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Post by Dr. Ghast on Jul 31, 2021 18:09:01 GMT -5
EDIT: Champion lv 2, Battlerecorder, Combat rune  Another boring day in this place filled with inferior, disgustingly small minded people. It was nothing more than that, nothing more, nothing less. Halsey had just spend about two weeks on this backwater planet called earth and already she was already overwhelmed by her urge to sow dissent, chaos and death among those filthy slobs that called themselves humans. She was disgusted by their arrogance, which in its grandeur was only matched by their inane ignorance of their status among the many races in the vastness of the universe and even the multiverse. So in the end, was it truly that much of an unexpected occurance that the Primeval's patience would snap in the presence of such insanely foolish beings? Sitting on a stool in a diner at the side of a road a few miles away from the outskirts of North City, Halsey was calmly slurping up the cold liquid which was still bubbling in her glass, playfully letting the plastic straw roll over her teeth before closing her lips upon the plastic tool yet again and taking a swig of the soda she had ordered about ten minutes earlier. Her gaze turned towards the corpses littering the place, all pathetic humans that had dared to anger her and to have the misfortune of being the straw which broke the camel's back in this occassion. It didn't really matter how it all happened, how those truckers, the family on vacation with their three children, the two waitresses and the cook came to their end. It didn't matter that it was messy, bloody and brutal, that it was hard to tell which part belonged to which person and what pool or splatter of blood came from which victim, all that truly mattered to the Demon...was that it was quiet, no more interruptions, no more screaming toddlers, no more groping truckers with a breath so laden with alcohol it would overload any breathalizer. Heck, even the two cops who had arrived on the scene a few moments after she had started her rampage, were now nothing more than stains on the wall. Letting out a soft sigh of relief and joy, Halsey stood up from her stool, dropping a few coins in a severed hand laying on the counter with a chuckle escaping her lips. Without a care in the world, she calmly walked over to the exit of the diner, opening the door and taking a few paces outside. She wondered if she'd be having some afternoon exercise for herself, no doubt those cops should've passed on where they were going, maybe if Halsey was lucky...she'd actually be breaking a sweat this day. So in anticipation of whatever would dare to come her way, the woman carefully unbuckled the belt with the heavy weights from around her waist, making said belt vanish into thin air, while a large, sinister looking black and silver scythe materialized itself onto her back. Same went for her shimmering golden garments which she kept atop her extremely weighty clothes, tossing those aside while manifesting a small cap on her left forearm which looked oddly smilar to a beetle's backside. Stretching a bit, Halsey let out a moan when the vertebrea in her back started to pop. " I really need something better than those inferior lowlives to have some fun."
P.S. If I'm missing something, don't worry and call me out on it.
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Post by Cauli on Aug 2, 2021 4:55:21 GMT -5
Notes for Monitor | 189,162 | [No+Extra+Stuff]
Having once again wandered away from Kame house to avoid the lecherous staring of the ageing but irritatingly skilled Master Roshi, Cauli found herself several miles away from North City on a road that was eerily quiet. It wasn't until she got closer to the small cluster of buildings that she understood why there wasn't the normal hamlet sounds. Someone, or something had killed everyone. In fact, as Cauli approached she could see that something taking its belt off before materialising what looks suspiciously like a reaper's scythe. Was this woman actually Death? If that was the case, perhaps Death would care to test its might against a vengeance demon.
"I didn't realise reapers were supposed to make such a mess," said Cauli as she approached. As she did so, the air around her began to swirl as her her hair stood on end and took on an electric pink hue. At the same time, Cauli's canines elongated to resemble fangs. The rune on her wrist began to glow with power as well, ready to call forth its weapon the instant that Cauli deemed it necessary.
"Fun? I could definitely go for some fun," said Cauli with a grin.
She closed the distance to the reaper in mere moments and brought her elbow up as the did so. The culmination of the blow was aimed at the bridge of the girl's nose, the side of Cauli's elbow swinging in a round motion to avoid the nerve cluster at the point. The blow was made heavier by Cauli's bodyweight, all of which was placed behind the strike. As soon as she had delivered the strike, Cauli withdrew. She pivoted on the ball of her foot with as much speed and strength as she could muster, attempting to deliver a roundhouse kick to the side of the reaper's head.
"Why don't you show me what you're made of?" said Cauli, her pulse racing with excitement at being in the heat of battle.
Actions
Free- N/A
1- Handicap
2- Majin = [-0%]Ki
3- SA = [-0%]Ki
4- SA = [0%]Ki
Remaining Ki | 100%
Cauli | [Bonuses+Fatigued]
Power Level: 223,898 -> [167,923]Current
Ki: 111,949
Strength: 28,331 -> 21,248
Speed: 32,818 -> 24,614
Toughness: 30,620 -> 22,965
Stamina: 27,210 -> 20,407 - 0
Vitality: 27,569 -> 20,677
Determination: 4062 -> 4468
Charisma: 473 -> 520
Intelligence: 473 -> 520
Notes
[12%] | Damage reduction
[+0] | Counters
[+10%] Chance of Crit (Flat)
[-10%] Chance of Receiving Crit (Flat)
Prepared Items | [0/0]
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Post by Dr. Ghast on Aug 5, 2021 10:24:20 GMT -5
72h on RemWell, that was a surprise, someone did actually appear quite rapidly, making it unnecessary to actually go out and find someone to play with. Not to mention, Halsey recognised the child's face, that arrogant saiyan appearance with demon blood running through its veins, it was not something she'd forget that easily. Alas, as Halsey was still mulling over the rather confusing combination of saiyan exterior and demonic aura, she missed the fact that the girl had already begun to tap into her powers, only able to utter a few words before the inevitable happened..." What the?" The sheer force within that single elbow strike knocked the demoness backwards, the shock of the impact reverberating in her skull. However, due to the fact Halsey had cleanched her hand around the shaft of her scythe, having driven the weapon's bottom end into the ground earlier, she didn't drop back far enough to actually avoid the incoming roundhouse, which instantly changed the direction in which the demoness was falling, slamming into the ground with a loud thud, followed by her scythe clanging down next to her. " Allright, should've seen that coming..." Jumping straight up again, Halsey looked at the opposing party, tilting her head a bit to the side while flashing a rather sinister grin filled with glee. It certainly looked like she couldn't take this one as easy as she'd been doing with all those lowly humans, this was a demon after all. With a calm sigh, the woman snapped her fingers, instantly removing all the weighted parts of her outfit. " Let's try this again" Without a single warning, the Primeval launched herself towards Cauli, lowering her scythe to the ground upon reaching the fledgling demon, only to make an attempt to swing the scythe's blade upwards in an attempt to bisect Cauli from bottom to top, at which point Halsey would use the momentum of her swing to perform a backflip kick with the intent of smacking her left foot against the young demon's chin. As she landed back to her feet, Halsey hoped to surprise Cauli by suddenly spinning on the ball of her right foot, using the momentum of her swift turn to allow her scythe to slide all the way to the butt-end of her scythe to maximize her reach for a rather rough swing aimed towards her opponent's shoulder with the back end of the scythe. " If this is all your generation of demon's can muster..." The Primeval chuckled, a mad grin plastered upon her face. " This won't be much fun...for me."
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Post by Cauli on Aug 7, 2021 22:04:43 GMT -5
Notes for Monitor | 189,162 | [No+Extra+Stuff]
Cauli had scarcely enough time to congratulate herself before the reaper's blade tore a large hole in her tunic and impacted against the armoured layer beneath. The force of the blow was immense and Cauli found herself staggering backwards, though not a sufficient enough distance to avoid the follow up kick that snapped her head back and guaranteed that she would be sore in the morning. Such was the force of the kick that Cauli didn't even really notice the butt strike save for the extra pain in her shoulder when she recovered.
"Pity," was all Cauli said in response to the reaper's words. She was having a great time.
Keeping in close to the reaper, she fired two quick body shots before changing angles and sending another two body shots towards the same spot. She had adopted a much more stand up style of late, a change from what was previously a very grapple-heavy style. After what had happened with the student on Kelioux, she had realised that she needed to be more of a damage dealer than a controller lest she get distracted and forget that she was supposed to be fighting her opponent rather than engaging in other activities. Remaining close in to the reaper, Cauli tried to throw a headbutt by grabbing the reaper's top and pulling her closer at the same time that she was leaning forward with her forehead.
"I'm just getting warmed up!" said Cauli.
Actions
Free- N/A
1- Handicap
2- QA x 2 = [-0%]Ki
3- QA x 2 = [-0%]Ki
4- SA = [0%]Ki
Remaining Ki | 100%
Cauli | [Bonuses+Fatigued]
Power Level: 223,898 -> [167,923]Current
Ki: 111,949
Strength: 28,331 -> 21,248
Speed: 32,818 -> 24,614
Toughness: 30,620 -> 22,965
Stamina: 27,210 -> 20,407 - 0
Vitality: 27,569 -> 20,677
Determination: 4062 -> 4468
Charisma: 473 -> 520
Intelligence: 473 -> 520
Notes
[12%] | Damage reduction
[+0] | Counters
[+10%] Chance of Crit (Flat)
[-10%] Chance of Receiving Crit (Flat)
Prepared Items | [0/0]
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Post by Amelia on Aug 9, 2021 23:50:38 GMT -5
Rem was out and about in North City, running some errands for her lord, Roswaal. The Day started out relatively uneventful, simply purchasing groceries and some other miscellaneous things from the department store that the man said he needed. It was about an hour of shopping until she was on her way back to return to Roswaal’s housing in West City. The Oni demon walked down the streets and looked around for a taxi driver to hail down before feeling a disturbance in the distance. Human energies quickly faded as a demonic power ascended. Rem reached to secure her morning star, but when her hand didn’t find it, she groped about, trying to get hold of her weapon. “Where is my-“ the recollection that it was still laying in her closet when she left flashed in her mind. The Demon scoffed in contempt for her folly.
Driven out of the concern and morbid curiosity, Rem sought to follow the disturbance at its source. The aura was not only imposing in its magnitude but there was something more to it. Feeling the presence, she felt not only ominous but also malignant and harrowing. She also felt another presence that felt demonic but a different strain of Demon and vestiges of other things. The blue-haired Oni arrived at the scene and hid behind the corner of a building as she watched the two demons engage one another, assessing the situation and who her target should be. Then her eyes widened as she remembered something. That woman with the sharp bangs, she remembered seeing her in Galactic news she had fought against the Fallen in the war.
Between that, along with the fact that Cauli wasn’t the one with blood on her and didn’t express murderous intent in her visage Rem understood that Halsey was the real threat. The Oni demon circled around the two demons fighting. She held a hand out while observing them, waiting for Cauli to finish her combination before she shot her hand out fired a volley of ice spikes at Halsey as she rushed in to close the distance between her and the Demon. “I’m here to help.” Rem said to Cauli while still pursuing Halsey. Once she was in the adequate range, Rem swung at ki empowered punch at the dark-haird woman’s jaw.
A1) Equip Ki Knuckles
A2) Energy Dan[-7%ki][DR: 2]
A3) Blast Punch[-2%ki][DR: 2]
A4) Handicap
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Post by Dr. Ghast on Aug 10, 2021 8:59:07 GMT -5
It looked like this opponent was just as stubborn and keen on showing their tenacity as she was, making the Primeval actually swallow her own words. This woman was fun, this opponent was...delightful. Heaving over when she could feel the young demon's first to body shots hitting her, Halsey found it all to be rather exhilarating, even when another pair of bodyshots connected with her, forcing the primeval to slightly lean forward before feeling the sensation of her garments being held onto, immediately followed by what Halsey could only describe as yet again a seeringly sharp pain reverberating through her face when the young demon managed to smash her nose with a well placed headbutt, thus ripping part of Halsey's clothes as she reeled backwards. " Again with the nose!!" Laughing out loud in a fit of rage and madness, the primordial demon's ki expanded yet again, allowing her to utilize the full force of her power without forcing it to its maximum state. Alas it didn't seem she would just be dealing with the demon who looked like a saiyan, as from the corners of her eyes she could suddenly see a whole bunch of ice spikes be launched in her direction, pelting her like someone had been throwing a handful of grit at her; not exactly as painful as it should be, but extremely annoying and somewhat distracting. " Serious, what now?" As the smoke from the sudden surprise attack was still clearing, Halsey closed her eyes and focused, allowing her own aura to act as her senses in order to make sure she wouldn't be caught off guard by this new piece on the board. The moment she could feel this newcomer's energy piercing the veil of her own aura, the primordial demon's entire upper body almost instantaneously leaned backwards to avoid the incoming ki-laced punch, all the while cupping her own right hand with the intent to counter the attack with a palm strike aimed towards Rem's exposed gut at full force, hoping to at the very least maintain some distance between them. Now that it had turned into a two versus one, Halsey had to be sharper, more aware of her surroundings and perhaps a bit more cautious with her opponents. However, with now being beset upon by two opponents, it also meant there was no more need to hold back and continue calculating her opponents' strength. After all, she already had a rough idea of how strong this Cauli was and the newcomer was strong, but not exactly a changing factor in the whole scheme. Letting out another mad laugh, Halsey vanished from her position, reappearing right in front of Cauli, swinging down her Scythe yet again in a diagonal hew towards the saiyan-like demon, with the blade of the weapon shimmering sinisterly. However, she wasn't done yet, as she let go of the weapon with one hand, allowing it to swing further away from Cauli, utilizing her now freed up hand to fire two thin beams of black energy at a blinding speed towards the newcomer in a maid uniform, hoping to at the very least keep her at a distance while she continued dealing with the demon who looked like a saiyan. Doing that, Halsey instantly grabbed the butt end of the scythe again, gripping the weapon yet again with both hands as she vanished yet again, reappearing behind Cauli in the air, swinging the blade at the young demon whilst letting gravity aid her, attempting to cut Cauli from her shoulder to her gut in one fell swoop...or swing in this case.
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Post by Cauli on Aug 13, 2021 23:35:13 GMT -5
Notes for Monitor | 189,162 | [No+Extra+Stuff]
There was something satisfying about hitting something with your fists and hitting something four times was definitely four times as satisfying, as was the feeling of the reaper's fleshy nose connecting with Cauli's hard forehead. This got the reaper's attention, it would seem, for she cried out in frustration that Cauli had once again hit her in the nose.
"Don't worry," said Cauli, a coy smile crossing her face, "I'd still do you."
It was at this point that some interloper starting chucking ice at them - well, at the reaper anyway. A quick glance over her shoulder informed Cauli that the interloper was a maid of some description, at least based on her choice of attire. Maybe she was one of those convention sorts. Or maybe a hooker. With a quick promise that she was here to help, the hooker swung a ki-enhanced fist at the reaper's face to no avail.
The reaper responded with her own strike, before bringing the scythe to bear against Cauli once more. The vengeance demon gritted her teeth with annoyance at the use of what she genuinely believed was a weapon for reaping souls. The rune on Cauli's hand glowed as a shoto blade emerged from it. This shadowy blade was only partially visible, as though its blade was made from black smoke. It sprang to life just in time for Cauli to use it defensively to block the scythe strike. Gripping the handle with both hands, she moved it quickly to block the follow-up attack as the reaper looked to keep both ladies engaged with a combination of ki attacks and weapon attacks. Cauli certainly felt engaged, but she would see how the reaper liked it when Cauli stranded her between dimensions for a moment.
She went down on one knee and thrust the blade high towards the reaper's stomach, holding the handle in both hands for stability and accuracy. If it connected, the reaper would find herself momentary stranded between dimensions with otherworldly energy tearing at her body as both dimensions attempted to drag her fully into one or the other.
ActionsFree- N/A1- Handicap2- Block A2 = [ -0%]Ki 3- Block A5 = [ -0%]Ki 4- Dimensional Strike = [ 3]DR | [ 0%]Ki [ Link] Remaining Ki | 100%
Cauli | [Bonuses+Fatigued]
Power Level: 223,898 -> [167,923]Current
Ki: 111,949
Strength: 28,331 -> 21,248
Speed: 32,818 -> 24,614
Toughness: 30,620 -> 22,965
Stamina: 27,210 -> 20,407 - 0
Vitality: 27,569 -> 20,677
Determination: 4062 -> 4468
Charisma: 473 -> 520
Intelligence: 473 -> 520
Notes
[12%] | Damage reduction
[+0] | Counters
[+10%] Chance of Crit (Flat)
[-10%] Chance of Receiving Crit (Flat)
Prepared Items | [0/0]
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Post by Joseph Wilson on Aug 16, 2021 23:23:44 GMT -5
The ice spikes from the blue-haired demon managed to hit their mark but, the reaper managed to dodge Rem’s ki empowered blow before retaliating with an open palm. The Maid’s stomach contracted, and her mouth gaped open as the air was pushed out her lunges by the forceful strike. The demon stumbled and slid on her feet before leaning forward to regain her footing.
Halsey escaped her sights for a moment before appearing near the Saiyan and attempting to strike her with her sythe; fortunately, the Saiyan-looking demon managed to guard against it. The reaper’s attention then turned back to the Oni as she fired two more blasts at the demon. Their speed caught her by surprise, and the beams exploded against her and tattered her uniform.
The reaper turned her attention back to the demonic Saiyan, who managed to block again before manifesting another weapon and striking back with it. Rem moved closer to the two and circled Halsey to get an angle of attack in which she could fire without the risk of hitting Cauli. She stuck her hand out and shot another half dozen ice spikes at Halsey, trying to pepper on more damage from a distance. As she moved in, she fired a set of six ice blasts to give her cover until the adversary was in her reach. Once she was close enough, Rem spun and swung her leg to kick the side of Halsey’s knee, hoping to make her leg buckle down and immobilize her for a moment.
Free) Take A1,3, and 4
A1) Energy Dan[-7%ki][DR 3]
A2) Energy Dan[-7%ki][DR 3]
A3) Dynamite Kick[-2%ki][DR 1]
A4) handicap
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Post by Dr. Ghast on Aug 17, 2021 0:28:54 GMT -5
Dealing with two opponents at once, no matter the difference in power was always going to be quite a hassle, especially when one of them managed to go toe to toe with Halsey even though she thought of herself as clearly superior in every possible aspect. The Primeval wasn't sure if it was her own hubris or this fledgling demon's actions that got the better of her during the course of this little spat, but one thing was becoming quite clear: there was no longer any room for playing around or toying with her food, it was time to take it all serious. It was for this reason that Halsey largely ignored the gnawing feeling of disappointment when despite her blitzing, the pink-haired demon youngling managed to block her assault with the use of her trusted scythe, surely there was no way that there wouldn't be any damage when blocking such strikes, but the fact that the youngling managed to mitigate the damage was already both frustrating and impressive at the same time. To make matters worse, the young demon seemed to retaliate, with that other dressed up pest still flitting about and apparently looking for an opening. Annoyed by this fact, the Primeval's glanced at the incoming strike with the puny little blade, reaching up with her free hand to block and intercept the incoming strike with the dagger, a bit of pain could always work its magic on her own focus after all, even if for a moment she seemed to lose all connection with the world around her. " This farce has gone long enough..." As pellets of ice peppered her, Halsey's own ki yet again started to rise and swell up, a stylized red 'M' appearing on her forehead as half of her usually black hair turned silver, the hue of her eyes now permanently drenched in a bloodred hue. All the while keeping her senses clear to maintain some semblance of a tag on the gnat that seemed adamant on aiding the fake saiyan. " Allright, that's about enough of you," Not even dignifying the incoming kick to her knee, Halsey looked down upon the demoness dressed like some ordinary maid. As the Primeval smirked, suddenly it seemedf there were two of her, both looking down upon the pest that had dared to try and hurt her. While she reached for her back with her scythe, allowing it to fit snugly in the folds of her garments, Halsey suddenly performed two swift jabs with her right hand towards the Rem's gut, quickly followed by another pair of consecutive jabs with the same hand aimed at the blue haired girl's upper chest area, before switching to use her left hand to aim a quick punch towards the dressed up demon's nose. However, the powered-up Primeval wasn't done yet, as she instantly swung her right hand towards Rem's throat with a stretched out hand, seemingly intending to just cut right through the girl's throat, which would be swiftly followed by a hard and straight uppercut aimed at Rem's chin with her right hand. Halsey would then use the momentum of this move to turn with her side towards the Maid, aiming to plant her right elbow into the girl's side, right under what would be the girl's ribcage.
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Post by Cauli on Aug 17, 2021 22:17:54 GMT -5
Notes for Monitor | 189,162 | [No+Extra+Stuff]
As the reaper transformed and turned her attention, Cauli felt a pang of jealousy. Was she that insignificant that this reaper wouldn't even look at her? If she wasn't looking at Cauli then, what good were her eyes?
"Hey!" said Cauli, annoyance written across her every feature, "I was here first! Stop ignoring me. Irah Atam!"
A flash of light erupted across the area, targeting the eyes of her prey in an attempt to burn them from their very sockets. Nobody ignored her and got away with it! In the wake of the flash, she summoned a demonic blade to her hand in the way that had been taught to her. This didn't require the use of a sigil but it also didn't last as long.
Assuming as she always did that everything had gone according to plan, Cauli applied no finesse to her attack, instead chopping her ki-enveloped hand down towards the right shoulder of the reaper with reckless abandon. To Cauli, the assumption that the reaper was nor blind meant that she was defenceless, so Cauli hoped that the attack would do sufficient damage that she could then follow up with her spinning purple blades of death - perhaps even the ultimate form of that attack.
Actions
Free- N/A
1- Handicap
2- Solar Flare = [Blind]CE (+10% chance) | [2 Action Blind + 2 Action Stun] | [-4%]Ki
3- Towa's Signature Ki Sword = [-7%]Ki
4- WA = [5]DR | [0%]Ki
Remaining Ki | 89%
Cauli | [Bonuses+Fatigued]
Power Level: 223,898 -> [166,734]Current
Ki: 111,949
Strength: 28,331 -> 21,248
Speed: 32,818 -> 24,614
Toughness: 30,620 -> 22,965
Stamina: 27,210 -> 20,407 - 1,393
Vitality: 27,569 -> 20,677
Determination: 4062 -> 4468
Charisma: 473 -> 520
Intelligence: 473 -> 520
Notes
[12%] | Damage reduction
[+0] | Counters
[+10%] Chance of Crit (Flat)
[-10%] Chance of Receiving Crit (Flat)
Prepared Items | [0/0]
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Post by Joseph Wilson on Aug 18, 2021 21:43:58 GMT -5
Rem’s ice peppered the mysterious demon yet again, but rather than feeling satisfaction from her attack hitting her mark, the blue haired demon felt worry as Halsey’s energy surged and a familiar mark manifested on her forehead. The Maid had suspected that the woman would have a greater sense of urgency under the pressure of having two enemies attacking at once and Rem knew she had to be wary of this opponent taking them seriously
Rem’s kicked crashed and exploded against the knee of Halsey, however her knee didn’t yield and buckle to the explosive force but instead she moved swiftly seeming to split into two b efore Rem felt her body being pounded by a volley of blows crashing into her stomach and chest, driving her to stumble back while air was being forced out her lungs before feeling a set of punch slam into her nose making her head snap back.
The abuse didn’t end there as she felt a knife hand strike connect to her throat making the Oni gasp for air, before a uppercut and elbow exploded against her and made her fall to the ground where she lied before she heard Cauli yelling to not be ignored and saying some sort of incantation. Before the Oni could get to her feet, the demonic looking Saiyan demanded Halsey’s attention before sending out a bright flash of light that made Rem instinctually cover her eyes and look down to the ground before the red colored woman then lash out with her weapon. The Oni figured that this woman must have been the jealous type, she was glad that she was taking it out on the dark haired woman and not her. Rem forced her self back up; the sheer pressure of her hand pressing the ground made the concrete underneath crack before she rose and rushed towards Halsey throwing a hook at her body as she lurched towards her before, hurling her other hand forward to strike Halsey’s nose with a heavy straight punch, before lifting her leg and snapping it forward to send her back with a push kick.
Free) Take all like a Grim Bro
]A1) Blast Punch
A2) Blast Punch
A3) SA[Push Kick]
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Post by Puar on Aug 19, 2021 8:53:24 GMT -5
RP Award Winner: Cauli [+15% all stats]
I'm simple. Brevity is key in reading someone's writing. The one thing I struggled with was keeping up with some of the dragged out and complex sentence structures. I have the same issue in my own writing as well a good portion of the time, but basically I'll shoot out an example to what I mean.
"Not to mention, Halsey recognised the child's face, that arrogant saiyan appearance with demon blood running through its veins, it was not something she'd forget that easily."
That is a mouth full or mind full when reading straight forward. The lack of pauses (periods) nearly made me pass out reading outloud.
'Halsey recognised the child's face. That arrogant saiyan appearance with demon blood running through its veins was not something she'd forget that easy.'
That is kinda like what I mean by it. It is the same exact sentence with the subtraction of a few words and a clear pause added.
Cauli did well with this and it was generally easier to read and enjoy. Keep it up guys and uhh I am not good at critism so uhm.. well just take what I give you lmao.
Rem, smdh.
Damage Assessment:
Halsey:
Head-9.16%
Body-15.72%
R.Arm-5.17%
L.Arm-5.17%
R.Leg-6.73%
L.Left-6.73%
Total Damage: 8.11% [-6,494 vit]
Cauli:
Head-2.60%
Body-13.47%
R. Arm-0.00%
L. Arm-3.01%
R Leg-0.00%
L Left-0.00%
Total Damage: 3.18% [-728 vit]
Rem:
Head-20.85%
Body-37.70%
R. Arm-0.00%
L. Arm-0.00%
R Leg-0.00%
L Left-0.00%
Total Damage 9.76% [-1,228 vit]
*Note: This is my damage assessment. What you guys agree on is up to you. This allows you to know what I see your characters at. If a dispute happens, default to this assessment.
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Post by Dr. Ghast on Aug 19, 2021 16:16:02 GMT -5
" What the...?!" A moment ago she was still doing her thing, feeling superior and clearly attempting to beat down that demon girl with a maid fetish. Now though, she could see nothing, her eyes feeling like she peered into the heart of a nuclear explosion. That pink-haired demon had done something, but Halsey couldn't really figure it out, everything just went white in a flash and now she was struggling to even see the outliers of her surroundings, having to rely completely on her other senses while her eyes felt like they were melting. However, being blinded, losing one's sight, was not the end of it all. She still had her sense of ki, she could still figure out roughly where her opponents were and in cases like this. That should've been more than enough to at the very least make Halsey less of a sitting duck and more of a wounded tiger...and you don't try to approach a wounded tiger without caution. Within an instant, she could sense the energy and Ki rising within the one she surmised to be the brat that blinded her. Letting her own aura flare up slightly, the Primeval awaited the opportune moment to utilize one of her special abilities she had kept as a momentary trump card. When she could feel and hear the brat move towards her, Halsey stretched out her hands, feeling the incoming energy, the heat of ki intended to slice her into pieces and worked her magic. She'd simply rip away that ki and reform it into a temporary shield of flames to protect herself. As if on cue, the girl with a maid fetish didn't seem to have any intent on letting the opportunity to get in a few hits slide. While her signature was far weaker and harder to focus on, it was still large enough to somewhat predict and act upon her plans. Halsey minced no words and wasted no time on what came next, sensing her opponent's outlying form, smelling her scent, hearing her breath, it was all too easy. When the first punch came her way, the Primeval merely crossed her arms downwards to take on the full impact of the vicious hook thrown by Rem. The straight punch aimed at her face would only brush Halsey's hair, as she swiftly tilted her head to the left to avoid taking in the brunt of that punch, all the while wondering if that pest really thought she'd take another hit to the nose again. Lastly though, despite feeling confident in her sensing ability, without any real sight and realying on the Ki of her opponents, Halsey couldn't see the incoming kick, which though not truly painful or devastating still landed on her and made her slide a few feet backwards. |
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Post by Cauli on Aug 19, 2021 22:17:08 GMT -5
Notes for Monitor | 189,162 | [No+Extra+Stuff]
As the flash of light went off in the eyes of the reaper, her startled cry gave Cauli an instant sense of satisfaction. Now perhaps she would start paying attention to the vengeance demon. Flames erupted from the site of the ki sword strike as it hit, surprising Cauli. She believed for just a moment that the reaper had literal fire in her veins. A fleeting moment later, Cauli felt foolish. Of course, it wasn't actual fire. She had just tried to transmute the ki construct. Cauli herself could do the same thing. A fraction of a moment later, the maid went on the offensive. Her strike triggered the shield of flame in a manner that had Cauli wincing in sympathy. Her sympathy was short lived, however, as the reaper was STILL IGNORING HER!
"I said," Cauli spat, her rage building, "Stop. Ignoring. Me!"
She moved closer to the reaper, intending to make it pay for turning its back on her. Two precision slices, both delivered in a downward motion with an unnecessary flourish between them, would impact against the back of the reaper. They would remind her once more of the penalty for ignoring Cauli. Both slashes would look like the opening of an angled bracket, intended to be a stylised C. The reaper would be marked with the initial of the one she would spurn and she would remember!
Just scarring the reaper was not enough to satisfy Cauli's bloodlust. This reaper had to suffer. Still standing behind the creature, Cauli reached out a single hand, calling forth ki powers in the way that Grey had taught her on Kelioux. Rather than envelop the reaper in these crushing ki energies, Cauli chose to go a little more specific. The reaper had complained earlier about the repeated blows to the face - now she would experience all the crushing energy of Grey's signature technique across every square inch of her face and neck! Let her voice be taken along with her sight for daring to cross the vengeance demon!
Actions
Free- N/A
1- WA = [5]DR | [0%]Ki
2- WA = [5]DR | [0%]Ki
3- Grey's Signature Demiton Bomb = [Crush]CE (+10% chance) | [7]Dr | [-12%]Ki
4- Handicap
Remaining Ki | 77%
Cauli | [Bonuses+Fatigued]
Power Level: 223,898 -> [184,356]Current
Ki: 111,949
Strength: 28,331 -> 23,971
Speed: 32,818 -> 27,644
Toughness: 30,620 -> 25,622
Stamina: 27,210 -> 23,020 - 3,104
Vitality: 27,569 -> 23,325 - 728
Determination: 4062 -> 4468
Charisma: 473 -> 520
Intelligence: 473 -> 520
Notes
[12%] | Damage reduction
[+0] | Counters
[+10%] Chance of Crit (Flat)
[-10%] Chance of Receiving Crit (Flat)
Prepared Items | [0/0]
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Post by Dr. Ghast on Aug 22, 2021 22:30:53 GMT -5
72H on Rem It took some time, but finally...finally Halsey could see more than just the damn outliers of her opponents' physical forms, though her eyes still stung quite a bit, no longer being visually impaired was quite the relief. This was especially the case when it looked like the pink haired youth she was facing was still not done with the assault upon her. Having little time to think about it, the Primeval simply allowed her ki to yet again do the fighting for her, covering herself completely with her own aura. With her own energy guiding her, sensing her surroundings, it did not take long for Cauli's Ki sword to touch the Primeval's own aura. As soon as this happened, Halsey leaned slightly forward and with her feet sliding over the ground, she made a quarter turn to the left, making sure she'd avoid the first incoming slash by a hair's width, retaliating with a hard palmstrike straight towards the pink-haired demon's face. However, as it seemed that another slash was inbound, the Primeval yet again found her body driving her forward. The primeval fell down backwards onto the ground to avoid the incoming swing, while she retaliated by performing a kangaroo kick with both feet aimed at Cauli's knees. Thinking this would at the very least slow down the young demon, Halsey displayed a somewhat gleeful smirk upon her bloodied face, yet fate really did like to knock her down again. While she was rolling backwards to get back onto her feet as fast as possible, it looked like her opponent was preparing quite the show for her. She could feel the energy crackling in the air, the feeling of dread making her spine tingle. As she couldn't formulate or calculate any proper strategy in this situation, Halsey had to rely on her instincts to get out of this particular situation and those very instincts were screaming at her, both figuratively and quite literally. Instantly the Primeval's mouth opened wide, letting out an earpiercing wail akin to that of a banshee in order to dissipate any and all concentration of Ki in the air and as she closed her mouth again, she huffed while yet again displaying that gleeful smirk. " You want attention...well, so be it." With the thought that her opponent wouldn't be fully prepared after just being thwarted in launching some sort of energy based attack, Halsey launched herself towards Cauli at full speed. She reached for her scythe at the last moment, swinging it down diagonally with the intent to cleave the young demon in twain from shoulder to hip, before utilizing the momentum of her swing to perform a forward kick aimed at the girl's chest. Letting go of the scythe with one hand, still somewhat twirling in the air due to her momentum, Halsey suddenly vanished from sight, reappearing a few feet away from the pink haired demon with an outstretched arm, two fingers pointing at the demon's head. The Primeval's energy had started to swell up and would be unleashed in the form of a large, black blast aimed towards Cauli. " ...bang." |
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