Dan[3/3]
Heal
Ice Blast[2/2]
Heat Phalanx[3/3]StanceTiger Claw Stance[1/1] Crush Stance[2/2] Pole Arm Master Stance[2/2] Power UpDyne Power Up[5/5]
Energy Charger
Barrier[3/3]
Body Shield[3/3]
Zanzoken[2/2]Double Zanzoken[1/1] Shiyoken[2/2] Hassenken[2/2] FinishersX10 Kamehameha[1/1]
Galactic Machine Gun [1/1]SpecialEvasion[2/2] Composure[1/1] Pressure Points[1/1] Resilience[2/2] Retaliation[2/2] Transmute Energy[1/1] Sense Leadership Ki Suppression Ki Mastery III Martial Arts Mastery I&II [/i] Prepared Weapon TechniquesLong Haft[2/2]
Traveler’s Strike[2/2]
Improved Windmill[2/2]
Improved Cripple[2/2]
Nature Staff[2/2]
Crushing/Piercing Blows[1/1]
Final Smash[1/1]
Vibration Blade[1/1]
Healing Blade[1/1][/spoiler] Gigi Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan [/color] Ultra Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan 2
[/font][/b] ?[/color][/i][/b][/i][/spoiler] Senzu Bag[4]
Sonic Gun
Capsule Corp Shield
Capsule Corp Barrier
Bento box[potion(x2, Energizer)
Faurie Dust
Rapier of Light
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Post by Puar on Mar 10, 2021 15:18:09 GMT -5
Form: Super Human[2% ki] / Damage: 0% / Ki: 80%[-2% stolen] |
And only Ruppell’s fox can withstand the heat. A fire broke out from the flames that had jumped to bite at the youth in defense of The White Hare. It started off as tiny group of fires that danced to the winds generated by their punches. The spread was quick and without mercy. The flames feasted on the vegetation. It was such a chaotic expansion. The forest had started to become fuel to the flames, and the battlefield became a personal hell.
And the audience loved it. They were safe after all. The fighting arena had long since rose pretty high and the air was starting to heat up as well. There was a grin on the bunny woman that almost seemed malicious as the child began his counter assault. She tensed her body and hunched over and in doing so her body started a mutation. Each strike from the boy would meet a careful and strong block of her arms.
When she blocked his uppercut and hook, her body shrunk almost to his size.
When she blocked his jab and right cross, her ears sharpened, and her puffy tail expanded into a fluffy long one.
She steadied her breathing and took focus on it. She knew it was important during the time that the fire blazed and the air current heated up more. The Bunny girl took on a more fox like appearance and for good reason as well.
The Ruppell Fox was needed. Her second set of blocks cloaked her face. She then followed down to her body with them. At that point, she was putting force toward the blocks. Instead of remaining still in tension, she was pushing off Joe's attacks . She was feeling him out, remaining patient through his assault, and looking for an opening. He took aim at her hips, and it would seem that they both had similar strategies in mind. He was trying to take his opponents legs from under them.
When he went for another round of strike to her hips, that was the opening she needed. Her arm smacked down at his fist to interrupt the combination. The metamorphic woman brought her free fist to a crash course into the side of his body, teeming with energy. With a connection, an explosion would send force right into the inside of his body. His lungs were in danger.
And she did not stop there.
The hand that interrupted him, swung at his other side with a similar purpose. Energy would explode off the contact point which was the other side of Joseph. After that, she unleashed a combination of three punches with explosive intent. Alternating between sides, she aimed to rip apart his body.
Her attacks were meticulous.
Her attacks were uninteresting.
Her attacks were… obvious.
Would Joseph be as predictable to her standards? “Why do you fight, Joseph?”
She gave a simple question that had such a complex answer, but there was such a passion to the question. The passion rolled off her tongue with more heat than the forest fire gave off.
The White Bunny, who turned into a Sly fox, was very curious and wondered how much he’d spill in the heat of battle.
Announcer Commentary:
“King, did you see that? Did she just transform in the middle of Joseph’s insane combination!?”
“You bet your ass she did, J.R. I can’t believe my eyes. I did not know that The White Hare or whatever she calls herself could get any hotter. I mean, jesus J.R look at the puppies!!!”
“Is that all you can think about, really? You aren’t going to comment on the forest fire? Or the fact that she shrunk to his size to compensate and drop his biggest advantage? You just…you just zoom in on that fact that her chest didn’t shrink as much.”
“You know me, J.R. I just love a nice set.”
“My god!! I thought she was in a bind, but she countered that last part into a devastating combination!!! How will Joseph respond!?”
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A1. Block A1 and A2 A2. Block SPD and G1. A3. Blast Punch Counter!![DR 3] [1% ki] [CE: Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: KM DR Boost. Rectitude Gauntlet Counter against G2. A4. Serafin Punch[DR3.5] [1% ki] [CE: Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: KM Ki Reduction. G1. Blast Punch[DR 3] [1% ki] [CE: Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: KM DR Boost. G2. Serafin Punch[DR3.5] [1% ki] [CE: Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: KM Ki Reduction. Crush. Blast Punch[DR 3] [1% ki] [CE: Energy Stealing] [Hybrid] |EXTRAS: KM DR Boost. -5% ki
Taken Attacks 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Special Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Quick Attacks, 1 Special Attack[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 Quick Attacks[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2QAs / 1 SA[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction]
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COMBAT INFORMATION
{Spoiler}{NOTES} Prepped Items: 1. Stun Grenade 2. Stasis Grenade 3. Cauldron Caffeine Pills 4. 5. 6. 7. 8.
TECHNIQUES
Power Ups -- 1. Dyne's Power Up 2. Energy Charger 3. Double Zanzoken 4. Kaioken x1-30 5. Super Kaioken x1-30
Fundamentals -- 1. Kiai 2. Deflect 3. Bukujutsu[0.1%k] 4. Power Fly[0.3%l] 5. Beam Ball [DR1][0.5%k] 6. Dodonpa [DR2][4%k] 7. Super Dodonpa [DR4][7%k] 8. One Finger Blast [DR2][4%k] 9. Blast Punch [DR 2.5][2%k] 10.Mesposo[DR0.5][1%k] 11.Mouth Blast[DR3.5][3%k] 12.Suiken[DR1][3%k] 13.Fire Breath[DR2.5][2%k] 14.Hammerhead[DR3.5][0.5%k] 15.Energy Wave[DR1][2%k] 16.Serafin Punch[DR3][4%k] 17.Energy Dan[DR4][7%k] 18.Umbri-Lance[DR4][6%k]
Advanced -- 1. Ki Shockwave[DR5][8%k] 2. Atomic Blast[DR4][7%k] 3. Dirty Fireworks[DR5][9%k] 4. Ki no Tsurugi[DR3.5][5%k] 5. Demiton Bomb[DR7][12%k] 6. Negative Arrows[DR5][10%k] 7. Kamehameha[beam][DR5][12%k] 8. Flameshield[DR4][2%k] 9. Grand Smasher[DR4][8%k] 10.Galactic Blow[DR4][8%k]
Finisher -- Spirit Sword[DR6.5][15%k] Spirit Bomb[DR10][4%k] Spirit of the People[DR7.5][16%k]
Rushes -- -Meteor Combination -Burning Shoot -Death Chaser -Open Ball Fist
Power Up -- -Dyne's Power Up -Kaioken x20 -Opal Electricity[9%k] -DZ -Energy Charger -WFF[2%k] -IW[4%k]
Stances -- Cat Paw Stance Crush Stance
Special Techniques / Items -- Sense Transmute Energy ST (8/8) KM3 Ki Suppression Shishio Soul Spark: +3% speed Fisticuffs Advanced Fisticuffs Leadership
{Spoiler}{EQUIPMENT} Body Arms Legs Head Accessory Accessory Accessory
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Post by Kale on Mar 11, 2021 2:30:32 GMT -5
The seemingly flat-footed bunny had managed to move and cover herself against the volley of counter punches to the child’s surprise. That was not the only outside possibility his counter attacks were with, she was also transforming in the middle of guarding against the punches becoming a stature similar to his in just a moment. He could feel the woman pushing back against his blows rather than remaining rigid, or yielding to divert them. Joseph respected the finesse and assertiveness she displayed, defending against the flurry that composed what Joseph thought would be an impetuous assault. She had taken the form of a kitsune and towards the end of his attack she intercepted one hand while sending another to slam into his side trying to push out the fresh air in his lungs in the middle of burning, smoke riddled forest. Between her having a degree of control of the hand she interrupted and being too deep on the inside his current position closed off the option of retreating from the blow with a shuffle or pivot. He rose up the arm that she did not intercept and placed it across his body vertically, folding the arm over his torso to meet the blow intercepting the explosive punch interposing his arm between his body and the fist and detonation of ki that sent him a step back from his rear right leg. He was mindful to move his back leg first rather than the front, starting with his left would have made him cross his legs making him lose his stance and become less stable for a precious moment his opponent would have prayed upon with alacrity. He saw that she had her other hand behind that last blow and Joseph rose his arm up and turned to divert the punch leading it from him while he transitioned his right arm to fold across his upper body vertically mirroring the left arm below it to form a crossguard. The ki bursted against his guarding forearms and elbows and pushed him back, he promptly planted his feet down to steady his weight after a retracting step. More heavy ki powered punches launched towards him, the Demi-Earthling kept his arms folded across his body absorb the impact of punches targeting his sides, turning towards each of the blows to meet the strikes with his forearms and elbows. With each exploding punch against him Joseph gritted behind his lips and sounded stifled groans of pain as the shock and heat carried through his arms while burning them as well. This was not his favorite way to block, it felt awkward as he did not use this shape of guard often. Notable uses he could recall was against Yakumo, as the guard was able to make up for speed and mobility taken by the turtle suit he wore during that fight. He practiced it in preparation for what he thought would be a fight with Lilim on Valhalla, but other than that he didn’t have much experience with it, not to mention the position of his arms was not conducive to the counter punching he had a predilection for, however it was servicing him well enough against the flurry of explosive punches. After enduring the last ki punch with his guard, Joseph unfolded his arms holding them up half closed in front of his face as he moved while answering the question the woman asked him. “it’s fun,” He answered while circling around the fox woman, whipping his left hand forward at her jaw and face trying to snake by any guard or track any movement with her head. He continued circle as jabs kept coming for her before he followed with his rear hand to crash into her face with a right cross. Afterwards he moved in this time coming in with a lateral hook to slide across her jaw, before he lowered down and threw another hook at her side. He then arched the opposite hand up to slam into her stomach with an uppercut, before rising back up and shooting up another one to slam underneath her chin, before he took a step back and shoot two more jabs from his left, shooting some at her face to daze her and others at her body to knock the air from her lungs. He then began moving around shooting the jabs at her cheeks and jaw, before he launched his right hand again to land across he was working to set up with the jabs, swarming her didn’t work as he planned, he came in planning to be upon her, provoke her to take a shoot to make her miss and pay for it, but she managed not fall to aggressive counter punching. Now with them of similar height Joseph worked to keep her at the end of his reach until she was primed to be swarmed and overwhelmed like he originally planned. A1) Cloak of Guarding@A3[fundamental fully defended]
A2) Block A4-G1
A3) Block G2-Crush
A4) 4 Quick Attacks[Circle and jab@face]
Speed) 2 Quick Attacks, 1 Special[hooks to face, hook to body, Uppercut to body]
G1) 4 Quick Attacks[Circle and jab] G2) 2 Quick Attacks, 1 Special[Circle and Jab, Right crossCharacter Level:66
Power Level: 1,287,938/1,717,250
Strength: 131,360[242,848]
Speed: 133,596[316,091]
Toughness: 129,796[257,713]
Stamina: 134,939[220,550-5,916=214,634]
Vitality: 132,838[214,941]
Determination:2,464
Charisma:2,171
Intelligence:6,047
Fighting Style: Balanced[22/100]
Fighting Style: [/b] Calculating[22/100] Fighting Style:[/b] Defensive[10/10][/spoiler] Head: Necklace of Patient Defense/Double Scouter
Body: Rectitudal Armor[Armor Gem]/Roshi Martial Arts Uniform[Under-armor Branded]
Arms: Rectitudal Gauntlets/Ki Knuckles[Interlocked]
Legs: Capsule Corp Utility Pants/Rectitudal boots[Interlock]
Accessory 1: Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable Special Attacks +100% Damage:][3/3]
Accessory 2: Anointed Shield
Accessory 3: Dragon Amulet FundamentalsKiai[1/1]
Mastered Dodonpa
Deflect[2/2]
Blast Punch
Dynamite Kick
Mastered Serafin Punch
Mastered Energy Wave
Power Blast
Mastered Beam Ball
One Finger Blasts
Blood Sigil
Body Slam
Bukujutsu
Power Fly
Smoke Bomb
Totsuzen No SuneaAdvancedKamehameha: (Beam)[3/3]
Juturna’s Master Signature Kamehameha: (Blast)[3/3]
Super Kamehameha[3/3]
Solar Flare[1/1]
Daji’s Signature Flame Shield[3/3]
Kiaiho[3/3]
Renzoku Energy Dan[3/3]
Heal
Ice Blast[2/2]
Heat Phalanx[3/3]StanceTiger Claw Stance[1/1] Crush Stance[2/2] Pole Arm Master Stance[2/2] Power UpDyne Power Up[5/5]
Energy Charger
Barrier[3/3]
Body Shield[3/3]
Zanzoken[2/2]Double Zanzoken[1/1] Shiyoken[2/2] Hassenken[2/2] FinishersX10 Kamehameha[1/1]
Galactic Machine Gun [1/1]SpecialEvasion[2/2] Composure[1/1] Pressure Points[1/1] Resilience[2/2] Retaliation[2/2] Transmute Energy[1/1] Sense Leadership Ki Suppression Ki Mastery III Martial Arts Mastery I&II [/i] Prepared Weapon TechniquesLong Haft[2/2]
Traveler’s Strike[2/2]
Improved Windmill[2/2]
Improved Cripple[2/2]
Nature Staff[2/2]
Crushing/Piercing Blows[1/1]
Final Smash[1/1]
Vibration Blade[1/1]
Healing Blade[1/1][/spoiler] Gigi Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan [/color] Ultra Super Saiyan
Super Saiyan 2
[/font][/b] ?[/color][/i][/b][/i][/spoiler] Senzu Bag[4]
Sonic Gun
Capsule Corp Shield
Capsule Corp Barrier
Bento box[potion(x2, Energizer)
Faurie Dust
Rapier of Light
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Post by Puar on Mar 11, 2021 11:23:54 GMT -5
Form: Super Human[2% ki] / Damage: 0% / Ki: 74% |
“Well, have fun~”
That was her only response which drowned out by the cackling flames. He circled around her and she didn’t make much of an effort to move. Instead, she abided her time and gathered her energy. Her face took a blow and she stumbled some. A small wince appeared in her facial features as she allowed her guard to drop. She got used to the weight of his current punches, and it was time to search for a better opening anyway.
Joseph was moving around quite a lot in this kind of heat. Puar started to wonder if he did not take in the fact of how the human body operates on heat. Did he know how heat exhaustion worked? She saw it though. Being a scholar of her level had its perks.
She was a little bit clever after all.
He didn’t notice it, but to her Joseph was slowing down with every few seconds in this heated and thin air. The control she had over her breathing and the lack of movement kept her less exhausted. She took a guess and she nailed it. This made Puar excited.
Joseph was somewhat predictable.
As he circled and pummeled her with strikes and hits, the metamorphic woman’s body would feel hot to the touch. It was nothing too alarming yet, as the sly fox seemed to be on the losing end of this exchange of blows. But once the last bit of it peppered against her skin…
She literally exploded like a bomb. This threaten to give the boy second degree burns. Definitely punishment for flawing her wonderful skin so badly.
With one drawn out breath, steam rose from her nose and mouth. Her body was nothing short of a blackened shape that held white eyes. She was some form of demonic being to everyone’s eyes. The sly fox had become nightmarishly terrifying . She pulled all the hot air and flames with one massive and almost inhumane gulp. This left the forest itself as only an ash riddled barren wasteland of black.
And then came a stream of fire from her mouth like a dragon’s breath. It was ready to incinerate Joseph if he slipped up even once. After the first stream, the sly fox unleashed another stream without much of a pause. She released all the flames she held prisoner back onto the forest. It wiped away the ashes and turned the battlefield completely into a plain of flames.
The aura of fire still surrounded her, and it bubbled and popped all around her like tiny combustions. With her form still of nightmares and shadows, she clenched the burning grounds. Her fingers stung with delight.
And then she smiled.
The flaming aura concentrated itself around her body like a skin tight armor.
Her smile and her eyes filled with a hot white and blinding light.
How terrible could the sly fox become? Was she really a demon?
Her feet dug into the ground before she launched at him like a speeding bullet train. Her fist pulled back as if it was spring loaded and ready to unload. When she arrived at her destination, she unloaded her fist like a crazed passenger late for work. It shot upward into an uppercut, that meant no burning harm yet. The flames that surrounded her would propel her into the air like a Mach 1 plane.
Her thick thigh swung right at his hips, filled with a passion to burn him and dislocate his hip joint. After following through the hip shot she attempted to slam a backhand right into his throat. She intended on sending him back to the ground. After it was all done, she floated in the air.
Whether she hit her mark or whiffed it all, the flames would disperse quick and violent. This created a loud bass noise that shook the arena some. She looked normal once again and with cold and calculating eyes.
Those eyes studied her surroundings. Ending the short life span of the forest was necessary against this kind of opponent. She didn't like it. But, he was too powerful to fight alone. Even if it cost the forest its life, she was grateful for it being a sacrifice to the fire storm she created. |
Free. Tale A4/SPD/G1 A1. Flame Shield[DR 4] [1% ki] [CE: Burn] |Extra: Against G2. A2. Second Wave Fire Breath + Fire Breath[DR 3][DR3] [1% ki][1%ki] [CE: Burn][CE:Burn] | Extra: KM DR boost. A3.Burning Shoot[1 SA, Flame Shield, 1 SAs, 1 QA][DR4][DR4] [1% ki] [CE: Burn] |Extra: 3 STs to dodge. A4. [Grapple Stun] -4% ki
Taken Attacks 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Special Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Quick Attacks, 1 Special Attack[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 Quick Attacks[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2QAs / 1 SA[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 QAs[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2QAs, 1SAs[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction]
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COMBAT INFORMATION
{Spoiler}{NOTES} Prepped Items: 1. Stun Grenade 2. Stasis Grenade 3. Cauldron Caffeine Pills 4. 5. 6. 7. 8.
TECHNIQUES
Power Ups -- 1. Dyne's Power Up 2. Energy Charger 3. Double Zanzoken 4. Kaioken x1-30 5. Super Kaioken x1-30
Fundamentals -- 1. Kiai 2. Deflect 3. Bukujutsu[0.1%k] 4. Power Fly[0.3%l] 5. Beam Ball [DR1][0.5%k] 6. Dodonpa [DR2][4%k] 7. Super Dodonpa [DR4][7%k] 8. One Finger Blast [DR2][4%k] 9. Blast Punch [DR 2.5][2%k] 10.Mesposo[DR0.5][1%k] 11.Mouth Blast[DR3.5][3%k] 12.Suiken[DR1][3%k] 13.Fire Breath[DR2.5][2%k] 14.Hammerhead[DR3.5][0.5%k] 15.Energy Wave[DR1][2%k] 16.Serafin Punch[DR3][4%k] 17.Energy Dan[DR4][7%k] 18.Umbri-Lance[DR4][6%k]
Advanced -- 1. Ki Shockwave[DR5][8%k] 2. Atomic Blast[DR4][7%k] 3. Dirty Fireworks[DR5][9%k] 4. Ki no Tsurugi[DR3.5][5%k] 5. Demiton Bomb[DR7][12%k] 6. Negative Arrows[DR5][10%k] 7. Kamehameha[beam][DR5][12%k] 8. Flameshield[DR4][2%k] 9. Grand Smasher[DR4][8%k] 10.Galactic Blow[DR4][8%k]
Finisher -- Spirit Sword[DR6.5][15%k] Spirit Bomb[DR10][4%k] Spirit of the People[DR7.5][16%k]
Rushes -- -Meteor Combination -Burning Shoot -Death Chaser -Open Ball Fist
Power Up -- -Dyne's Power Up -Kaioken x20 -Opal Electricity[9%k] -DZ -Energy Charger -WFF[2%k] -IW[4%k]
Stances -- Cat Paw Stance Crush Stance
Special Techniques / Items -- Sense Transmute Energy ST (8/8) KM3 Ki Suppression Shishio Soul Spark: +3% speed Fisticuffs Advanced Fisticuffs Leadership
{Spoiler}{EQUIPMENT} Body Arms Legs Head Accessory Accessory Accessory
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Post by Goku Jr on Mar 12, 2021 10:10:49 GMT -5
Puar 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Special Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 Quick Attacks, 1 Special Attack[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 Quick Attacks[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 Quick Attacks[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2QAs / 1 SA[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Block] [-20% Damage Reduction] 4 QAs[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2QAs, 1SAs[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction] 2 SAs[Taken] [-20% Damage Reduction]
100-25% = 75%
Joseph Flame Shield DR4 [-30% Damage Reduction] Flame Shield DR4 [-30% Damage Reduction] Block Serafin Punch [DR 3.5] [-30% Damage Reduction] Block Blast Punch [DR 3] [-30% Damage Reduction] Block Serafin Punch [DR 3.5] [-30% Damage Reduction] Block Blast Punch [DR 3] [-30% Damage Reduction] Block Serafin Punch [DR 3.5] [-30% Damage Reduction] Block Blast Punch [DR 3] [-30% Damage Reduction]
100% - 15% = 85%
Notes *Blocked attacks still hurt, even with damage reduction. *Damage increases exponentially. The more you take, the more you are hurt. The more you try to mitigate by blocking, the less effective blocking will be. This worked against the both of you in conjunction with your posts.
RP Bonus
In one corner we have the love of my life.
In the other corner we have the RPer I love the most.
Joseph First and foremost please fix the double-spacing. Good, clean presentation is important. The double spacing is just awkward and it makes reading your posts a drag.
Now that aside, I love how you put in meticulous detail with each and every movement that Joseph makes. It is great to see and it allows the reader to follow along with his movements in your mind's eye. Writing like that is why I fell in love with you and why I'd do anything for you (no homo). However, this section is what I liked the most.
Great use of providing detail with Joseph's senses, the line of "not landing shots for free" shows that Joseph needs to be weary of his opponent at all times and sets a great precedent in spite of the power gap. In general this is great battle etiquette.
I like how you wrote in your damage reduction by mentioning the resilient fabrics of Joseph's Gi. You got points for that.
Great job expanding on how blocking a blow can still affect your body.
Only critique I have is that this isn't Pokemon. I don't think anyone in any RP in the history of ADBZ saw a Ki infused fist come at them and said "[Character X] blocked a Serafin punch." And if they did then they should have been banned. It's just a name given to a tech for OOC mechanical reasons. Nobody's character calls it that.
What I'd like to see more of from you Joseph is the same meticulous detail you place in your character's movements you should place in your environment as well as stimulate the reader's five senses. The more details you write in a battle, the more variables you can control. That's the next step you need to take.
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Puar Great job setting the scene and providing great detail with the match in general. Details such as this helps make your posts more immersive.
Another note I would like to add is that blocking/dodging a counter should require a great roleplay. That is almost said verbatim on the main site.
Puar blocking Joseph's counter while metamorphing was really creative and why I will allowed it to pass. However, just know that it will take roleplay of that level of creativity/savvy in order to work.
A couple of things though.
While adding commentary from the great King and J.R. put a little smile on my face, the inclusion of it was a tad bit jarring. I also noticed how you didn't do it again, which made it even more jarring. So, you lost some points for that. I know in general you like to take creative liberties and it's why you're really good at what you do, but in situations like this it can be a double-edged sword and sometimes less is more. The inclusion of the commentary was just flat-out unnecessary.
Another thing is that Joseph is actually doing a better job of writing how he takes attacks better than you are.
A throwaway line like this vs the meticulousness of Joseph's writing just isn't going to cut it. The same detail he put into writing Joseph's strikes is the same detail you need to place in how the blows landed, how it made your character feel (the pain level for instance) and etc. Again, this is about controlling variables and the more you can control, the more you can write it into your favor in the long run. Otherwise, when I read that all I can interpret is that Puar got rocked harder than Antonio Brown when Ray Lewis almost ended his career, which is why the damage you took scaled up.
Now compare this block to the block Joseph wrote that I quoted.
Although it was great attention to detail to write that Puar was blocking with force, you need to provide more detail with how much force is needed to counterbalance it. Again, more variables that you have to consider.
Now with all of that said, the RP Bonus is going to...
Puar
More flavorful posts with nice clean syntax and very few jarring grammatical errors and run-on sentences (Joseph you're the king of run-ons sometimes) and you have yourself a nice clean RP Bonus.
Battle Notes One thing we are moving away from are excessive information in battle notes.
You do NOT have to put your ENTIRE tech list in your battle notes.
You do NOT have to put your super forms in your battle notes.
You do NOT put your "HP" in your battle notes because "HP" doesn't exist. This one confuses me the most and I don't know who started this fad. Nowhere on the site does it say any stat, or combination thereof, measures hit points.
What you NEED to put in your battle notes are your Stats, Prepared Items/Weapon Techniques, and Equipment.
You can also add Counters to that list as well.
I don't care if you put your entire tech list within a spoiler, it still shouldn't be in your battle notes. We are trying to get away from battle note clutter, because it got to the point where battle notes were longer than actual posts.
See Alex's "Example of a Good/Bad Battle Post" for more information on how clean and concise your notes section should look.
Please be sure to make the appropriate changes in both of your battle notes sections moving forward.
Fight on.
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Post by Kale on Mar 13, 2021 21:36:06 GMT -5
The boy’s assault had landed cleanly, surprisingly so. He wasn’t expecting the blows to land so easily, their main purpose was to keep her back, but his opponent wasn’t trying to move in, nor were they trying to move back. The fox woman even lowered her hands as she allowed herself to e nailed by the flurry of blows. He wasn’t sure what to make of it but since he was using long range strikes that he could quickly pull back from he was confident he could escape any retaliation. The confidence soon showed to be misplaced as with a sudden burst a fiery eruption of energy erupted from the Fox woman, the force of the explosion sent him flying back across the arena, the flames that bathed him ripped holes into his gui and pants and singed his exposed skin as he eventually hit the ground bouncing before tumbling back. The child now prone, lied on the ground and coughed, while he was still on the ground he took some breath panting, and sweeting as the fiery assault made the heat get to him. As the Demi-Earthling got to his feet, he looked up to the sight of the latest form the shapeshifting woman had assumed, looking more ghoulish and bestial than ever. He saw the beasts stomach expand as it was taking a deep breath before firing a torrent of flame to incinerate the opposition. Joseph arms snapped forward as he exuded his ki from his hands, the energy from the two palms joined together forming a blue circular shield interposed between the fire and their target. Joseph stood his ground against the fire, the shield protecting him from the baulk of the flames to wear they did little more than make him sweat more. A mere moment after a breath of fire assaulted the barrier again, the shield along with the boy started to get pushed back, the waning barrier shrinking and singing his hands and form, and charring the trim of his gui. Eventually the flames overtook the shield sending the child stumbling back, he could see a flash of a smile before the beast struck him with an uppercut that snapped his head back and sent him flying into the air, before he had a sense of where he ended up a strong kick was sent into his hip making him yelp in pain as the burning kick dug in and burnt his lower waist. The assault ended with the back of his fist slamming into his throat making him hack before plummeting into the ground. The violent thud echoed through the arena and kicked up more smoke in the burning forest. He lied on the ground stunned from the assault, he coughed and slowly rose back to his feet looking up and seeing that she had reverted from her monstrous form. The boy then stepped from the crater looking up to the woman floating into above him in the air. The boy ran towards her before jumping into air going above the fox woman before doing a flip as he released a transparent shot of ki from his feet to quickly descend towards the fox woman, with a flick of his wrist he brought his power pole from his cuff, it elongated to double his height as he brought it down to crack over the head of the Ruppell fox. His eyes followed her carefully prepared to track any movement she would make to evade. He had just relied on his fist up until this match, but weapons were allowed under the rules of this tournament and he decided it was time for his staff to come into play. The strike from his weapon was intended to send her back to the arena. The boy landed soon after the attack, shortening his weapon to the length of a baton. He rushed towards her as the weapon started exuding a faint golden glow, he started off with swinging the weapon to hit her across the head on one side, and reversed the motion to crack her across the other side. He then began rapidly flicking and swinging the weapon in a flurry of strikes, elongating it and taking it in both hands as he lashed out striking rapidly. He started at the head and worked his way down striking to knock her across the cheeks and jaw, bludgeoning the side of her neck, going down to pound the arms, snapping out at the bends of each arm, before aiming to pound the stomach and ribs, then striking at the hips, before striking at the side of each knee. He wanted to systematically break her down with crushing force, trying to wear her down and prime her be finished off in due time. After finishing the assault with his weapon, he shrunk his weapon and it seemed to disappear as he dropped it back into his cuff. In the same moment and brought his hands together and clapped at the fox woman’s face. No pain would come from it, but she’d find herself startled, dazed, and stunned even struggling to stay on her feet. Free) Take Flame Shield
A1) CC Barrier@A2[-90% fire breath],[-50% second wave fire breath]
Free) Take A3
A2) Special Attack with Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable][+100% damage]
Free) Nature Staff[-5% ki]
A3-Tactical) Crushing Blows[DR 4.5][Very Difficult to dodge or Block][Critical Crush]
Speed) Sonic Gun[RPed as Clap Stunner]Character Level:66
Power Level: 1,271,769/1,695,692
Strength: 131,360[242,848]
Speed: 133,596[316,091]
Toughness: 129,796[257,713]
Stamina: 134,939[214,634-10,779=203,855]
Vitality: 132,838[214,941]
Determination:2,464
Charisma:2,171
Intelligence:6,047
Fighting Style: Balanced[22/100]
Fighting Style: [/b] Calculating[22/100] Head: Necklace of Patient Defense/Double Scouter
Body: Rectitudal Armor[Armor Gem]/Roshi Martial Arts Uniform[Under-armor Branded]
Arms: Rectitudal Gauntlets/Ki Knuckles[Interlocked]
Legs: Capsule Corp Utility Pants/Rectitudal boots[Interlock]
Accessory 1: Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable Special Attacks +100% Damage:][3/3]
Accessory 2: Anointed Shield
Accessory 3: Dragon Amulet Prepared Weapon TechniquesLong Haft[2/2]
Traveler’s Strike[2/2]
Improved Windmill[2/2]
Improved Cripple[2/2]
Nature Staff[2/2]
Crushing/Piercing Blows[1/1]
Final Smash[1/1]
Vibration Blade[1/1]
Healing Blade[1/1][/spoiler] Senzu Bag[4]
Sonic Gun
Capsule Corp Barrier
Bento box[potion(x2, Energizer)
Faurie Dust
Rapier of Light
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Post by Puar on Mar 14, 2021 2:51:36 GMT -5
The fire continued to cackle, crack, and pop in the air. Puar’s attention pulled to the boy below just as he looked up to her. She did not go their first round unscathed in the slightest and neither did he. Both fighters bore the marks of battle all about their bodies. The clothing which they wore began to wane to their might. Her body was slowly floating to the ground, not expending much energy to stay afloat, and their stare down felt like it lasted for days.
But in reality, it was only a second and Puar found her eyes widened as she lost sight of Joseph completely.
Her first instinct was to look behind her! But then, his energy had been sensed above and thus pulled her attention to that direction. In a fit of panic, sparks of energy jumped from every pore of her body and she let out a howling scream. Power exploded out of her body and the forest fire danced sporadically at the behest of her aura.
His pole smashed onto her head and sent her to the ground with a yelp and a grimace to boot. Her feet slammed into the arena and caused the flooring to crack at the force, but she remained on her feet with her eyes shut tight. Pain rang through her body that started from the tip of her cranium. It was a perfect shot to the head, and one she was not prepared for.
Even then, he felt slower than before. He pushed himself to get in position, but the heat seemed to do its job. The strike was numbing and painful, but Puar knew she could still push on.
“So, you need a weapon to defeat me, eh? I— am—flattered.”
She opened her eyes and once again they seemed to defy their own size with how wide they had gotten. He swung at her head and she ate it. Puar felt she could have moved at the way, but her body was still in shock from the head blow earlier. To make matters worse, he put her into more shock with another head blow.
And then another strike to the head.
Each strike garnished a yelp of pain and a loss of control over her ability to maintain her current animal form. She gained just a little bit more height, and she slowly turned into a cat woman this time. Blood began to splatter all over the arena. Puar’s feet danced about, fighting to keep herself standing properly. He then went for the legs and that was when her feet gave out.
Part of it was forced, but another part was her knowing that she did not want to spend the energy for it. As she fell down, she felt him clap at her face to stun her and she blinked. Did he want to feel her furry cheeks or something?
After the assault Puar was in her real form, and even then, Joseph had never seen her like this so she doubt he’d recognize her. The cat woman shook in pain, but still managed to pick herself up. Her clothing was tattered, and it didn’t bother her. She, however, was able to smile some as she reaffirmed the strength in her body and got into a basic fighting stance.
“And right about now is when the heat should be slowing…you… down.”
That last bit of movement had to have taken a lot out of the young boy. For a while he should feel as if his movements were impeded by dehydration. These were the effects of being in the heat and up so high all at once.
“It really sucks being organic. This is why I didn’t move so much. I didn’t want to start burning out in the heat of battle. Though, this is getting fun. I did not expect this much from you when I saw you in the Astral Library*, Joseph.
I suppose this was the perfect time to show you my true form. Here it is.”
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A1. Power Up vs. A2|Extra: +25% ki / Full power. Free. Take Crushing Blows A2-3. Stuns A4. Stasis Grenade|Extra: 1 less action next 3 posts. RP'd as Heat Exhaustion. -0% ki *Follow that link for more context. |
COMBAT INFORMATIONDamage: 25%
Attacks Taken [This Round] / Damage Heals -1 SA [+100% damage][-20% Reduction] -Crushing Blows [DR4.5][-20% Reduction]
Ki Remaining: 97%Form: Super Human [2% ki per turn]
[100%]Power Level --- 896,455 [ 11,404 ][ 885,051 ] [100%]Ki --- 448,228 STRENGTH: [ 96,086 ][ 104,127 ] SPEED: [ 127,496 ][ 139,071 ] TOUGHNESS: [ 96,845 ][ 110,220 ] STAMINA: [ 141,379 ][ 141,379 ][ 11,404 ] VITALITY: [ 102,514 ][ 108,814 ] INTEL 4,057 CHARIMA 4,070 DETERMIN 830
[Current Stats] [Equipment] [Negatives] Prepped Items:1. Stun Grenade2. Stasis Grenade3. Cauldron Caffeine Pills4. 5. 6. 7.8.Counters / Speed TeleportsCounters: 0/0Speed Teleports: 8/8EQUIPMENT {Spoiler}{} Body Arms Legs Head Accessory Accessory Accessory
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Post by Kale on Mar 14, 2021 21:58:19 GMT -5
While he prepared to press his assault further he heard Puar’s remark that made his eyes widen in surprise. The boy wasn’t expecting a shot like that to be taken at his use of a weapon. He started to question whether he should have resorted to the use of his staff, but he pushed passed and continued his assault, he wasn’t going to let his opponent rattle him, he knew she’d be more than happy to capitalize if she managed to do so. Akin to the series of jabs and straights the rapid strikes from his staff connected with the woman cleanly, even managing to overtake her and bring her to her knees. A flurry of rapid strikes with crushing force was one of Joseph’s maneuvers use with his weapon, it was simple, effective, and satisfying to land. After finishing the assault he hunched over and started breathing heavily, it was becoming a more difficult task to stay on his feet. Sweat from dripping from his forehead and brow. The woman spoke again drawing him to look up to the sight of the new feline form she had taken. What she was saying was disparaging to hear, he had thought he could evade and have his attacks land so well because his finesse was superior, but in reality he was playing into her hands. What she said after took the boy by surprise. “Puar?” he said questioningly.The boy straightened his back and rose his arms up in front of his face preparing to continue. “So this is your trust form? its nice. I like it.” He was feeling the heat get to him and it made him question how much longer he could go on, but he would keep pressing on until he found out. He was sure she was still shaken up by his crushing blows so he prepared to move in. He rose his arms and extended them out to assume the *crush stance*right before his feet blurred as he swiftly shuffled his feet back and fourth rapidly swapping the lead between his left and right foot. The child bursted forward at his feline opponent, shooting his left hand off twice to send out a double jab as he prepared to send a straight right hand, followed by a left hook across her jaw as he further closed the distance between them, before pulling his opposite shoulder back and snapping it forward to deliver another hook, before shifting that weight to the other send another reaving hook from his left side. The child arms blurred as he broke off into a flurry of blows rapidly striking at her face and body with jabs, straights, and hooks. The jabs and straights were sent to explode against her face, for the hooks he lowered down turning each of his shoulders back as much as he could before snapping back to slam them into her stomach and her ribs on each side would be tested with heavy round punches. After the series of hooks he moved in closer, crotched down and launched his fist upward to slam Puar underneath her chin with an uppercut, the punch would send her off of her feet, the sheer force of the blow made a hurricane rush through out the arena building and snuffed out the fire that plagued the forest. She would find herself flying until she crashed through the ceiling if she didn’t stop herself in time. Afterwards Joseph took a breath and his aura manifested around him as he drew from his reserves to get to his full power, he kept his breaths slow and steady trying to recovery from the effects of the heat. Free) Crush Stance during A2-A3 A1-4) Break Storm![ 15 Quick Attacks, 2 Special Attacks][9 Speed Teleports to dodge][Energy Steal] Tactical) Power up![+25%ki] Speed) Stasis Character Level:66 Power Level: 1,683,860 Strength: 131,360[242,848] Speed: 133,596[316,091] Toughness: 129,796[257,713] Stamina: 134,939[203,855-5,916=197,939] Vitality: 132,838[214,941] Determination:2,464 Charisma:2,171 Intelligence:6,047 Fighting Style: Balanced[22/100] Fighting Style:Calculating[22/100] Fighting Style:Defensive[10/10] Head: Necklace of Patient Defense/Double Scouter
Body: Rectitudal Armor[Armor Gem]/Roshi Martial Arts Uniform[Under-armor Branded]
Arms: Rectitudal Gauntlets/Ki Knuckles[Interlocked]
Legs: Capsule Corp Utility Pants/Rectitudal boots[Interlock]
Accessory 1: Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable Special Attacks +100% Damage:][3/3]
Accessory 2: Anointed Shield
Accessory 3: Dragon Amulet Prepared Weapon TechniquesLong Haft[2/2]
Traveler’s Strike[2/2]
Improved Windmill[2/2]
Improved Cripple[2/2]
Nature Staff[1/2]
Crushing/Piercing Blows[0/1]
Final Smash[1/1]
Vibration Blade[1/1]
Healing Blade[1/1] Senzu Bag[4]
Sonic Gun
Capsule Corp Barrier[used]
Bento box[potion(x2, Energizer)
Faurie Dust
Rapier of Light
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Post by Puar on Mar 15, 2021 16:13:56 GMT -5
She gathered her breath and smiled easy. Joe complimented her, but there was not much shock to him doing so. A reason she hid this form was that it garnished men's attention more than she liked. Puar was not the seductive type and avoided attention at all costs. Since she could only do female forms and didn't want to feel completely ugly, it was difficult.
"Thank you."
He's about to strike again. I have to settle myself still because this is going to hurt. Look for the opening.
It was true that she was still shaken up by the stick beat down. But Puar was not going to allow another combination to shake her that way. She was going to prepare for this. Her eyes looked down to his feet, and she saw his shuffle movement. The boy was ready to explode with a youthful burst, and there was a moment that the feline woman saw for an escape.
She opted out of it, and she clenched her teeth and tensed her body, readying it for what was to come.
Here it comes.
His first twin set of jabs smashed into her. Seeing that they had no actual aim, Puar made sure to take advantage of their blind trajectory. She gave them her shoulder as an aim. The more challenging bone structure would mitigate damage, but did it stop the pain?
No. Puar stifled back a cry, and she allowed her body to become limp and powerless. His punches were pushing her back. The straight right and left hook smashed against his face, and there was no resistance. The moment he connected, Puar took a step back to alleviate even more damage. As his flurry of punches and hooks rained down upon her face and body, her feet backpedaled.
It continued countless times until she had become numb to his pain.
And then it stopped.
Puar opened up one eye, her entire body shaking in protest to the pain she allowed it to feel. When she could no longer see him, she panicked and looked down. She saw the edges of his knuckles smashing upward and sending her vision to the skies. A loud boom exploded from the impact, and a massive wave of wind shot out and snuffed out the fire.
This sent the audience into a raging scream filled with excitement and stupor.
She went flying into the air and toward the ceiling for a time before she decided to take back control of her body. With a sudden thud of sound, she stopped with her body tensed, and she looked down to the dot that was Joseph. As his aura manifested, she gathered herself into the same stance she held at the start of the battle. It was easy to set back into it only because of the distance he set between them and him lagging from the heat effects.
"Well, got rid of the fire. That is fine. The fire was limiting me as well."
She had to admit to herself that the fire was a double edge sword. Joe moved and caught fatigue. She stood still, and she saw pain. But now was the time for her to act more aggressively. Puar bit the side of her left cheek where she hid a pill that crushed and entered her bloodstream with haste.
Her eyes widened, and her body showed signs of healing. Her breathing increased along with her heart rate. She had a feeling that with a smidge more speed that she could catch him off guard. To the audience and maybe briefly to Joe, she vanished. She zig-zagged downward toward him to try and avoid his eyes catching up to her sudden burst of speed. When she had gotten a few feet above him, she pulled her arm back as if she were about to toss a pitch at him.
And she did that. An energy ball rushed at him like a fastball and threatened to explode into a massive explosion. Her level of power jumping up to compensate against her foe as well. With the toss came a grunt, and the fastball took on more of a curveball characteristics. It was arcing to try and hit him from the right side of his body.
And she took this moment to slide to the left of him. Would he choose to defend the immediate danger or save himself for what was to come next?
Faster. Stronger.
Puar's sapphire-colored skin began to dye into a menacing crimson. It was almost the same as the beast she created before. The blood-red aura popped and crackled against her skin for a moment.
And then it expanded. A violent candle flame surrounded Puar, and she felt the tension it put on her body.
I will push my body twenty times it's limit. This power should be more than enough to even the fight!
A red foot would attempt to slam into his ribcage like a spear from Joe's left side. Puar would then chase after him with her other leg pulled back. Her toes were tickling the tips of the hair on her head. When he slowed down, she would drive her knee with all the force she could muster into his stomach. If that were successful, the feline woman would raise her arms upward. Her fingers were clenching together. Her eyes looked down at him, widened with power and strength.
Puar dropped her balled hands like a hammer to the top of his head. That hammer would send his body into the ground, which would only be a foot away from them. With the bounce of his body, her foot would drive down into him like another spear. She let off a grunt with the effort she put into her combination.
Blood dripped onto the ground from her face as she looked down at the boy. Of course, this was assuming her rush was successful. There was a stone-hard determination in her eyes which was a clear signal that she had more for him.
"You want to see an uppercut?"
Her body tensed even more, and she winced while pulling her fist back. Puar had split into two versions of herself, like earlier in the match. Only one form physically damaged the boy when she acted, while the other was a decoy for Joseph's attention. She scraped the forest ground with her fist, creating a fissure-like trench in the dirt. The fist swung upward into his back to pop him off the ground, and another fist came right after that one. Puar bent her knees to get lower and springing up to add the needed force to send the boy into the air like a rocket ship.
"Raaaaahh!"
Like Joseph's uppercut, a sonic boom explosion burst from the impact point at his back. The entire coliseum shook. Puar vanished in a puff of crimson smoke and created confusion with the crowd. The speed she had reach had become almost too hard to follow. By the time her body had appeared, she was above the rising star Joseph with her fist pulled to the side.
She sent a powered haymaker right toward his kidney with intentions of rupturing it.
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Free. Take ass whoopin!!|Extra: God damn. Free. Crush Stance|Extra: +1 action next post. A1.Buku+Take Caffiene Pills|[0.1% ki]Extra: +5% Speed and Stam. -10% flat damage and stamina drain. A2. Buku+ST+Grand Smasher|[DR4][ 4.1% ki]|Extra: KM ki reduction, 1M PL, 268k SPD. Free. Kaioken x20|Extra: +10k str and spd. +29% str and spd. Duration: 3 actions. A3. Death Chaser|Extra: 3 SAs and 1 QA. 4STs to dodge Free. Illusion Wolf[2% ki]|Extra: +50% damage to punches 10% stun chance. Duration: 4 attacks. A4. Open Ball Fist|Extra: 3 SAs and 1 ST. 4STs to dodge -6.2% ki *Follow that link for more context. |
COMBAT INFORMATION Damage: 15%
Attacks Taken [This Round] / Damage Heals -1 SA [+100% damage][-20% Reduction] -Crushing Blows [DR4.5][-20% Reduction] -15 QAs and 1 SA [-20% Reduction] - -10% flat damage and stamina drain
Ki Remaining: 88.8%Form: Super Human [2% ki per turn]
[100%]Power Level --- 873,647 [ 0 ][ 873,647 ] KK: 949,377 [100%]Ki --- 436,824 STRENGTH: [ 96,086 ][ 112,899 ][ 0 ] KK: 156,443 SPEED: [ 127,496 ][ 154,195 ][ 0 ] KK: 210,564 TOUGHNESS: [ 96,845 ][ 118,214 ][ 0 ] STAMINA: [ 141,379 ][ 145,173 ][0] [1,829]* VITALITY: [ 102,514 ][ 108,814 ][ 0 ] INTEL 4,057 CHARIMA 4,070 DETERMIN 830
[Current Stats] [Equipment] [Negatives] *Stam buffer from non-PL. Prepped Items:1. Stun Grenade2. Stasis Grenade3. Cauldron Caffeine Pills4. 5. 6. 7.8.Counters / Speed TeleportsCounters: 0/0Speed Teleports: 7/8EQUIPMENT {Spoiler}{} Body Arms Legs Head Accessory Accessory Accessory
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Post by Kale on Mar 17, 2021 21:02:59 GMT -5
Just as Joseph thought, Puar wasn’t able to really defend against the volley of punches from the child’s swarming attack beyond just turning more sturdy parts of her body in the way of some of his punches. He was surprised she was able to stop herself from crashing and even continue fighting after that assault, there was an admiration he had opponents of such tenacity. He was also relieved that his uppercut had put out the fire as well, he didn’t want to know how he would have fared if he had to keep fighting in the intense heat and smoke. Though the emerald eyes were locked on Puar her sudden of speed almost made him miss her as she tossed a swift curving ball of energy, Joseph extended his aura and stuck his hand out. Upon contact with his palm the sphere lost its shape and swirled around him in the form of yellow flames that wrapped and veiled around him and his aura to make a fiery shield. After that she moved even more quickly escaping his perception for a blink which was all she needed for a kick to dig into his ribcage and send him off the ground. “Augah!” he groaned in pain as the kick sent him flying off then slammed into the ground by double fisted blows, before a knee speared into his stomach making his gasp as air unnaturally pushed from his lungs. Right as he got back on the ground he sent stumbling farther back with another kick. He barely had time to look down before Puar moved in with another uppercut that slammed underneath his chin snapping his head back as he flew into the air, when the final blow connected his gasp as he was sent tumbling across the arena before he rolled and got back to his feet. Joseph pulled out his staff again making it the length of a night stick before rushing towards her, once he was in reach he snapped the weapon at her ribcage with a flick of his wrist, before pulling the weapon back and thrusting it forward to jab her stomach with the tip, before he spun taking the weapon in both hands as he elongated its swinging it like a baseball back for it to slam against her stomach and send her flying back. A1) Transmute@A2: Grand Smasher[DR 3 Flame Shield: Critical: Burn]
Free) Take A3-A4
A2) Travelers Strike[DR 2 very difficult to block] A3) Long Haft[DR 2] A4) Travelers Strike[DR 2, very difficult to block] Tact) Stasis
Character Level:66 Power Level: 1,659,114 Strength: 131,360[240,448] Speed: 133,596[288,641] Toughness: 129,796[190,059] Stamina: 134,939[196,915-3,749=193,166] Vitality: 132,838[214,941] Determination:2,464 Charisma:2,171 Intelligence:6,047 Fighting Style: Balanced[22/100] Fighting Style:Calculating[22/100] Fighting Style:Defensive[10/10] Head: Necklace of Patient Defense/Double Scouter
Body: Rectitudal Armor[Armor Gem]/Roshi Martial Arts Uniform[Under-armor Branded]
Arms: Rectitudal Gauntlets/Ki Knuckles[Interlocked]
Legs: Capsule Corp Utility Pants/Rectitudal boots[Interlock]
Accessory 1: Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable Special Attacks +100% Damage:][3/3]
Accessory 2: Anointed Shield
Accessory 3: Dragon Amulet Prepared Weapon TechniquesLong Haft[2/2]
Traveler’s Strike[2/2]
Improved Windmill[2/2]
Improved Cripple[2/2]
Nature Staff[1/2]
Crushing/Piercing Blows[0/1]
Final Smash[1/1]
Vibration Blade[1/1]
Healing Blade[1/1]
Senzu Bag[4]
Sonic Gun
Capsule Corp Barrier[used]
Bento box[potion(x2, Energizer)
Faurie Dust
Rapier of Light
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Post by Puar on Mar 18, 2021 12:41:15 GMT -5
Power was still teeming from every pore of the feline woman's body and sweat began to gently protrude from them. She had at least 3 or 4 more minutes of this power before she ultimately tapped out. Still, unfortunately for her, this was needed. She floated in the air, keeping the distance between her and Joe substantial so that she could read his subsequent movements all the easier. While floating, she noticed her arms and legs were steaming, and the source was not coming from her own crimson aura.
Joseph burnt her. Looking back at it, she remembered that he was quick enough to gobble up her curveball, and she cursed herself for turning it into such a slower pitch. She had to, though. It was the defining attack that allowed her punches and kicks through.
She just didn't expect him to turn her own attack against her.
"He is seasoned and intelligent. He listens and learns from his masters. Good."
Puar enjoyed his fighting style and his moxie, and she knew he was not done. Even with the shot to his kidney hopefully slowing him down some, Puar knew he was going to be in her face within no time. That was his strength.
Persistent and merciless pressure. Puar respected that, but she would also turn that into his weakness. While she was still in her stance and waiting on him to attack, she started to pool concentration and power into her body. A white outline appeared around her body and her aura compressed against her.
Let him in with one.
His weapon snapped against her ribcage, and saliva spilled from her mouth. She clenched her teeth, and her face tightened at the anguish her ribs cried. They were becoming tender. She could not allow a back-to-back shot.
Block the next!
She blocked the blow to her stomach with both arms, but it would be only halfhearted because her arms were numb from the burn marks that his flaming barrier had left behind. The guard did not feel as great, and the pain seeped through like a flood against a tiny washcloth. After that hit, however, she began to focus her energy on her left hand.
While he was spinning, she used that split moment to line her left hand up to where his wrist would end up after the swing of his newly formed baseball bat, and she grabbed it. This left her completely open to the swing to her stomach, but with her empowered strength, she gripped his wrist to stop her own body from flying away from him.
There was a moment she felt even more pain than before. Her body was wearing down from her technique, and that was a clear indicator that she did not have much time left to stay in this state. That state of mind is what drove her to what came next.
While holding onto his wrist with a grip, she set off a colossal explosion of Ki directly onto his body. This would create a massive explosion that created a substantial amount of dark smoke to mask both fighters. When the smoke cleared, Joe was left in the state he would be independent on how quick he could retaliate, and Puar would….
Puar had shapeshifted again, and this time the shape she took on mirrored the boy, but there was a glaring difference in gender. That was Puar's weakness when it came to shapeshifting; she had not mastered gender roles. But floating before Joseph would be his twin sister, pre super Saiyan.
Without much of a word said, just like how Joseph himself was, she took on the same stance he would have when he wielded his staff. Where a stick would be, instead, there was a spark of white light. The spark engulfed her entire right hand and formed a white bar made of pure energy that she gripped. Hopefully, with Joseph confused at seeing a female variation of himself, he would not notice that she was also just an image.
The real Puar would drop from higher in the sky, the staff extending just like how Joe's had done so earlier in the match. With how powerful she had become, the energy stick would be able to pierce through the young boy if he did not move out of the way in time. Puar would begin to fade like an image again after the staff had extended, showing she was moving at a new speed now.
Her final image and actual body would show itself to his backside with the staff broken into a two-piece tonfa modification, wielding them in both hands. The longer ends of the sticks were exposed forward so that when she sent her two punches, they would stab at him in attempts to poke holes into his body. The first punch went right for the middle of his neck, leading the tonfa to try and stab his shoulder.
The second punch aimed right at the middle of the spine and that tonfa tried to pierce through his side. She winced after it was all done, the drain the body limit breaking technique was weighing heavy on her body. It just would not stop her from continuing.
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Free. Take Traveler's Strike A1.Buku+Block Long Haft Free. Take Traveler's Strike Free. Continue KKx20[ 20% ki/vit] A2.Buku+Charge| A3.Buku+Empowered Charged Galactic Blow|[DR8][ 11% ki]|Extra: KM ki reduction, 1.2M PL, Unblockable] A4.Buku+Spirit Sword|[ 15% ki][CE: Pierce]|Extra: KM DR Boost[DR7], Duration: 6 Actions][1.6mPL] Free. Continue KKx20[ 20% ki/vit] Free. Reserves[+20% ki] DZ1.Buku+Spirit Sword|[DR7][6% ki][CE: Pierce]|Extra: 1/6 DZ1.Buku+Spirit Sword|[DR7][CE: Pierce]|Extra: 2/6 Crush.Buku+Spirit Sword|[DR7][CE: Pierce]|Extra: 3/6
-72.7% ki
COMBAT INFORMATION Damage: 15%
Attacks Taken [This Round] / Damage Heals -1 SA [+100% damage][-20% Reduction] -Crushing Blows [DR4.5][-20% Reduction] -15 QAs and 1 SA [-20% Reduction] - -10% flat damage and stamina drain -Flame Shield DR3[-20% Reduction] -Traveler's Strike x2 [DR2] [-20% reduction][BURNED] -Long Haft [Block][BURNED]
Ki Remaining: 34.1%Form: Super Human [2% ki per turn]
[100%]Power Level --- 955,177 [ 67,039 ][ 888,138 ] [100%]Ki --- 477,589 STRENGTH: [ 136,850 ][ 152,536 ][ 0 ] SPEED: [ 177,370 ][ 214,044 ][ 0 ] TOUGHNESS: [ 96,845 ][ 118,214 ][ 0 ] STAMINA: [ 141,379 ][ 141,379 ][ 32,035 ] VITALITY: [ 102,514 ][ 102,514 ][ 35,004 ] INTEL 4,057 CHARIMA 4,070 DETERMIN 830
[Current Stats] [Equipment] [Negatives] *Stam buffer from non-PL. Prepped Items:1. Stun Grenade2. Stasis Grenade3. Cauldron Caffeine Pills4. 5. 6. 7.8.Counters / Speed TeleportsCounters: 0/0Speed Teleports: 7/8EQUIPMENT {Spoiler}{} Body Arms Legs Head Accessory Accessory Accessory
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Post by Goku Jr on Mar 20, 2021 11:38:00 GMT -5
Puar -1 SA [+100% damage][-20% Reduction] -Crushing Blows [DR4.5][-20% Reduction] -15 QAs and 1 SA [-20% Reduction] - [-10% flat damage and stamina drain] -Flame Shield DR3[-20% Reduction] -Traveler's Strike x2 [DR2] [-20% reduction][BURNED] -Long Haft [Block][BURNED]
75% - 29% = 46%
Joseph -Flame Shield DR 4 -Fire Breath [-90%] -Fire Breath [-50%] -Burning Shot -Death Chaser -Open Ball Fist
85% - 27% = 58%
Notes *I was very harsh on damage due to reasons that I'll explain below.
Joseph
I have to say since the last ref report that....
You haven't gotten any better.
In fact, in some ways, you have gotten worse.
I don't have too many good things to say about what you've posted. And it's not because some of what you wrote is bad, but it's actually because it's just not good enough.
I don't know who started this, and I don't know why. I know Puar did something similar but at least it was more so in passing.
But I don't want to ever see this again. It's far too lazy writing in general. I don't know how much clearer I can be but, the next time any of you lazily describe going into your stance as "[Character X] assumed their *CRUSH* (haha geddit) stance" it's an automatic fail. Try to put in some actual effort.
A line like this just isn't going to cut it. It feels like a throwaway so you can move forward with your next actions. So it comes off as if I'm reading a sequence of events.
In essence, it feels like your actions are dictating your roleplays, and that your roleplays aren't dictating your actions.
Here, it's obvious that you misplaced yourself with Puar, and again, it just won't cut it. The syntax is there, but barely, and that's why you have to step it up.
One of your biggest issues is also congruency. So Joseph was on the ground, stunned, coughing, and he slowly got back onto his feet. He then looked up at Puar and--
So you went from on the ground stunned, to coughing and slowly getting back onto your feet, to then running full speed without any signs of a struggle to do so?
There are ways to portray your character struggling to do things that become a "theme" throughout the battle and your posts. It's fine that you know how to write how to take a punch, but what's next is understanding how your character taking multiple hits will affect them throughout the battle. Their movements might not be as sharp, their speed would wane, their punches would begin lack stopping power, etc, etc.
For this battle, it's fire. The thick smoke, the blisters on Joseph's skin, the aching, singing pain that continues to stimulate his nerves. I need more descriptions based on that. Joseph should be at a point where he is moving in spite of the pain that lingers.
During the next round of posts I expect more. A lot more. This is where your best writing should be, and I'm just not seeing it from you.
Puar
Call it a personal pet peeve but right off the bat I don't like this section at all. I'm very aware that you wrote this line because of my ref report.
When describing Puar taking the Break Storm you started off so well.
But then it turned into...
So...in some ways I get it.
When you're hit with a quick combination attack it can happen so fast that not even your body can process what happened to you until later. But the line that said that Puar allowed her body to become limp and powerless was very jarring to me.
I think I might, kind of, maybe, get what you were going for. Almost as if Puar entered some sort of meditative trance to alleviate the pain that was to come. But that's a stretch, and even so, the roleplay that ensued would have to blow me away to give you points on mitigating it enough for it to matter on the damage report. As things are though, it's just not enough. That meticulous detail I asked from you isn't there. I don't know if it's out of laziness, but I expected a little bit more.
A better use of using a lull in combat to assume a stance. Would have liked a better description of it though, such as Puar assuming the stance in spite of the pain that she felt, and that it sort of granted her a sense of meditative calm as stances generally do for martial artists.
That's a free tip for the both of you, and something I'm disappointed that neither of you described your stances as.
This line was way too on the nose for me. I understand that in the show Goku would yell "Kaio-Ken times twenty!" but this line was just too meta for me.
This is more in line with what I want to see on a more consistent basis. It felt very real, raw, and visceral. Great syntax and it felt organic how Puar knew that the next strike would be far too harmful for her to take.
Great. Again, pretty much exactly what I wanted to see from the both of you. A great call back to previous battle wounds, a great description of the pain that she felt, it's just right on the money.
RP Bonus goes to Puar again.
Fight on.
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Post by Kale on Mar 24, 2021 0:46:14 GMT -5
While he was preparing his final strike with his weapon he dropped down an Sensu bean from one of his cuffs to replenish the energy he lost from his efforts and as well as the heat exhaustion. The boy could feel the surge of energy building up from the feline while he was delivering the final strike he was surprised she had the ability to maintain that concentration while getting struck at with his weapon. She surprised him again by catching his staff on the final strike and trying to snatch at his wrist. The boy quickly pulled his hand back away from her grasps as he charged a gilded orb of energy in his free hand while taking a step back to gain distance before popping the sensu bean in his mouth and giving a few quick bites and swallowing before she released the attack. As the energy erupted from her he threw his own energy towards her becoming multiple bolts of energy that spread and collided with her burst of energy. The moment the blasts collided a thunderous crash sounded as a shockwave sent the boy flying back before he flipped and focused to slow his fall to a gentle glide towards the dirt and burnt and dead grass. After a moment the smoke cleared and the boy’s eyes widened in surprise at what he was seeing. Puar had taken on his appearance, though in his base form but feminine. It was how he would imagine himself as female, it was an interesting choice, but somewhat unsettling. An massive energy above him and dropping towards him drawing his attention to the real puar who he looked up to as she was dropping down. The concentration of immense spirit energy coming towards her arm and the in progress construct of energy betrayed the intent to generate a deadly weapon of spirit energy. Before she made her first strike with it, he moved in bending his thumb and fingers together making the shape of a beak before rapidly jabbing at various points of the shapeshifter’s body and her shoulder, intending to lock up the points her ki was flowing to make the blade unstable and weaken greatly if not disappear altogether. Her power was close to his own but he could feel the massive amounts of ki the technique demanded and could feel her energy lowering due to the negative effects on her constitution. If he could survive this assault this would be a battle of attrition, and between the sensu bean and less intensive techniques he was confident he could sustain himself better than she could. For further insurance he generated a thin veil of spirit energy around himself while elongating his staff to double his stature while turning and following the immense power source to keep Puar in his sights. He guarded against the first strike from above by twirling the weapon between each of his hands and pivoting to parry the Spirit weapon, sparks cames from the clash of the weapons and the white veil shrunk and grew dimmer. She faded again and Joe remained wary following the power signature so that his eyes would not deceive him. She had split her weapon in two and he braced himself. Joseph held the weapon in both hands and began snapping his shoulders forward to meet her energy blade with his magic staff. He swung meeting each Tonfa with each end of his staff. He gritted his teeth as the impact would manage to allow the weapon through and jab him. He twirled the weapon in his hands stepped to the side and pivoted towards her to move from Puar’s center and closing in. He quickly dropped his weapon into his sash while moving towards her to engage her in close quarters. A1) Sensu Bean during A2[-50% damange&Battle Fatigue, +25%ki]
Free) Martial Arts Database Nullify Empowerment[Empowerment DR bonus ignored]
A2) Renzoku Energy Dan Blast Cancel@A3[Advantages: Power Level: 2.3mil, Ki Spent][-18%ki]
A3-A4)Pressure Point@A4[-50% damage](Guessing this is the energy half)
Tactical) Body Shield@DZ1[-100% physical damage]
Free) Enhanced Sensory Module[Spirit Sword -1 DR]
Free) Take DZ1-Crush[Barrier -50% physical damage@DZ1, -25% physical damage@DZ2
DZ 1) Grapple Attempt
DZ 2) Stasis
Character Level:66 Power Level: 1,659,778 Strength: 131,360[240,448] Speed: 133,596[288,641] Toughness: 129,796[190,059] Stamina: 134,939[196,915-3,749=193,166+19,097=212,263=197,598] Vitality: 132,838[214,941] Determination:2,464 Charisma:2,171 Intelligence:6,047 Fighting Style: Balanced[22/100] Fighting Style:Calculating[22/100] Fighting Style:Defensive[10/10] Head: Necklace of Patient Defense/Double Scouter
Body: Rectitudal Armor[Armor Gem]/Roshi Martial Arts Uniform[Under-armor Branded]
Arms: Rectitudal Gauntlets/Ki Knuckles[Interlocked]
Legs: Capsule Corp Utility Pants/Rectitudal boots[Interlock]
Accessory 1: Goku’s Power Pole[Undodgable Special Attacks +100% Damage:][3/3]
Accessory 2: Anointed Shield
Accessory 3: Dragon Amulet Prepared Weapon TechniquesLong Haft[2/2]
Traveler’s Strike[2/2]
Improved Windmill[2/2]
Improved Cripple[2/2]
Nature Staff[1/2]
Crushing/Piercing Blows[0/1]
Final Smash[1/1]
Vibration Blade[1/1]
Healing Blade[1/1]
Senzu Bag[4]
Sonic Gun
Capsule Corp Barrier[used]
Bento box[potion(x2, Energizer)
Faurie Dust
Rapier of Light
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